Sunday, 31 December 2017

18. OS 19. His Elusive Lover (Part 18)

                                                          HAPPY NEW YEAR!





Part 18




Arnav dressed for dinner, his mind filled with plans and strategies to nail Shyam.

The bullet had been shot by a sniper who had taken position in the empty mansion adjacent to his. His detectives had found Sinha’s residence broken in to and had found footprints on the steps leading to the terrace. He had contacted the Commissioner and given him the details and pressed on him the need for confidentiality and secrecy.

Arnav stood before the mirror, his eyes on his image, but his mind on Khushi. 

What if the bullet had hit Khushi?

His eyes grew cold as ice, his fists clenched, his whole body tensed and his muscles coiled tighter than steel wires.

No, that was not acceptable.

He turned to look at Khushi in her room through the open connecting door.

She was asleep, her hands curled up under her chin, her body in a foetal position. Her unbound hair lay spread on the white pillow like a waterfall. Long lashes shielded her lovely eyes. The pinkness of her plump lips owed nothing to artifice. Her plump cheeks looked as soft and pristine as a baby’s.

She screamed innocence, purity, all that was good in the world. She trusted him. She, a sheltered, young, naive, inexperienced girl, trusted him so much that she had asked to leave the door between their bedrooms open.

He swallowed hard.

And he was putting her in danger to trap a rat like Shyam! The extent to which he had imposed on Khushi and put her life in peril struck him keenly. He looked away, ashamed of himself, feeling contempt for himself. He ought to let her go home to her family, free her from this dangerous game.

But Shyam? He had to be dealt with.

He drew in a deep breath. The game was in its last stage. It was better to see it through.

He turned and walked into Khushi’s room to stand by her bed.

“Khushi,” he called.

She woke up with a jerk.

“Arnavji?” she asked, sitting up and brushing hair out of her eyes.

“It is almost time for dinner,” he said quietly.

Her face paled.

“I am going down now,” he said tonelessly. “You get dressed and wait in my room. I will send HP to call you. Khushi, come down only when HP knocks on the door to my room.”

“Ji,” she agreed, not understanding what was going on.

He looked into her anxious eyes.

“Trust me,” he said quietly.

“I do,” she said directly, immediately, without even a moment’s thought.

He looked down at his hands. What wouldn’t he give to strangle Shyam till he died!

The PI called. Arnav left the room to take the call.





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His family was gathered in the living room.

As Arnav walked up to them, Shyam asked, “Saalesaheb, you are all alone? That’s a rare sight these days. Tut tut, where have you misplaced your darling Khushiji?”

Anjali laughed at her husband’s wit.

Mami muttered, “Hello Hi Bye Bye, I bill crush you under my six-inch heelwaa,” under her breath.

“Ghatiya aadmi,” nani fumed in a whisper.

Akash clenched his jaw to stop himself from saying what he thought of Shyam and mama’s eyes showed the utter contempt he felt for Shyam.

“I am glad that all of you are here. I need to talk to you about something very important,” Arnav said, his eyes on mami, nani, mama and Akash who had already been notified of the events to unfold.

They nodded at him.

“Arre bhai, what is this? An announcement? Should we be scared?” Shyam asked, trying to sound funny and genial, but his eyes revealing his frustration and anger at the failing of his plans.

Arnav ignored him and went on, “Somebody tried to kill me today.”

All gasped.

Shyam squirmed. He had expected Arnav to hide the incident from his family.

“Tum kya keh rahe ho, Chotey?” Anjali asked, her big eyes wide with fear.

“The truth,” Arnav said shortly. “A sniper shot at me and narrowly missed me.”

Shyam frowned. “Really, Saalesaheb? Are you sure you didn’t imagine it?”

The whole family glared at him, with the exception of Anjali.

“The police thinks I didn’t,” Arnav said wryly.

Shyam gulped. “You informed the police?” he asked, his heart in his mouth.

“Of course,” Arnav said easily. “They have identified the sniper as Munna Shehzad and hope to arrest him by tomorrow.”

Shyam sat frozen in his seat.

“The police are sure that once they interrogate him, they can arrest the mastermind behind the murder attempt. Munna is just a killer for hire, a tool,” Arnav said, cool as a cucumber.

Anjali lowered her head and rested her forehead on her hand. “My head is spinning, Chotey. What is happening in our house?” she asked.

“I would like to know who that coward is,” nani said sternly.

“I bill beat him with a brooms dipped in gobar. How dare he looks at hamre Arnav bitwaa!” mami raged.

“Who can it be, bhai?” Akash asked. “Our rivals are businessmen, not killers.”

“The police will find out soon,” Arnav said.

“I hope he gets a death sentence,” mama fumed.

“Chotey, we need to hold a pooja,” Anjali said. “I will call our family priest. There is an evil force out to destroy our family and only God’s grace can save us.”

“As you wish,” Arnav said. “There is one more thing. I have decided to transfer my property to Khushi.”

All gasped. Anjali and Shyam were genuinely shocked. The rest of the family played along.

“I gave Akash half of everything I owned when he joined me in business,” Arnav said.

All nodded.

“Yejj, you did,” mami agreed.

“I gave di everything I intended to give her when she got married,” Arnav continued. “Houses, car, jewellery and money.”

“Sahi keh rahe ho, Chotey,” nani said. “You have given her more than enough.”

“As my life is in danger, I think I should transfer everything I own to Khushi immediately. Who knows if I will survive the next attempt? I may not make it to the mandap to marry her,” Arnav said seriously.

“Sahi keh rahe ho, bitwaa,” mama said. “If something happens to you, Khussi bitiya will be left destitute.”

Shyam couldn’t see, hear or speak. Outraged at how his life was falling apart, vexed at the thought of all the money that should have come to him going to an upstart like Khushi and filled with indignation that he had put up with a nagging lame sister of a billionaire for nothing for three years, he sat there, wanting to burn down the house. He needed time...time to think and plan. His scheme of finishing off Arnav had backfired. If Munna was arrested, it would terminate his game. Munna would confess and that would be the end of everything he had planned for three years. And now Arnav was giving away his wealth to Khushi?

“Saalesaheb,” Shyam protested, “I think you are being hasty here.”

All looked at him, their eyes revealing varying degrees of misgiving, wariness and skepticism.

“You should sleep on this, think it through. What is the hurry? Giving away all your money is not to be done lightly,” Shyam said, panting, struggling to row against the current, flailing his arms and legs desperately to hang on to the wealth.

Arnav frowned. “How am I giving it away?” he asked. “I am giving it to my wife-to-be.”

“Yes, but what is the guarantee that Khushiji will stay by you. She is an outsider, not your family. I think, Saalesaheb, you should transfer it to a family member. Someone you can trust. Someone like Rani sahiba...” Shyam suggested, frantic.

The whole family smiled, seeing his desperation. Only Anjali nodded.

“Shyamji is, as usual, right, Chotey. You aren’t married yet. What if Khushiji takes your money and runs? We have to protect the family wealth,” Anjali said. “You must listen to Shyamji. His shatir lawyer brain can’t go wrong.” She simpered at her husband.

Arnav lifted one brow. “Family wealth?” he asked. “It is my personal wealth. I worked hard for it. I didn’t inherit it.”

“Bhai is, as always, absolutely right,” Akash said. “He worked for every rupee and has the right to give it to Khushiji if he wants to.”

“What if she tricks him, Akash?” Shyam and Anjali were vociferous in their protest.

“Then we will live with that betrayal,” nani stepped in. “We have put up with worse.”

Shyam gulped.

“Khussi bitiya is no crook. She is a sanskaari girl who cares a great deal for hamre Arnav bitwaa,” mama asserted.

“Those who hab jaundice bill see yellow eberybhere,” mami declared.

“Jijaji, don’t worry about bhai’s welfare. If Khushiji, as you seem to fear, runs away with bhai’s wealth, I will return everything that bhai gave me,” Akash said firmly.

Mama and mami nodded.

“I bill gib hamre Arnav bitwaa all the goldwaa he bought for me,” mami announced.

“And all the money he has invested for us,” mama said.

“And all the land he has bought me,” nani added.

Shyam could feel beads of sweat on his forehead. Munna would be arrested tomorrow. And he had about twelve hours before Arnav transferred his money and property to Khushi as the document had to be drafted, checked and signed.

Arnav had to die tonight. Shyam nodded thoughtfully. Yes, Arnav had to die tonight.

“My bhai started with nothing. He built a billion dollar business solely through his hard work and business acumen. He can do it again,” Akash asserted. “We stood by him then. We will stand by him now and always.”

“Chotey,” Anjali opened her mouth to express her doubts about Khushi, but was interrupted by the doorbell.

HP opened the door.

Aman stood there with a briefcase in his hand.

“Aman, come in,” Arnav called. “Sit down.”

Aman sat between Arnav and Akash, placed his briefcase on the table and opened it to take out a file.

Shyam had a very bad feeling about this. His wife voiced the question he wanted to ask.

“What is this?” Anjali asked sternly.

“The document transferring everything I own to Khushi,” Arnav said simply.

Shyam stared at Arnav, seeing the end of all his plotting, all his dreams of becoming rich.

“Here, sir,” Aman said quietly, placing the document and a pen before Arnav for his signature.

“Bring Khushi down to join us. Immediately,” Arnav called out to HP.

“Yes, Arnav bhaiyya,” HP said, making a quick way up the steps.

“Everything is in order, Aman?” Arnav asked softly.

“Yes, sir,” Aman replied.

Arnav began to read the document silently.

Shyam looked at Arnav and at the smiling faces of Aman, nani, mami, mama and Akash.

Fear and fury waged a battle within him.

Munna would be arrested soon. A casual glance at his phone records and his confession would indict him, Shyam Manohar Jha. Creditors were hounding him and all his hopes of getting his hands on Arnav’s money were going down the drain.

“Chotey, I think you should reconsider,” Anjali said.

Shyam sent a baleful glance her way. She was the cancer eating away at his good luck, the parasite drinking his blood, the nag who just wouldn’t quit. He was so tired of her.

All looked at Anjali.

“Khushiji is a stranger. She is not part of our family,” Anjali insisted.

Nani said with a smile, “So was your Shyamji till he married you. Khussi bitiya will become part of our family when she marries Chotey.”

Anjali was silenced.

Shyam grit his teeth.




Khushi came down the steps, dressed in a beautiful designer saree in peach.

Arnav looked up and met her eyes. She smiled at him.

Her eyes fell on Aman.

“Amanji,” she greeted him, thrilled to see him. She folded her hands and greeted him fondly, “Namaste.” Her delight in seeing her only friend was apparent to the audience.

Aman stood up and returned the greeting with a fond smile. “I came to get ASR’s sign on a very important document,” Aman said.

Before Khushi could respond, Shyam stood up hastily and shouted, “It is a conspiracy!”

All looked at him, shocked.

“Khushi is in cahoots with this sneaky Aman, Saalesaheb and they are out to fleece you. They will beggar you!” Shyam shouted.

Aman’s jaw hit the ground. Khushi looked at Shyam as though he were mad.

Arnav quietly signed the document.

Shyam snatched the paper from him and tore it into pieces. “How dare you!” he shouted. “How dare you give away your wealth to this girl, Khushi who is little better than an escort?”

Escort? What was that? Was it a new name for secretary? Khushi wondered. What wealth was he talking about? She stared at Shyam, wondering if he had gone mad.

The Raizadas had to exert great self-control not to knock Shyam down.

Arnav alone was relaxed and unperturbed. He watched the proceedings with a calm air.

“Shyamji is right. Khushi is not your family. We are,” Anjali insisted.

“She is immoral, just a piece of fluff. And you are going to throw away your fortune on her? I won’t let this happen,” Shyam insisted.

Khushi looked at Arnav.

He nodded slightly, giving her the green light.

“Whom are you calling immoral?” Khushi asked Shyam, tucking the end of her pallu in her waist, ready to do battle.

“You, Khushi!” Shyam bit out. “You may be good at giving khushi between the sheets to many men, including your Amanji and Arnavji and then pretending to be all virtuous and sanskaari. You may be able to fool the doddering idiots in this house, but you can’t fool me.”

Khushi took a deep breath and began giving the sleazebag what he deserved.

“I don’t have to pretend to be virtuous and sanskaari because I am both. But you have to pretend. You have to pretend daily to be a good husband, a good jijaji, a good damadji, even a good human being. Because you are not. You are a louse,” Khushi said, not mincing any words.

“Chotey!” Anjali shouted. She jumped up from her seat and moved towards her husband. “How dare Khushiji accuse my husband and insult him?”

Chotey sat watching the performance, his eyes and full attention on Khushi.

“Chotey, aren’t you listening to me?” Anjali asked, angry and exasperated.

“I am,” Arnav said evenly.

Khushi looked at Arnav.

He let his lashes fall to cover his eyes for a moment and then he looked straight at her.

Khushi read the sign right.

She continued, “You are a worm. Besharam, behaya aadmi! You are married to Anjaliji and living in her house, at her brother’s expense and you come knocking on my door at night? Shameless rogue!”

Anjali gasped.

“You low class girl! Just because you charmed Chotey into giving you a life, don’t think you can insult us,” Anjali shouted. “We know what you are.”

“Rani sahiba, what is the use of talking to kachra like her?” Shyam asked.

Nani made to step forward, but mami caught hold of her. “Bait, Saasumma, remember what Arnav bitwaa said,” she whispered.




“If I am kachra for working for a living, then what are you?” Khushi asked, her eyes raining fire. “Living like a parasite in your wife’s house, cheating on your wife with other women, asking for money from your saala....” Khushi bent and took her jooti in one hand. “I was hoping for a chance to do this,” she said before hitting Shyam on his head with her shoe. “You... will... try... to... kill...Arnavji, you rascal?” she asked while hitting him.

Shyam tried to protect his head, but to no avail. She was too fast for him.

“Chotey! She is mad!” Anjali screamed, trying to protect her husband. “Nani, mami, Akash, mama...”

No one lifted a finger.





Arnav sat back enjoying the rare scene of some one fighting his battle for him.

“He... works... all... day... and... night... and you...live... off him...and...then try...to kill him?” Khushi was merciless in her attack. “You... are ungrateful...you scoundrel...you... ghatiya aadmi...”

“And what are you?” Anjali asked, furious tears streaming down her face.

“You are Arnav’s mistress!” Shyam screamed.

The shock loosened Khushi’s hold on her jooti and the battered footwear fell to the ground.

“Mistress?” Khushi asked in confusion. How could she be Arnavji’s mistress? She didn’t own him and nor was he a dog or a cat for her to possess.

“Yes, rakhail. You are no better than a prostitute,” Shyam declared triumphantly.

“Yes,” Anjali seconded him.

Khushi’s mouth fell open.



Arnav sat with a clenched jaw and curled fists, waiting his turn. His eyes were on Khushi’s pale face. All the other Raizadas except Anjali were glaring at Shyam.

“How hurt my Khussi bitiya must be,” nani agonised.

“I bill kill that cockroach,” mami threatened.

As they watched, Khushi burst out laughing.

Arnav relaxed.

Trying hard to control her hilarity, Khushi gasped, “You don’t know Arnavji... Keep me as a rakhail? Him?” She chuckled. “Such...a decent man....so honourable....This is what you think of him?”

When she managed to get her amusement under control, she told Shyam and Anjali, “All men are not like you, Shyam Manohar Jha. And your brother is a far better man than you know.”

Shyam snorted. “So says a woman of loose morals.”

“If Chotey hadn’t insisted, I would have never let you set foot in this house,” Anjali fumed.

“It is his house, isn’t it?” Khushi asked, perplexed. “He wanted me to work for him. I did. That’s all.”

“Work!” Shyam said derisively. “Is being his mistress work to you?”

Anjali sniffed and looked away.

Khushi said quietly, “I would rather be Arnavji’s mistress than your wife, Shyam Manohar Jha.”

All gasped.

“I pity you from the bottom of my heart,” Khushi told Anjali. “You have a terrible man for your husband, a scumbag, a dirtball and a criminal. And you are blind to his lecherous ways, his greed and his evil intentions towards your brother. I hope Devi Maiyya shows you the right path and protects you.”

“Chotey!” Anjali screamed. “Khushi is insulting us.”

“You insulted her more,” Arnav said easily.

Khushi abandoned her fallen jooti and moved to stand by Arnav.




His phone rang. He answered the call, cut it and then said, “Badhayi ho, Shyam. The police have Munna and he is singing like a bird.”

Shyam froze. He had hoped to have some time to recoup.

“What?” Anjali asked, bemused.

“Your husband, Shyam Manohar Jha, hired Munna, a sniper to kill me,” Arnav explained.

“That’s a lie,” Anjali protested.

“Tell that to the police,” Arnav said.

The doorbell rang.

Shyam jumped.

“It is not the police, jijaji,” Arnav said sardonically. “Not yet.”

Aman opened the door and let in a middle-aged man and two women.

The older woman, built like a man, was in a colourful but cheap polyester saree. The eyes in her chicken pox-marked face were alert. The younger woman was in a cheap pink and blue lehenga, the dupatta covering almost nothing of her chest. Her rough brown hair was sprayed and set into impossible curls and her nails were painted a garish pink. Her eyebrows were drawn in an impossible arc. The curve of her thin lips was enhanced by the use of low quality, pink-orange lipstick and her teeth were paan-stained. Her skin looked coarse due to the regular use of cheap cosmetics. Though in her late twenties, she looked to be in her mid-thirties.

Shyam was rooted to the spot, his wide eyes looking wider, like the eyes of a prey hunted by a predator.

“Let me introduce Mangesh Pedgaonkar, an excellent private investigator working for me on an important case,” Arnav said. “Who are the ladies with you, Mangesh?”

“This is Billo Rani, an escort from Lucknow. With her is Malini, her pimp and protector, who runs the escort service and manages the cash book,” Mangesh explained.

“Why has he brought such women into our house, Chotey?” Anjali asked, furious beyond control. “Isn’t it enough that we have been living with your Khushiji?”

Billo Rani saved Arnav the effort of answering his di. She said, after pushing the wad of tobacco from one cheek to another, “Yeh, saali, haramkhor! Turning up your nose at us! And that too after stealing my husband! Teri baal noch loongi.”

All gasped.

“Chotey, yeh sab kya he?” nani asked faintly.

Mami helped her into a chair and whispered, “Hamre Arnav bitwaa bill manage, Saasumma. I am seeing the lightwaa at the end of the tunnelwaa.”

“Husband?” Anjali asked, a look of disgust on her refined face. “I steal your husband? You must be joking.”

“Hum kauno jokerwaa laage he tumhe?” Billo Rani asked, spitting paan juice on the marble floor at Anjali’s feet.

Anjali jumped a few steps back.

“Yeh he humre pati parmesswar, humre Chintu ke papa!” Billo Rani claimed, pointing at Shyam.

All stared at Shyam, their mouths open, except for the detective and Arnav.

“Hum pet se the, tho Malini jiji ne Shyam babu se kaha, saadi kar lio. Naahi to gardanwaa pe sar naahi honge. Ye humse saadi banaye. Aur mahine do mahine mein aate bhi the. Lekin hamri phooti kismet! Ye kalmui ne hamre pati parmeswar ko udda liye,” Billo Rani complained, pointing at Anjali.

“This is a lie,” Anjali whimpered.

“Is this a lie, Shyam?” Arnav asked.

Shyam looked like the rat he was, cornered by many cats.

“Keh dio, jamai babu,” Malini invited, her voice strong and manly. “Is Billo lying?” She flexed her muscles and clenched her fist. “Did you marry Billo?”

“Yes,” Shyam whispered, terrified of Malini.

“Shyamji!” Anjali screamed.

“Are you Chintu’s papa?” Malini asked.

“Yes,” Shyam said, a scared look at Anjali.

Anjali collapsed. Akash and mama helped her to a chair.

“How long ago did you get married?” Arnav asked Billo Rani.

Billo counted on her fingers and said, “This Diwali it will be five years.”

Anjali wept bitterly.

“Was the wedding conducted in a temple?” Arnav asked Billo.

Malini answered him, her shrewd eyes on Arnav. “Yes. I made sure it was legal so that he didn’t weasel his way out of his responsibilities. It was hard enough to get hold of him and persuade him to do the right thing by Billo. So I made sure the shaadi was watertight.”

“So that makes my di’s shaadi to him null and void,” Arnav said. “Nani, Shyam Manohar Jha is no longer your damadji.”

“Thank God!” nani exclaimed.

“He has been living with us for the most part of three years. Do you want to take him with you?” Arnav asked Malini.

“Yes,” she replied. “He hasn’t visited us in six months. Nor has he paid his son’s school fees.”

Arnav said softly, “It might be better if you leave him here. The police will arrest him soon for trying to kill me.”

Billo hit her head with her hand and sat down on the floor, bemoaning her fate. 

“What a husband have you given me, my God! Faithless, irresponsible and a criminal! My poor child!” She suddenly looked up. “He tried to kill you?” she asked Arnav.

“Yes,” he admitted.

“Who are you?” she asked.

“Anjali’s brother,” he replied.

Billo drew in a sharp breath. “You tried to kill your saala?” she asked Shyam, shocked.

Arnav smiled wryly.

Malini threw a look of disgust at Shyam. “Even a dog is grateful if you feed it once. You are the worst, a mere keeda from a dirty naala.”

“Jiji, I don’t want him. My son will grow up without a father,” Billo told Malini.

“Yes, that’s better,” Malini agreed. In a surprise move, she stretched her hand out and slapped Shyam as hard as she could make it.

Shyam fell on the floor.

“Hum chalte hein, saheb,” Malini addressed Arnav.

“One minute,” Arnav replied. He whispered in Aman’s ear. Then he told the ladies, “Please go with Aman.”

Aman and Mangesh led Malini and Billo Rani away and Aman handed over a cheque for five lakhs to the women.

“Saheb, so much money! For us?” Billo Rani could barely believe her eyes.

“Take care of your son,” Aman said. “Sir knows that you are a victim, just like his sister.”

Malini said in a tear-choked voice, “Once Shyam leaves this house, prosperity will return. Phir bhi, I am blessing your sir. May he be happy always. May good things come to him. May God reward his kind heart that can sense our pain.”

As Malini, Billo Rani and Mangesh left, the police arrived.


45 comments:

  1. Wowwwww😍😍😍best ever exposure of shyam...sabash khushi..
    Thank u Smita ♥️
    Will have a peaceful sleep.

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  2. Dearest Smitaji, This one is for you. For all your delightful stories. Most of all for keeping Arnav and Khushi fresh even though it's been 5 years since the show ended.

    Smita's Crazy blog commenced in 2012,
    Into Shantivan and Laxmi Nagar did she delve;
    Much to our (Smitens) collective delight,
    We, who missed A and K's onscreen fight(s).

    First came a series of One shots,
    Based on Gul's onscreen plots;
    Then came stories each with a twist,
    Such as "ASR's Heart" and " A Midnight Tryst".

    I think we all safely agree,
    We love the series "-ing Khushi";
    Personally I am absolutely crazy,
    About the ASR and KKG in "Keeping Khushi".

    Anand, Aarti, Pandit Sasi Sharma,
    Gaurav, Ganesh and Anamika;
    Characters who blend in seamlessly,
    Into A and K's existing family.

    "An Unwanted Wife" tugged at the heart strings,
    "The Other Woman" showed Anjali's mood swings,
    We can't forget "The Diabetic and the Halwai"
    Nor " Laad Governer and Afghan Jalebi".

    "A Playful Love", "The Handpicked Bride",
    Took us on a roller coaster ride;
    Stalking and plaguing - we ne'er did tire,
    Our reward - " An Inconvenient Desire".

    The evil Snakewaa's melodrama,
    Insightful interpretations by Rulama;
    Every tale - an exquisite pearl,
    Like the oh so sweet " His Smiling Girl".

    Why do I like these stories so much?
    Maybe because I strive hard to clutch;
    Those warm, fuzzy feelings that provide refuge,
    When Asli Duniya brings on the deluge.

    Nail biting cliff hangers, laughter and tears,
    Take away all the tension, stress, worry and fears;
    With all the distress go, went, gone,
    I say, "Asli Duniya, BRING IT ON".

    I was able to handle the Royal Pain that is AD only because of your stories. Thank you for all your efforts in bringing us so much joy.

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    1. Thanx a million, darling KC, for being my friend.

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    2. So true buddy,
      Our Smitaji is magician.
      Happy new year dear.

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    3. Hi Kaycee What a fitting Ode to Smita and her tales!!!

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    4. Wow dear kaaycee that was wonderful. Truly even fab ode to Smitaji and her writing!!!

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    5. 👏👏👏take a bow👏👏👏

      For me it started with “Marrying Khushi” that I chanced upon in IF and have been hooked since!

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  3. Read the update in a rush. Am going to read again. Loved the fiery Khushi.

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  4. Smita...loved reading this update..it was fantabulous...
    thumbs up to you !
    happy new year...

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  5. What an update... Fantastic beginning of a new era on a new year... What's amusing is Snakewa is silently taking all the hitwa... No dum... But what a day for him... Except his present the past and the future he envisioned gave him a blessing or two on his cheeks to view it with the tomato cheeks of his present the Rani Sahiba... Khushi stood up in her very best giving the best show for the Raizadas of her character... Her statement... I would rather be Arnavji's mistress than your wife to Shyam Manohar Jha was the clincher... The esteem with which she looks upon our grumpy acerbic yet darling Arnav is manifested... She came out like a rising sun at the sun rise in all glory shining and shimmering and blinding all with her glorious bright light and making the presence felt with the warmth it induces and the hope it brings of a new day. . Simply marvellous character woven. .

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    1. Happy New Year to you Smita and all the Smitonians...

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    2. Happy New Year to you too Hetal...

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  6. Stupendous Smita....loved our tigress kkg single handedly tackling Anjali and her scoundrel husband.

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  7. Happy New Year Smita n all the Smitens here

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  8. As usual brilliant update.
    Loved KKG as usual fearless and fighting for her Arnavji. Shyam ki toh vaat lag gai. Anjali is Dil toot gayaa!! Khair uss ghatiyan insaan ko jaha hona chaahiye waha launch Gaya.

    Happy new year Smitaji and all fellow readers.

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  9. Happy New year smitha. .. what an fantastic update. ... loved khushi in full form and shyaams game is out...

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  10. Khushi ne shyam ki puri Vaat lagaa di. Shayam chaaron khaane chit. 💃💃💃💃
    What will Arnav bitwa do now? He doesnt have anymore reason to keep Khushi at his home Will he send her home knowing that Buaji is ready to send her off with payalia's devar???
    Waiting for next update

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  11. Loved this! Best way to end the year...what a bang it was! Shyaam's truth has come out and KKG was all fiery and fierce in protecting her Arnav-ji! For the first time, someone other than family has stood up for him. Think he was as gobsmacked as everyone else probably was (on the inside). His so called di however: Anjali's dense-ness has no bounds yet ASR, shatir dimaag and all preempts this and has backup evidence. Despite the hurt that must be going through him, he manages to remain calm and collected throughout it all. Make Anjali pay for it all: not believing the one person who gave you everything and made sure there was no stone unturned to let you live your life is a crime! She should pay!

    Wonder what Khushi will do now? 🤔🤔 will Arnav tell her the whole truth or just let her go?? Great update as usual and Happy New Years to everyone 🎉🎊

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  12. Wow Smitaji that was superb. Absolutely loved the fiery Khushi and the calm Arnav...

    Anjali's dumbness knows no bounds. As usual she is blind to everyone but her so called Godly husband. She was irritating me the way she called names to and insulted Khushi. I hope that ASR does not forgive her and punished her.

    Also looking forward to ASRs further plans for Khushi.

    Happy New Year!!!

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  13. What a Fantabulous update Smita darlong ❤️❤️ A Very Happy New Year to you

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  14. Loved the update, brilliant. Shyam truth out. Brilliant khushi against Shyam, love the jooti scene. Dumb blind Anjali. Eager for the next part. Happy New Year.

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  15. HAPPY NEW YEAR, SMITA. Ek aur scene please.....kicking Anjali out.

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  16. Happy New Year Smita and all the other readers..
    Superb update .. what a way to expose Shyam..

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  17. Wow... Loved every part of the update. The best scene being the one where khushi chased shyam with her juti.
    Shyam is now doomed.

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  18. Hi Smitechi,
    Wow ,what a fire work on new year's eve!!Can we also slap Snakewaa...
    Wishing you a very happy,peaceful,prosperous and more ARSHIlicious New Year!!!

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  19. Happy new year all of you!

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  20. That was fantastic! In the serial when Khushi confronted Shyam after the kidnap, she was not able to hold on the argument by herself. Inspite of help from Payal and NK, she lost and had to ask Arbav to just trust her. Here it was great to see Khushi stand upto Shyam and win it too! This was possible because she knows that Arnav trusted her, she has the confidence to insult the damadji of the house without fearing because she was standing up for her Arnavji! Beautiful Smitha!

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  21. Hello smitaji
    Another great update. Loved the way Khushi used her chappals on that snake. Wish she had done the same in the show as well. Smitaji if you don't mind can you please let me know how I can get the password to your blog? I really want to read the rest of your stories. Please do let me know. And one again a very Happy Fun Filled Prosperous and Successful New Year 2018😊

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  22. Happy New Year Smita!
    Thank you for bringing such love into our lives...I have always found respite from the craziness that real life gets you in by rereading all the wonderful tales that you have written these past few years.
    Your stories always bring the smile back to my face.
    Thank you again and God bless.
    M

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  23. I was reading the part again and realized something! Shyam called Khushi an escort and yet he is the who is married to one. Anjali called Khushi a mistress and rakhail but, she was the who was living with Shyam as a rakhail, because her marriage was void. Anjali's sense of entitlement, convinced her that Khushi is bad, but her lack of gratitude did not let her see the true colors of her husband inspite of living with him for 3 years.Smitha, this is called justice! Thank you for the beautiful way you had shown it.

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  24. 2018 ki first post ki muh-dikhai lab hogi? Just asking. Hope to see you soon with another part.

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    1. Same feeling here i dunno how many times i have read this part and which time am reading it now. :P :P i never become tired of reading this part and again too. :D :D thanks for such a lovely story again.

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    2. Same to same Hetal. Ghooooring and waiting for the next installment. First Khushi's jooti, then Billo Rani. Next police?? Serves the 🐍 right.

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  25. Again my comment is gone😪😪

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  26. Exactly!! Smitha di.. what Kaycee di has said in second comment dts wt I am trying to say in all my comments but my bad luck even after commenting my comments gets automatically deleted from d post don't know y.. but I'll say again smitha di apke haton me jadoo hai�� u create magic by ur words.. each time wn I read a post or a story of URS I feel like everything is happening in front f my eyes.. kash agar Mai producer hotina to ur each story wld have been a serial.. I love each nd every character nd d way u have portrayed Dem.. it's just out f d world I really donno wt s ur actual profession bt u cld b an awesome writer of any movies or serials if u would get a chance..u can write each nd every emotion so gracefully nd ur words add a life to d character.. I just wish I could meet u personally.. m die hard fan of URS.. stalking u intially to read ur stories.. but den lost d access.. just a request pls give me access to read ur previous stories which I am dieing to read pls.. nd update soon di.. a very happy new year to u..may God bless u always����

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  27. Exactly!! Smitha di.. what Kaycee di has said in second comment dts wt I am trying to say in all my comments but my bad luck even after commenting my comments gets automatically deleted from d post don't know y.. but I'll say again smitha di apke haton me jadoo hai�� u create magic by ur words.. each time wn I read a post or a story of URS I feel like everything is happening in front f my eyes.. kash agar Mai producer hotina to ur each story wld have been a serial.. I love each nd every character nd d way u have portrayed Dem.. it's just out f d world I really donno wt s ur actual profession bt u cld b an awesome writer of any movies or serials if u would get a chance..u can write each nd every emotion so gracefully nd ur words add a life to d character.. I just wish I could meet u personally.. m die hard fan of URS.. stalking u intially to read ur stories.. but den lost d access.. just a request pls give me access to read ur previous stories which I am dieing to read pls.. nd update soon di.. a very happy new year to u..may God bless u always����

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  28. Khushi was fabulous. She gave it good to Shyam. Wonderful way of exposing Shyam to all, especially Anjali.

    Happy new year Smita.

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  29. Happy New Year Smita.. Mind blowing chapter.. everything went as per Arnav's plan.. Khushi was superb.. enjoyed Khushi hitting shyam with her jooti.. waiting to see what happens of Arnav-Khushi after Arnav flushes that rat out of his house..

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  30. Hello Smitaji
    Hope you are well. I read your other stories again. Saying that you are an artist is too little. I am truly privileged to have read your work. You have a way with words that make me forget everything else that is going. Sometimes when I am having a bad day I remember some scenes from your stories and am able to push through. I am not that good with words but I just wanted to say thank you for giving us this opportunity to immerse ourselves in this wonderful world of Arshi created by you. I just hope that someday i get to read all the stories that i have missed as well. Take care and stay blessed.

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  31. Hi Smita, Happy New Year, eagerly waiting for an update.

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  32. Wow! Shyam's goose is well and truly cooked.What is Anjali going tosay about her Shamji now?

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