HAPPY NEW YEAR!
Part 18
Arnav
dressed for dinner, his mind filled with plans and strategies to nail Shyam.
The bullet had been shot by a sniper who had taken position in the empty mansion
adjacent to his. His detectives had found Sinha’s residence broken in to and
had found footprints on the steps leading to the terrace. He had contacted the
Commissioner and given him the details and pressed on him the need for
confidentiality and secrecy.
Arnav stood
before the mirror, his eyes on his image, but his mind on Khushi.
What if the
bullet had hit Khushi?
His eyes
grew cold as ice, his fists clenched, his whole body tensed and his muscles
coiled tighter than steel wires.
No, that was not acceptable.
He turned
to look at Khushi in her room through the open connecting door.
She was
asleep, her hands curled up under her chin, her body in a foetal position. Her
unbound hair lay spread on the white pillow like a waterfall. Long lashes
shielded her lovely eyes. The pinkness of her plump lips owed nothing to
artifice. Her plump cheeks looked as soft and pristine as a baby’s.
She
screamed innocence, purity, all that was good in the world. She trusted him.
She, a sheltered, young, naive, inexperienced girl, trusted him so much that
she had asked to leave the door between their bedrooms open.
He
swallowed hard.
And he was putting her in danger to trap a rat like Shyam! The
extent to which he had imposed on Khushi and put her life in peril struck him keenly.
He looked away, ashamed of himself, feeling contempt for himself. He ought to
let her go home to her family, free her from this dangerous game.
But Shyam?
He had to be dealt with.
He drew in
a deep breath. The game was in its last stage. It was better to see it through.
He turned
and walked into Khushi’s room to stand by her bed.
“Khushi,”
he called.
She woke up
with a jerk.
“Arnavji?”
she asked, sitting up and brushing hair out of her eyes.
“It is
almost time for dinner,” he said quietly.
Her face paled.
“I am going
down now,” he said tonelessly. “You get dressed and wait in my room. I will
send HP to call you. Khushi, come down only when HP knocks on the door to my
room.”
“Ji,” she
agreed, not understanding what was going on.
He looked into her anxious eyes.
“Trust me,”
he said quietly.
“I do,” she
said directly, immediately, without even a moment’s thought.
He looked
down at his hands. What wouldn’t he give to strangle Shyam till he died!
The PI
called. Arnav left the room to take the call.
***
His family
was gathered in the living room.
As Arnav
walked up to them, Shyam asked, “Saalesaheb, you are all alone? That’s a rare
sight these days. Tut tut, where have you misplaced your darling Khushiji?”
Anjali
laughed at her husband’s wit.
Mami
muttered, “Hello Hi Bye Bye, I bill crush you under my six-inch heelwaa,” under
her breath.
“Ghatiya
aadmi,” nani fumed in a whisper.
Akash
clenched his jaw to stop himself from saying what he thought of Shyam and
mama’s eyes showed the utter contempt he felt for Shyam.
“I am glad
that all of you are here. I need to talk to you about something very
important,” Arnav said, his eyes on mami, nani, mama and Akash who had already
been notified of the events to unfold.
They nodded
at him.
“Arre bhai,
what is this? An announcement? Should we be scared?” Shyam asked, trying to
sound funny and genial, but his eyes revealing his frustration and anger at the
failing of his plans.
Arnav
ignored him and went on, “Somebody tried to kill me today.”
All gasped.
Shyam
squirmed. He had expected Arnav to hide the incident from his family.
“Tum kya
keh rahe ho, Chotey?” Anjali asked, her big eyes wide with fear.
“The
truth,” Arnav said shortly. “A sniper shot at me and narrowly missed me.”
Shyam
frowned. “Really, Saalesaheb? Are you sure you didn’t imagine it?”
The whole
family glared at him, with the exception of Anjali.
“The police
thinks I didn’t,” Arnav said wryly.
Shyam
gulped. “You informed the police?” he asked, his heart in his mouth.
“Of
course,” Arnav said easily. “They have identified the sniper as Munna Shehzad
and hope to arrest him by tomorrow.”
Shyam sat
frozen in his seat.
“The police
are sure that once they interrogate him, they can arrest the mastermind behind
the murder attempt. Munna is just a killer for hire, a tool,” Arnav said, cool as a
cucumber.
Anjali lowered
her head and rested her forehead on her hand. “My head is spinning, Chotey.
What is happening in our house?” she asked.
“I would
like to know who that coward is,” nani said sternly.
“I bill
beat him with a brooms dipped in gobar. How dare he looks at hamre Arnav
bitwaa!” mami raged.
“Who can it
be, bhai?” Akash asked. “Our rivals are businessmen, not killers.”
“The police
will find out soon,” Arnav said.
“I hope he
gets a death sentence,” mama fumed.
“Chotey, we
need to hold a pooja,” Anjali said. “I will call our family priest. There is an
evil force out to destroy our family and only God’s grace can save us.”
“As you
wish,” Arnav said. “There is one more thing. I have decided to transfer my property to Khushi.”
All gasped.
Anjali and Shyam were genuinely shocked. The rest of the family played along.
“I gave
Akash half of everything I owned when he joined me in business,” Arnav said.
All nodded.
“Yejj, you
did,” mami agreed.
“I gave di
everything I intended to give her when she got married,” Arnav continued.
“Houses, car, jewellery and money.”
“Sahi keh
rahe ho, Chotey,” nani said. “You have given her more than enough.”
“As my life
is in danger, I think I should transfer everything I own to Khushi immediately.
Who knows if I will survive the next attempt? I may not make it to the mandap
to marry her,” Arnav said seriously.
“Sahi keh
rahe ho, bitwaa,” mama said. “If something happens to you, Khussi bitiya will be
left destitute.”
Shyam
couldn’t see, hear or speak. Outraged at how his life was falling apart, vexed
at the thought of all the money that should have come to him going to an
upstart like Khushi and filled with indignation that he had put up with a nagging
lame sister of a billionaire for nothing for three years, he sat there, wanting
to burn down the house. He needed time...time to think and plan. His scheme of
finishing off Arnav had backfired. If Munna was arrested, it would terminate
his game. Munna would confess and that would be the end of everything he had
planned for three years. And now Arnav was giving away his wealth to Khushi?
“Saalesaheb,”
Shyam protested, “I think you are being hasty here.”
All looked
at him, their eyes revealing varying degrees of misgiving, wariness and
skepticism.
“You should
sleep on this, think it through. What is the hurry? Giving away all your money
is not to be done lightly,” Shyam said, panting, struggling to row against the
current, flailing his arms and legs desperately to hang on to the wealth.
Arnav
frowned. “How am I giving it away?” he asked. “I am giving it to my
wife-to-be.”
“Yes, but
what is the guarantee that Khushiji will stay by you. She is an outsider, not
your family. I think, Saalesaheb, you should transfer it to a family member.
Someone you can trust. Someone like Rani sahiba...” Shyam suggested, frantic.
The whole
family smiled, seeing his desperation. Only Anjali nodded.
“Shyamji
is, as usual, right, Chotey. You aren’t married yet. What if Khushiji takes
your money and runs? We have to protect the family wealth,” Anjali said. “You
must listen to Shyamji. His shatir lawyer brain can’t go wrong.” She simpered
at her husband.
Arnav
lifted one brow. “Family wealth?” he asked. “It is my personal wealth. I worked
hard for it. I didn’t inherit it.”
“Bhai is,
as always, absolutely right,” Akash said. “He worked for every rupee and has
the right to give it to Khushiji if he wants to.”
“What if she tricks him, Akash?” Shyam and Anjali were vociferous in their protest.
“Then we
will live with that betrayal,” nani stepped in. “We have put up with worse.”
Shyam
gulped.
“Khussi
bitiya is no crook. She is a sanskaari girl who cares a great deal for hamre
Arnav bitwaa,” mama asserted.
“Those who
hab jaundice bill see yellow eberybhere,” mami declared.
“Jijaji,
don’t worry about bhai’s welfare. If Khushiji, as you seem to fear, runs away
with bhai’s wealth, I will return everything that bhai gave me,” Akash said
firmly.
Mama and
mami nodded.
“I bill gib
hamre Arnav bitwaa all the goldwaa he bought for me,” mami announced.
“And all
the money he has invested for us,” mama said.
“And all
the land he has bought me,” nani added.
Shyam could
feel beads of sweat on his forehead. Munna would be arrested tomorrow. And he
had about twelve hours before Arnav transferred his money and property to Khushi as the
document had to be drafted, checked and signed.
Arnav had to die tonight. Shyam
nodded thoughtfully. Yes, Arnav had to die tonight.
“My bhai
started with nothing. He built a billion dollar business solely through his
hard work and business acumen. He can do it again,” Akash asserted. “We stood
by him then. We will stand by him now and always.”
“Chotey,”
Anjali opened her mouth to express her doubts about Khushi, but was interrupted
by the doorbell.
HP opened
the door.
Aman stood
there with a briefcase in his hand.
“Aman, come
in,” Arnav called. “Sit down.”
Aman sat
between Arnav and Akash, placed his briefcase on the table and opened it to
take out a file.
Shyam had a
very bad feeling about this. His wife voiced the question he wanted to ask.
“What is
this?” Anjali asked sternly.
“The
document transferring everything I own to Khushi,” Arnav said simply.
Shyam
stared at Arnav, seeing the end of all his plotting, all his dreams of becoming
rich.
“Here,
sir,” Aman said quietly, placing the document and a pen before Arnav for his
signature.
“Bring
Khushi down to join us. Immediately,” Arnav called out to HP.
“Yes, Arnav
bhaiyya,” HP said, making a quick way up the steps.
“Everything
is in order, Aman?” Arnav asked softly.
“Yes, sir,”
Aman replied.
Arnav began
to read the document silently.
Shyam
looked at Arnav and at the smiling faces of Aman, nani, mami, mama and Akash.
Fear and fury waged a battle within him.
Munna would
be arrested soon. A casual glance at his phone records and his confession would
indict him, Shyam Manohar Jha. Creditors were hounding him and all his hopes of
getting his hands on Arnav’s money were going down the drain.
“Chotey, I
think you should reconsider,” Anjali said.
Shyam sent
a baleful glance her way. She was the cancer eating away at his good luck, the
parasite drinking his blood, the nag who just wouldn’t quit. He was so tired of
her.
All looked
at Anjali.
“Khushiji
is a stranger. She is not part of our family,” Anjali insisted.
Nani said
with a smile, “So was your Shyamji till he married you. Khussi bitiya will
become part of our family when she marries Chotey.”
Anjali was
silenced.
Shyam grit
his teeth.
Khushi came
down the steps, dressed in a beautiful designer saree in peach.
Arnav
looked up and met her eyes. She smiled at him.
Her eyes
fell on Aman.
“Amanji,”
she greeted him, thrilled to see him. She folded her hands and greeted him
fondly, “Namaste.” Her delight in seeing her only friend was apparent to the
audience.
Aman stood
up and returned the greeting with a fond smile. “I came to get ASR’s sign on a
very important document,” Aman said.
Before
Khushi could respond, Shyam stood up hastily and shouted, “It is a conspiracy!”
All looked
at him, shocked.
“Khushi is
in cahoots with this sneaky Aman, Saalesaheb and they are out to fleece you.
They will beggar you!” Shyam shouted.
Aman’s jaw
hit the ground. Khushi looked at Shyam as though he were mad.
Arnav
quietly signed the document.
Shyam
snatched the paper from him and tore it into pieces. “How dare you!” he
shouted. “How dare you give away your wealth to this girl, Khushi who is little
better than an escort?”
Escort?
What was that? Was it a new name for secretary? Khushi wondered. What wealth
was he talking about? She stared at Shyam, wondering if he had gone mad.
The
Raizadas had to exert great self-control not to knock Shyam down.
Arnav alone
was relaxed and unperturbed. He watched the proceedings with a calm air.
“Shyamji is
right. Khushi is not your family. We are,” Anjali insisted.
“She is
immoral, just a piece of fluff. And you are going to throw away your fortune on
her? I won’t let this happen,” Shyam insisted.
Khushi
looked at Arnav.
He nodded
slightly, giving her the green light.
“Whom are
you calling immoral?” Khushi asked Shyam, tucking the end of her pallu in her
waist, ready to do battle.
“You, Khushi!”
Shyam bit out. “You may be good at giving khushi between the sheets to many
men, including your Amanji and Arnavji and then pretending to be all virtuous
and sanskaari. You may be able to fool the doddering idiots in this house, but
you can’t fool me.”
Khushi took
a deep breath and began giving the sleazebag what he deserved.
“I don’t
have to pretend to be virtuous and sanskaari because I am both. But you have to
pretend. You have to pretend daily to be a good husband, a good jijaji, a good
damadji, even a good human being. Because you are not. You are a louse,” Khushi
said, not mincing any words.
“Chotey!”
Anjali shouted. She jumped up from her seat and moved towards her husband. “How
dare Khushiji accuse my husband and insult him?”
Chotey sat
watching the performance, his eyes and full attention on Khushi.
“Chotey,
aren’t you listening to me?” Anjali asked, angry and exasperated.
“I am,”
Arnav said evenly.
Khushi
looked at Arnav.
He let his
lashes fall to cover his eyes for a moment and then he looked straight at her.
Khushi read
the sign right.
She
continued, “You are a worm. Besharam, behaya aadmi! You are married to Anjaliji
and living in her house, at her brother’s expense and you come knocking on my
door at night? Shameless rogue!”
Anjali
gasped.
“You low
class girl! Just because you charmed Chotey into giving you a life, don’t think
you can insult us,” Anjali shouted. “We know what you are.”
“Rani
sahiba, what is the use of talking to kachra like her?” Shyam asked.
Nani made
to step forward, but mami caught hold of her. “Bait, Saasumma, remember what
Arnav bitwaa said,” she whispered.
“If I am
kachra for working for a living, then what are you?” Khushi asked, her eyes
raining fire. “Living like a parasite in your wife’s house, cheating on your
wife with other women, asking for money from your saala....” Khushi bent and
took her jooti in one hand. “I was hoping for a chance to do this,” she said
before hitting Shyam on his head with her shoe. “You... will... try... to...
kill...Arnavji, you rascal?” she asked while hitting him.
Shyam tried
to protect his head, but to no avail. She was too fast for him.
“Chotey!
She is mad!” Anjali screamed, trying to protect her husband. “Nani, mami,
Akash, mama...”
No one
lifted a finger.
Arnav sat
back enjoying the rare scene of some one fighting his battle for him.
“He...
works... all... day... and... night... and you...live... off him...and...then
try...to kill him?” Khushi was merciless in her attack. “You... are
ungrateful...you scoundrel...you... ghatiya aadmi...”
“And what
are you?” Anjali asked, furious tears streaming down her face.
“You are
Arnav’s mistress!” Shyam screamed.
The shock
loosened Khushi’s hold on her jooti and the battered footwear fell to the
ground.
“Mistress?”
Khushi asked in confusion. How could she be Arnavji’s mistress? She didn’t own
him and nor was he a dog or a cat for her to possess.
“Yes,
rakhail. You are no better than a prostitute,” Shyam declared triumphantly.
“Yes,”
Anjali seconded him.
Khushi’s
mouth fell open.
Arnav sat
with a clenched jaw and curled fists, waiting his turn. His eyes were on Khushi’s
pale face. All the other Raizadas except Anjali were glaring at Shyam.
“How hurt
my Khussi bitiya must be,” nani agonised.
“I bill
kill that cockroach,” mami threatened.
As they
watched, Khushi burst out laughing.
Arnav
relaxed.
Trying hard
to control her hilarity, Khushi gasped, “You don’t know Arnavji... Keep me as a
rakhail? Him?” She chuckled. “Such...a decent man....so honourable....This is
what you think of him?”
When she
managed to get her amusement under control, she told Shyam and Anjali, “All men
are not like you, Shyam Manohar Jha. And your brother is a far better man than
you know.”
Shyam
snorted. “So says a woman of loose morals.”
“If Chotey
hadn’t insisted, I would have never let you set foot in this house,” Anjali
fumed.
“It is his
house, isn’t it?” Khushi asked, perplexed. “He wanted me to work for him. I
did. That’s all.”
“Work!”
Shyam said derisively. “Is being his mistress work to you?”
Anjali
sniffed and looked away.
Khushi said
quietly, “I would rather be Arnavji’s mistress than your wife, Shyam Manohar
Jha.”
All gasped.
“I pity you
from the bottom of my heart,” Khushi told Anjali. “You have a terrible man for
your husband, a scumbag, a dirtball and a criminal. And you are blind to his lecherous
ways, his greed and his evil intentions towards your brother. I hope Devi
Maiyya shows you the right path and protects you.”
“Chotey!”
Anjali screamed. “Khushi is insulting us.”
“You insulted
her more,” Arnav said easily.
Khushi
abandoned her fallen jooti and moved to stand by Arnav.
His phone
rang. He answered the call, cut it and then said, “Badhayi ho, Shyam. The
police have Munna and he is singing like a bird.”
Shyam
froze. He had hoped to have some time to recoup.
“What?”
Anjali asked, bemused.
“Your
husband, Shyam Manohar Jha, hired Munna, a sniper to kill me,” Arnav explained.
“That’s a
lie,” Anjali protested.
“Tell that
to the police,” Arnav said.
The doorbell
rang.
Shyam
jumped.
“It is not
the police, jijaji,” Arnav said sardonically. “Not yet.”
Aman opened
the door and let in a middle-aged man and two women.
The older woman, built
like a man, was in a colourful but cheap polyester saree. The eyes in her
chicken pox-marked face were alert. The younger woman was in a cheap pink and
blue lehenga, the dupatta covering almost nothing of her chest. Her rough brown
hair was sprayed and set into impossible curls and her nails were painted a
garish pink. Her eyebrows were drawn in an impossible arc. The curve of her
thin lips was enhanced by the use of low quality, pink-orange lipstick and her
teeth were paan-stained. Her skin looked coarse due to the regular use of cheap
cosmetics. Though in her late twenties, she looked to be in her mid-thirties.
Shyam was
rooted to the spot, his wide eyes looking wider, like the eyes of a prey hunted
by a predator.
“Let me
introduce Mangesh Pedgaonkar, an excellent private investigator working for me
on an important case,” Arnav said. “Who are the ladies with you, Mangesh?”
“This is
Billo Rani, an escort from Lucknow. With her is Malini, her pimp and protector,
who runs the escort service and manages the cash book,” Mangesh explained.
“Why has he
brought such women into our house, Chotey?” Anjali asked, furious beyond
control. “Isn’t it enough that we have been living with your Khushiji?”
Billo Rani
saved Arnav the effort of answering his di. She said, after pushing the wad of
tobacco from one cheek to another, “Yeh, saali, haramkhor! Turning up your nose at us! And that too after stealing my husband! Teri baal noch loongi.”
All gasped.
“Chotey,
yeh sab kya he?” nani asked faintly.
Mami helped
her into a chair and whispered, “Hamre Arnav bitwaa bill manage, Saasumma. I am
seeing the lightwaa at the end of the tunnelwaa.”
“Husband?”
Anjali asked, a look of disgust on her refined face. “I steal your husband? You
must be joking.”
“Hum kauno
jokerwaa laage he tumhe?” Billo Rani asked, spitting paan juice on the marble
floor at Anjali’s feet.
Anjali
jumped a few steps back.
“Yeh he
humre pati parmesswar, humre Chintu ke papa!” Billo Rani claimed, pointing at
Shyam.
All stared
at Shyam, their mouths open, except for the detective and Arnav.
“Hum pet se
the, tho Malini jiji ne Shyam babu se kaha, saadi kar lio. Naahi to gardanwaa pe
sar naahi honge. Ye humse saadi banaye. Aur mahine do mahine mein aate bhi the.
Lekin hamri phooti kismet! Ye kalmui ne hamre pati parmeswar ko udda liye,”
Billo Rani complained, pointing at Anjali.
“This is a
lie,” Anjali whimpered.
“Is this a
lie, Shyam?” Arnav asked.
Shyam
looked like the rat he was, cornered by many cats.
“Keh dio,
jamai babu,” Malini invited, her voice strong and manly. “Is Billo lying?” She
flexed her muscles and clenched her fist. “Did you marry Billo?”
“Yes,” Shyam
whispered, terrified of Malini.
“Shyamji!”
Anjali screamed.
“Are you
Chintu’s papa?” Malini asked.
“Yes,”
Shyam said, a scared look at Anjali.
Anjali
collapsed. Akash and mama helped her to a chair.
“How long
ago did you get married?” Arnav asked Billo Rani.
Billo
counted on her fingers and said, “This Diwali it will be five years.”
Anjali wept
bitterly.
“Was the
wedding conducted in a temple?” Arnav asked Billo.
Malini
answered him, her shrewd eyes on Arnav. “Yes. I made sure it was legal so that
he didn’t weasel his way out of his responsibilities. It was hard enough to get
hold of him and persuade him to do the right thing by Billo. So I made sure the
shaadi was watertight.”
“So that
makes my di’s shaadi to him null and void,” Arnav said. “Nani, Shyam Manohar
Jha is no longer your damadji.”
“Thank God!”
nani exclaimed.
“He has
been living with us for the most part of three years. Do you want to take him
with you?” Arnav asked Malini.
“Yes,” she
replied. “He hasn’t visited us in six months. Nor has he paid his son’s school
fees.”
Arnav said
softly, “It might be better if you leave him here. The police will arrest him
soon for trying to kill me.”
Billo hit
her head with her hand and sat down on the floor, bemoaning her fate.
“What a
husband have you given me, my God! Faithless, irresponsible and a criminal! My
poor child!” She suddenly looked up. “He tried to kill you?” she asked Arnav.
“Yes,” he
admitted.
“Who are
you?” she asked.
“Anjali’s
brother,” he replied.
Billo drew
in a sharp breath. “You tried to kill your saala?” she asked Shyam, shocked.
Arnav
smiled wryly.
Malini
threw a look of disgust at Shyam. “Even a dog is grateful if you feed it once.
You are the worst, a mere keeda from a dirty naala.”
“Jiji, I
don’t want him. My son will grow up without a father,” Billo told Malini.
“Yes, that’s
better,” Malini agreed. In a surprise move, she stretched her hand out and
slapped Shyam as hard as she could make it.
Shyam fell
on the floor.
“Hum chalte
hein, saheb,” Malini addressed Arnav.
“One minute,”
Arnav replied. He whispered in Aman’s ear. Then he told the ladies, “Please go
with Aman.”
Aman and Mangesh
led Malini and Billo Rani away and Aman handed over a cheque for five lakhs to
the women.
“Saheb, so
much money! For us?” Billo Rani could barely believe her eyes.
“Take care
of your son,” Aman said. “Sir knows that you are a victim, just like his sister.”
Malini said
in a tear-choked voice, “Once Shyam leaves this house, prosperity will return.
Phir bhi, I am blessing your sir. May he be happy always. May good things come
to him. May God reward his kind heart that can sense our pain.”
As Malini,
Billo Rani and Mangesh left, the police arrived.
Wowwwww😍😍😍best ever exposure of shyam...sabash khushi..
ReplyDeleteThank u Smita ♥️
Will have a peaceful sleep.
Dearest Smitaji, This one is for you. For all your delightful stories. Most of all for keeping Arnav and Khushi fresh even though it's been 5 years since the show ended.
ReplyDeleteSmita's Crazy blog commenced in 2012,
Into Shantivan and Laxmi Nagar did she delve;
Much to our (Smitens) collective delight,
We, who missed A and K's onscreen fight(s).
First came a series of One shots,
Based on Gul's onscreen plots;
Then came stories each with a twist,
Such as "ASR's Heart" and " A Midnight Tryst".
I think we all safely agree,
We love the series "-ing Khushi";
Personally I am absolutely crazy,
About the ASR and KKG in "Keeping Khushi".
Anand, Aarti, Pandit Sasi Sharma,
Gaurav, Ganesh and Anamika;
Characters who blend in seamlessly,
Into A and K's existing family.
"An Unwanted Wife" tugged at the heart strings,
"The Other Woman" showed Anjali's mood swings,
We can't forget "The Diabetic and the Halwai"
Nor " Laad Governer and Afghan Jalebi".
"A Playful Love", "The Handpicked Bride",
Took us on a roller coaster ride;
Stalking and plaguing - we ne'er did tire,
Our reward - " An Inconvenient Desire".
The evil Snakewaa's melodrama,
Insightful interpretations by Rulama;
Every tale - an exquisite pearl,
Like the oh so sweet " His Smiling Girl".
Why do I like these stories so much?
Maybe because I strive hard to clutch;
Those warm, fuzzy feelings that provide refuge,
When Asli Duniya brings on the deluge.
Nail biting cliff hangers, laughter and tears,
Take away all the tension, stress, worry and fears;
With all the distress go, went, gone,
I say, "Asli Duniya, BRING IT ON".
I was able to handle the Royal Pain that is AD only because of your stories. Thank you for all your efforts in bringing us so much joy.
Thanx a million, darling KC, for being my friend.
DeleteSo true buddy,
DeleteOur Smitaji is magician.
Happy new year dear.
Hi Kaycee What a fitting Ode to Smita and her tales!!!
DeleteWow dear kaaycee that was wonderful. Truly even fab ode to Smitaji and her writing!!!
Delete👏👏👏take a bow👏👏👏
DeleteFor me it started with “Marrying Khushi” that I chanced upon in IF and have been hooked since!
Read the update in a rush. Am going to read again. Loved the fiery Khushi.
ReplyDeleteJooti and all!
DeleteSmita...loved reading this update..it was fantabulous...
ReplyDeletethumbs up to you !
happy new year...
What an update... Fantastic beginning of a new era on a new year... What's amusing is Snakewa is silently taking all the hitwa... No dum... But what a day for him... Except his present the past and the future he envisioned gave him a blessing or two on his cheeks to view it with the tomato cheeks of his present the Rani Sahiba... Khushi stood up in her very best giving the best show for the Raizadas of her character... Her statement... I would rather be Arnavji's mistress than your wife to Shyam Manohar Jha was the clincher... The esteem with which she looks upon our grumpy acerbic yet darling Arnav is manifested... She came out like a rising sun at the sun rise in all glory shining and shimmering and blinding all with her glorious bright light and making the presence felt with the warmth it induces and the hope it brings of a new day. . Simply marvellous character woven. .
ReplyDeleteHappy New Year to you Smita and all the Smitonians...
DeleteReshu, happy new year.
DeleteHappy New Year to you too Hetal...
DeleteStupendous Smita....loved our tigress kkg single handedly tackling Anjali and her scoundrel husband.
ReplyDeleteHappy New Year Smita n all the Smitens here
ReplyDeleteAs usual brilliant update.
ReplyDeleteLoved KKG as usual fearless and fighting for her Arnavji. Shyam ki toh vaat lag gai. Anjali is Dil toot gayaa!! Khair uss ghatiyan insaan ko jaha hona chaahiye waha launch Gaya.
Happy new year Smitaji and all fellow readers.
Happy New year smitha. .. what an fantastic update. ... loved khushi in full form and shyaams game is out...
ReplyDeleteKhushi ne shyam ki puri Vaat lagaa di. Shayam chaaron khaane chit. 💃💃💃💃
ReplyDeleteWhat will Arnav bitwa do now? He doesnt have anymore reason to keep Khushi at his home Will he send her home knowing that Buaji is ready to send her off with payalia's devar???
Waiting for next update
Loved this! Best way to end the year...what a bang it was! Shyaam's truth has come out and KKG was all fiery and fierce in protecting her Arnav-ji! For the first time, someone other than family has stood up for him. Think he was as gobsmacked as everyone else probably was (on the inside). His so called di however: Anjali's dense-ness has no bounds yet ASR, shatir dimaag and all preempts this and has backup evidence. Despite the hurt that must be going through him, he manages to remain calm and collected throughout it all. Make Anjali pay for it all: not believing the one person who gave you everything and made sure there was no stone unturned to let you live your life is a crime! She should pay!
ReplyDeleteWonder what Khushi will do now? 🤔🤔 will Arnav tell her the whole truth or just let her go?? Great update as usual and Happy New Years to everyone 🎉🎊
Wow Smitaji that was superb. Absolutely loved the fiery Khushi and the calm Arnav...
ReplyDeleteAnjali's dumbness knows no bounds. As usual she is blind to everyone but her so called Godly husband. She was irritating me the way she called names to and insulted Khushi. I hope that ASR does not forgive her and punished her.
Also looking forward to ASRs further plans for Khushi.
Happy New Year!!!
What a Fantabulous update Smita darlong ❤️❤️ A Very Happy New Year to you
ReplyDeleteLoved the update, brilliant. Shyam truth out. Brilliant khushi against Shyam, love the jooti scene. Dumb blind Anjali. Eager for the next part. Happy New Year.
ReplyDeleteHAPPY NEW YEAR, SMITA. Ek aur scene please.....kicking Anjali out.
ReplyDeleteHappy New Year Smita and all the other readers..
ReplyDeleteSuperb update .. what a way to expose Shyam..
Wow... Loved every part of the update. The best scene being the one where khushi chased shyam with her juti.
ReplyDeleteShyam is now doomed.
Hi Smitechi,
ReplyDeleteWow ,what a fire work on new year's eve!!Can we also slap Snakewaa...
Wishing you a very happy,peaceful,prosperous and more ARSHIlicious New Year!!!
Happy new year all of you!
ReplyDeleteThat was fantastic! In the serial when Khushi confronted Shyam after the kidnap, she was not able to hold on the argument by herself. Inspite of help from Payal and NK, she lost and had to ask Arbav to just trust her. Here it was great to see Khushi stand upto Shyam and win it too! This was possible because she knows that Arnav trusted her, she has the confidence to insult the damadji of the house without fearing because she was standing up for her Arnavji! Beautiful Smitha!
ReplyDeleteHello smitaji
ReplyDeleteAnother great update. Loved the way Khushi used her chappals on that snake. Wish she had done the same in the show as well. Smitaji if you don't mind can you please let me know how I can get the password to your blog? I really want to read the rest of your stories. Please do let me know. And one again a very Happy Fun Filled Prosperous and Successful New Year 2018😊
Happy New Year Smita!
ReplyDeleteThank you for bringing such love into our lives...I have always found respite from the craziness that real life gets you in by rereading all the wonderful tales that you have written these past few years.
Your stories always bring the smile back to my face.
Thank you again and God bless.
M
I was reading the part again and realized something! Shyam called Khushi an escort and yet he is the who is married to one. Anjali called Khushi a mistress and rakhail but, she was the who was living with Shyam as a rakhail, because her marriage was void. Anjali's sense of entitlement, convinced her that Khushi is bad, but her lack of gratitude did not let her see the true colors of her husband inspite of living with him for 3 years.Smitha, this is called justice! Thank you for the beautiful way you had shown it.
ReplyDelete2018 ki first post ki muh-dikhai lab hogi? Just asking. Hope to see you soon with another part.
ReplyDeleteKab? Sorry for typos.
DeleteSame feeling here i dunno how many times i have read this part and which time am reading it now. :P :P i never become tired of reading this part and again too. :D :D thanks for such a lovely story again.
DeleteSame to same Hetal. Ghooooring and waiting for the next installment. First Khushi's jooti, then Billo Rani. Next police?? Serves the 🐍 right.
DeleteAgain my comment is gone😪😪
ReplyDeleteExactly!! Smitha di.. what Kaycee di has said in second comment dts wt I am trying to say in all my comments but my bad luck even after commenting my comments gets automatically deleted from d post don't know y.. but I'll say again smitha di apke haton me jadoo hai�� u create magic by ur words.. each time wn I read a post or a story of URS I feel like everything is happening in front f my eyes.. kash agar Mai producer hotina to ur each story wld have been a serial.. I love each nd every character nd d way u have portrayed Dem.. it's just out f d world I really donno wt s ur actual profession bt u cld b an awesome writer of any movies or serials if u would get a chance..u can write each nd every emotion so gracefully nd ur words add a life to d character.. I just wish I could meet u personally.. m die hard fan of URS.. stalking u intially to read ur stories.. but den lost d access.. just a request pls give me access to read ur previous stories which I am dieing to read pls.. nd update soon di.. a very happy new year to u..may God bless u always����
ReplyDeleteExactly!! Smitha di.. what Kaycee di has said in second comment dts wt I am trying to say in all my comments but my bad luck even after commenting my comments gets automatically deleted from d post don't know y.. but I'll say again smitha di apke haton me jadoo hai�� u create magic by ur words.. each time wn I read a post or a story of URS I feel like everything is happening in front f my eyes.. kash agar Mai producer hotina to ur each story wld have been a serial.. I love each nd every character nd d way u have portrayed Dem.. it's just out f d world I really donno wt s ur actual profession bt u cld b an awesome writer of any movies or serials if u would get a chance..u can write each nd every emotion so gracefully nd ur words add a life to d character.. I just wish I could meet u personally.. m die hard fan of URS.. stalking u intially to read ur stories.. but den lost d access.. just a request pls give me access to read ur previous stories which I am dieing to read pls.. nd update soon di.. a very happy new year to u..may God bless u always����
ReplyDeleteKhushi was fabulous. She gave it good to Shyam. Wonderful way of exposing Shyam to all, especially Anjali.
ReplyDeleteHappy new year Smita.
Happy New Year Smita.. Mind blowing chapter.. everything went as per Arnav's plan.. Khushi was superb.. enjoyed Khushi hitting shyam with her jooti.. waiting to see what happens of Arnav-Khushi after Arnav flushes that rat out of his house..
ReplyDeleteHello Smitaji
ReplyDeleteHope you are well. I read your other stories again. Saying that you are an artist is too little. I am truly privileged to have read your work. You have a way with words that make me forget everything else that is going. Sometimes when I am having a bad day I remember some scenes from your stories and am able to push through. I am not that good with words but I just wanted to say thank you for giving us this opportunity to immerse ourselves in this wonderful world of Arshi created by you. I just hope that someday i get to read all the stories that i have missed as well. Take care and stay blessed.
Hi Smita, Happy New Year, eagerly waiting for an update.
ReplyDeleteWow! Shyam's goose is well and truly cooked.What is Anjali going tosay about her Shamji now?
ReplyDeletecrazy anj
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