Wednesday, 29 March 2017

18. OS 18. Too Tempting to Resist (Part 18)

Part 18



ASR stood at the foot of the stairs, waiting for the Guptas to arrive. Akash polished his specs and gazed longingly at the open door, eager for a sight of his beloved.

"Akass bitwaa, you are not supposed to attend the mehendi function," nani informed him.

"Nani!" Akash's face was a picture of desolation.

Nani smiled. "But we will let you."

"Nani, you are the best," Akash gushed, hugging her fondly.

Arnav stood by them, his entire focus on the guests entering through the open door.

"The Guptas are here," he said quietly.

As the Raizadas rushed to the door to welcome the Guptas, his eyes sought the slim, colourful figure of the firebrand that was Khushi.

She was missing.

Nani asked the question that was on his lips.

"Where is Khussi bitiya?" nani asked.

"She is not well, Nandkisore," buaji explained.

"She was ready to come here with us, but..." Garima paused.

"She must have eaten too many jalebis yesterday," buaji concluded.

The Raizadas ladies sympathised with an absent Khushi.

"She will miss her jiji's mehendi!" Anjali lamented.

"She promised to come here by Happyji's rickshaw if she felt better," Garima replied.

The wheels of ASR's brain turned as fast as light. It sounded like one of Khushi's flop plans to avoid him. His eyes narrowed. How dare she keep him waiting? How dare she try to avoid him?






ASR walked up the steps to the entrance of buaji's home in Laxmi Nagar on soft feet. Not that it mattered. He could have marched up the steps wearing military boots and she wouldn't have heard. The TV was on loud.

ASR peeked in through the open window.

Khushi was lolling on a chair, her legs hooked over one arm of the chair. She had a jalebi in one hand and the remote in the other. She was laughing out loud, her eyes on the TV screen.

This was the ill Khushi?

ASR clenched his jaw in anger. She had lied to stay at home? She had deliberately misled her family to avoid him?

He leaned forward to have a glimpse of the TV screen.

Tom and Jerry!

This ladki! he fumed. Unbelievable! Really? Tom and Jerry!

He strode to the door and banged on it.


Darling KC's vision:




26 comments:

  1. Wah!!! Kya entry hai. ASR ruining her time with Tom and Jerry❤

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  2. Thanks for posting smita, we were worried for awhile ven there was no update from ur side for long time...... hope u doing fine

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  3. Omg it's hilarious. Arnav used to want to avoid ms khushi Kumari Gupta. And now he's personally offended that she is avoiding him lmao! And this adorable child-woman, Tom and jerry really? Lol.

    Thanks for posting Smitar. Missed you!

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  4. Hey smita,
    Good to know that you r fine. Was worried since you didnt update for long
    Atlast Tom n Jerry games begin. Will the sanki khushi outwit the laad governor? Lol

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  5. Loved the update. Khushi running away from him and he is running after her. Can just imagine her face when she realises who it is, please update, eagerly awaiting in anticipation.

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  6. Welcome back Smita.short update.tom and Jerry will be played outside d TV screen now.waiting eagerly

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  7. Entry ho toh aisi...Khussi bitiya tu toh gayi😁😁

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  8. Super awesome. Looking forward to the ASR Tom and Khushi Jerry chase...

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  9. Hey Smita Thanks for update...

    Loved to see ASR v/s KKG(Tom V/s Jerry)

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  10. Yay! Found my way to your new home. Finally!!! Loved the update.

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  12. Can I post pics. here? I tried but it didn't work out.

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  13. Awwww! Kudi Tu toh gayi...
    Is this blog protected?

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  14. LOOOOOOL!!!!!! I love the end. I could not stop laughing. Keep it up Smita. Absolutely very very hilarious and so is ASR's reaction.

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  15. Tom and Jerry,LOL!)))) Hilarious, Smitaji! Akass bitwaa waited openly for his beloved, and ASR - hiding his longing under brutality)

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  16. Glad to see that you are fine Smitha! The update was hilarious!

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  17. Hahahaha 😂😂😂😂😂 he's freaking annoyed with her 'excuse' to not come and she's busy lounging around watching Tom and Jerry! 😂😂😂😂 waiting for the fireworks 💥 💥 Loving this!

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  18. https://s3.amazonaws.com/pq-imgs/images/quizzes/tom-and-jerry.jpg-9999.jpg

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  19. Haha haha...can't stop laughing....this is interesting.....these two are no less than Tom and Jerry...awesome chapter

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  20. God help Khushi. Arnav is already angry and now to find her watching tom and jerry and hale snd hearty. ....she is in for it now :)

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  21. Loved all your stories smita....just read ur other blog stories and came here.
    It was a great pleasure
    Thank you

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  23. Tom and Jerry, really? Why does she have to watch them when her and ASR's antics are much hilarious and so akin to the dynamic duo? Great update, Smitaji!

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  24. Caught up with the new story and the new blog!! And what an update to start off things here!! Loving it!!

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  25. Mam, where can I find the previous chapters? And you are amazing, I really love all your works from before though I don't know from where can I read more of it...

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    1. Same question!! How to access the other parts of this book.

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