Tuesday 4 December 2018

1. OS 21. An Unwilling Passion (Part 1)




An Unwilling Passion (Part 1)



HP opened the door, his heart quaking at the sight of the cold-eyed, stern-faced young man standing in the doorway, bag in hand. A storm was building up behind the closed expression of his employer and he wanted no part of it. No sir, he didn’t. Hide behind the atta in the store room after you serve tea, Hariprakash, he reminded himself.




“Arnav bhaiya, shall I take your bag?” he asked as he usually did, his voice low. There was no saying what the reply would be. Some days it was a curt nod. On others, it was silence. On some rare days, it was a grunt.


Today there was no reply. HP stood watching as Arnav Singh Raizada, the tycoon, walked up the steps to his room on the top floor, his bag clutched in his hand.


HP sighed. Maybe Arnav bhaiya had a headache. A dour smile flitted across his lips. Most days it was Arnav bhaiya who gave him a headache.




“Hariprakashji?” Anjali limped towards him.


“Ji, Anjali bitiya?” he asked.


“Did Chotey come home?” she asked with a frown on her face. “I thought I saw him.”


“Yes,” HP confirmed. “Arnav bhaiya went up to his room.”


Anjali pouted. “I wanted to talk to him about the pooja next week,” she complained cutely. “Yeh Chotey bhi na? He never gives me any time.”


HP swallowed hard. Pooja? Oh no! There was nothing more certain to blow Arnav Bhaiya’s temper to saathve aasman than one of his sister’s poojas when all their female acquaintances thronged this house and chattered as though chattering were an Olympic sport and they competitors.


“I will get him tea,” HP muttered before leaving for the kitchen.


“How was his mood?” Anjali called after a retreating HP.


“The usual, Anjali bitiya,” HP replied.


“Bad then,” Anjali surmised with a pout, shaking her head in exasperation. It was better to give her papad ka tukda a wide berth till dinner.


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It wouldn’t have surprised his family to know that Arnav Singh Raizada’s mood was worse than usual, but they would have been astounded to know that he was undergoing acute stress and... fear of the worst kind.


His eyes looked at the bag on his table with dread.


HP knocked on the door.


“Come in,” Arnav growled.


HP entered the room on hesitant feet, more timid than a bride on her wedding night, placed the silver tray with a mug of hot steaming tea with a lashing of lime on the low table by the bag and ran out as fast as his legs and decorum permitted.


Arnav locked the door after him. He stood for a moment, his head bowed.


This was not the moment to feel defeated or tired. This was the culmination of months of work and anticipation. Drawing a deep breath, he turned, marched to the table, opened his bag and pulled out a blue file.




A moment later he was staring at the beautiful face of the gold digging schemer who had wrecked his parents’ life and devastated his family’s existence. His eyes glittered with fury and disgust.



Garima Sasi Gupta. The bane of his existence. The immoral witch who had killed his parents and made di and him orphans. The woman who had gifted him nightmares that never ended, the creature who had sucked all joy and peace from his life, leaving him a mere shell.


He turned the page with pale fingers.


Married to Sasi Gupta.




His lips twisted wryly as he looked at the middle-aged man’s photo. Fool!




One daughter, Payal. No, not daughter. Step-daughter. Sasi Gupta had been a widower with a young daughter when he had fallen for Garima’s tricks. He glanced at Payal’s photo with scant interest before turning the page.





Madhumati Gupta. Sasi’s sister. Had a home in Laxmi Nagar, Delhi. He noted the point for future use.


 He turned the page, his eyes stilling as he looked at the beautiful face of a young girl. He dragged his eyes from her smiling face to look at her name. Khushi Kumari Gupta. Garima’s own sister’s daughter. A blood relation of Garima’s. His face tightened. An orphan adopted by Garima and Sasi.





His eyes hardened. Khushi Kumari Gupta wouldn’t be Khush for much longer when she saw what was going to happen to her aunt.




He threw the file away.


The papers fell on the ground like confetti.


Garima’s photo lay face up.


The muscles of his throat worked as he stared at the face of the woman he hated more than anyone he knew, more than his chacha, more than his father.


In fact, more than he hated himself.

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    1. Intriguing start! Scary too wow. Cant wait to read more.

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  2. And thus ensues the epic saga of nafrat paas aane na de, mohabbat door jaane na de. I know you are not much into prologues and epilogues Smi, but this one definitely seems like a prologue to a very gripping journey. The last sentence makes such an impact, "more than he hated himself". Well, Mr Raizada, not only are you gonna fall hard for the sworn enemy, the object in question Miss KKG, will make you love yourself and you will move heaven and earth to keep her khush for all eternity. <3

    P.S. Missed you here.
    P.P.S Is snakewa a part of the plot? Just checking on behalf of Kaycee. :P

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    1. LOL! Can I deny her anything? So glad you liked the beginning. Missed being on the blog.

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    2. Many muuaaahhhs to you Priya for asking "the question". It's been a long time since the viper made an appearance.

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    3. Anything for a friend, kaaycee ;-) muuaaahhhs to you too.

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  3. Hi smita di! I loved the update. I've been stalking the blog since December 1!

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  4. Loved loved loved the beginning Smitaji. Am looking forward to this story. BTW is snakewa part of the story?

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    1. Muahs to you too Dipti for asking about Snakewaa.

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  5. Wow... loved the first part.
    Very captivating...waiting to read more

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  6. "More nervous than a bride on her wedding night" - the plight of all the Prakash brothers esp. HP.

    Woo hoo !!! Hang on to your seatbelts Smitens. Looks like another roller coaster ride.

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  7. Hurrah!😄 Finally a new story! Welcome back Smitaji...I missed you and your tales.😁

    Absolutely loved the beginning😍 There are going to be alot of fireworks in our future for sure😎

    Poor Arnav and poor Khushi🙁Arnav is not going to know what hit him once Khushi enters his life. And Khushi will have to bear the brunt of Arnav's hate ..for his past and himself.

    Enough about the update...how are You? I am sorry for being absolutely MIA. I will be free once Jan ends and with it the financial statements get finalized. I will once again pester you with emails then😉

    See you in the next update!🤗

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  8. *HP entered the room on hesitant feet, more timid than a bride on her wedding night*
    Lol.. 😂😂

    OH no garima.. Ur life is gonna change for good😋 but poor Khushi most probably arnav will eat Khushi's mind and may be hurt her in all these hate drama..

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  9. I really love u for keeping our Khushi as original as ipk serial..jhalli, Lucknowi, teenager girl with lots of sanki-ness.

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  11. This is shaping up to be one rollicking rollercoaster of a ride! ASR is on the warpath and he'll be taking everyone down with him. Although he'll be the one watching himself when he meets the whirlwind that's named Khushi. Snakewa's here too? Oooo this is going to be a wild ride! So excited for this...amazing start Smita-ji!

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  12. Glad to see you back and with a bang. Love the start, gripping, leaving me with anticipation for more. Angry Arnav in destruction mode to meet Khushi who lives for her family. Eager for the next part.

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  13. Loved the gripping start loved hp's dialogues😂

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  14. Hi smita. I purchased the book waiting for you from pothi.com.
    How to forward the receipt so that i can get the passward??

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    1. Hi, just mail it to smita.ramachandran@gmail.com

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  15. Super start.. i mean Hp's monologue and his talk with anjali was cool.. just thinking how this hatred is going to turn into passion.. hehehehehehe:P


    By the way hi di... hope you are doing great..

    will be waiting eagerly to read this new story :)

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  16. Superb start.. Hp's monologues were interesting.. waiting for the new journey of ArShi to begin..

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  17. Wow. New story as promised. Thanks much Smitaji

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  18. Welcome back Smitha.. awesome start.. waiting for the rest of the story line..

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  19. Welcome back dear......Arnav has got info on who has been responsible for his parents death......can't wait for the story to unfold

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  20. Amazing... ur back...yay..
    Awesome Start

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  21. Nice start dear waiting for nxt

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  22. Just saw this post. Nice start. Hope you had a good break.

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  23. Ohhhh I am late. Wonderful as always Smita. Cannot wait to cherish another one of Smita Masterpiece.

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  24. Hey Smita!! You are back :-) :-)
    I was just re-reading one of your old stories today.

    Awesome start....can't wait to read what bitwa is planning.
    The title says a lot about what's coming up :-)

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  25. Y I'm scared of arnav anger now it's nothing new right but hope it will clam down after meeting kushi
    Congrats on new story di
    As always good can't wait to read more

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  26. My my Smitaji !!!! What a concept. Tussi you aate hi chhagaye... Welcome back my genius friend. Waiting eagerly for the next part.

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  27. Hello Smitaji,
    Wishing you and your family a very Merry Christmas!

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  28. Wishing you and the family happy holidays!! When are you starting on the second update to the new story? Waiting....

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  29. wow!! looking forward to this story!

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  30. Hi Smitaji,
    Wishing you and your family a very warm, special and filling new year 2019!
    Hope you get success in everything you do😊

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