An Unwilling Passion (Part 1)
HP opened the door, his heart quaking
at the sight of the cold-eyed, stern-faced young man standing in the doorway,
bag in hand. A storm was building up behind the closed expression of his
employer and he wanted no part of it. No sir, he didn’t. Hide behind the atta
in the store room after you serve tea, Hariprakash, he reminded himself.
“Arnav bhaiya, shall I take your bag?”
he asked as he usually did, his voice low. There was no saying what the reply
would be. Some days it was a curt nod. On others, it was silence. On some rare
days, it was a grunt.
Today there was no reply. HP stood
watching as Arnav Singh Raizada, the tycoon, walked up the steps to his room on
the top floor, his bag clutched in his hand.
HP sighed. Maybe Arnav bhaiya had a
headache. A dour smile flitted across his lips. Most days it was Arnav bhaiya
who gave him a headache.
“Hariprakashji?” Anjali limped
towards him.
“Ji, Anjali bitiya?” he asked.
“Did Chotey come home?” she asked
with a frown on her face. “I thought I saw him.”
“Yes,” HP confirmed. “Arnav bhaiya
went up to his room.”
Anjali pouted. “I wanted to talk to
him about the pooja next week,” she complained cutely. “Yeh Chotey bhi na? He
never gives me any time.”
HP swallowed hard. Pooja? Oh no! There
was nothing more certain to blow Arnav Bhaiya’s temper to saathve aasman than one
of his sister’s poojas when all their female acquaintances thronged this house
and chattered as though chattering were an Olympic sport and they competitors.
“I will get him tea,” HP muttered
before leaving for the kitchen.
“How was his mood?” Anjali called
after a retreating HP.
“The usual, Anjali bitiya,” HP replied.
“Bad then,” Anjali surmised with a
pout, shaking her head in exasperation. It was better to give her papad ka
tukda a wide berth till dinner.
***
It wouldn’t have surprised his family
to know that Arnav Singh Raizada’s mood was worse than usual, but they would have
been astounded to know that he was undergoing acute stress and... fear of the
worst kind.
His eyes looked at the bag on his
table with dread.
HP knocked on the door.
“Come in,” Arnav growled.
HP entered the room on hesitant feet, more timid than
a bride on her wedding night, placed the silver tray with a mug of hot steaming
tea with a lashing of lime on the low table by the bag and ran out as fast as
his legs and decorum permitted.
Arnav locked the door after him. He
stood for a moment, his head bowed.
This was not the moment to feel
defeated or tired. This was the culmination of months of work and anticipation.
Drawing a deep breath, he turned, marched to the table, opened his bag and
pulled out a blue file.
A moment later he was staring at the
beautiful face of the gold digging schemer who had wrecked his parents’ life
and devastated his family’s existence. His eyes glittered with fury and
disgust.
Garima Sasi Gupta. The bane of his
existence. The immoral witch who had killed his parents and made di and him
orphans. The woman who had gifted him nightmares that never ended, the creature
who had sucked all joy and peace from his life, leaving him a mere shell.
He turned the page with pale fingers.
Married to Sasi Gupta.
His lips twisted wryly as he looked
at the middle-aged man’s photo. Fool!
One daughter, Payal. No, not
daughter. Step-daughter. Sasi Gupta had been a widower with a young daughter
when he had fallen for Garima’s tricks. He glanced at Payal’s photo with scant
interest before turning the page.
Madhumati Gupta. Sasi’s sister. Had a
home in Laxmi Nagar, Delhi. He noted the point for future use.
He turned the
page, his eyes stilling as he looked at the beautiful face of a young girl. He dragged
his eyes from her smiling face to look at her name. Khushi Kumari Gupta. Garima’s
own sister’s daughter. A blood relation of Garima’s. His face tightened. An orphan adopted by Garima
and Sasi.
His eyes hardened. Khushi Kumari
Gupta wouldn’t be Khush for much longer when she saw what was going to happen
to her aunt.
He threw the file away.
The papers fell on the ground like
confetti.
Garima’s photo lay face up.
The muscles of his throat worked as he
stared at the face of the woman he hated more than anyone he knew, more than
his chacha, more than his father.
In fact, more than he hated himself.
Woohoooooooo!!!
ReplyDeleteGlad to be back!
DeleteIntriguing start! Scary too wow. Cant wait to read more.
DeleteAnd thus ensues the epic saga of nafrat paas aane na de, mohabbat door jaane na de. I know you are not much into prologues and epilogues Smi, but this one definitely seems like a prologue to a very gripping journey. The last sentence makes such an impact, "more than he hated himself". Well, Mr Raizada, not only are you gonna fall hard for the sworn enemy, the object in question Miss KKG, will make you love yourself and you will move heaven and earth to keep her khush for all eternity. <3
ReplyDeleteP.S. Missed you here.
P.P.S Is snakewa a part of the plot? Just checking on behalf of Kaycee. :P
LOL! Can I deny her anything? So glad you liked the beginning. Missed being on the blog.
DeleteMany muuaaahhhs to you Priya for asking "the question". It's been a long time since the viper made an appearance.
DeleteAnything for a friend, kaaycee ;-) muuaaahhhs to you too.
DeleteHi smita di! I loved the update. I've been stalking the blog since December 1!
ReplyDeleteThank you!
DeleteLoved loved loved the beginning Smitaji. Am looking forward to this story. BTW is snakewa part of the story?
ReplyDeleteMuahs to you too Dipti for asking about Snakewaa.
DeleteWow... loved the first part.
ReplyDeleteVery captivating...waiting to read more
"More nervous than a bride on her wedding night" - the plight of all the Prakash brothers esp. HP.
ReplyDeleteWoo hoo !!! Hang on to your seatbelts Smitens. Looks like another roller coaster ride.
Hurrah!😄 Finally a new story! Welcome back Smitaji...I missed you and your tales.😁
ReplyDeleteAbsolutely loved the beginning😍 There are going to be alot of fireworks in our future for sure😎
Poor Arnav and poor Khushi🙁Arnav is not going to know what hit him once Khushi enters his life. And Khushi will have to bear the brunt of Arnav's hate ..for his past and himself.
Enough about the update...how are You? I am sorry for being absolutely MIA. I will be free once Jan ends and with it the financial statements get finalized. I will once again pester you with emails then😉
See you in the next update!🤗
*HP entered the room on hesitant feet, more timid than a bride on her wedding night*
ReplyDeleteLol.. 😂😂
OH no garima.. Ur life is gonna change for good😋 but poor Khushi most probably arnav will eat Khushi's mind and may be hurt her in all these hate drama..
I really love u for keeping our Khushi as original as ipk serial..jhalli, Lucknowi, teenager girl with lots of sanki-ness.
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ReplyDeleteThis is shaping up to be one rollicking rollercoaster of a ride! ASR is on the warpath and he'll be taking everyone down with him. Although he'll be the one watching himself when he meets the whirlwind that's named Khushi. Snakewa's here too? Oooo this is going to be a wild ride! So excited for this...amazing start Smita-ji!
ReplyDeleteGlad to see you back and with a bang. Love the start, gripping, leaving me with anticipation for more. Angry Arnav in destruction mode to meet Khushi who lives for her family. Eager for the next part.
ReplyDeleteLoved the gripping start loved hp's dialogues😂
ReplyDeleteHi smita. I purchased the book waiting for you from pothi.com.
ReplyDeleteHow to forward the receipt so that i can get the passward??
Hi, just mail it to smita.ramachandran@gmail.com
DeleteSuper start.. i mean Hp's monologue and his talk with anjali was cool.. just thinking how this hatred is going to turn into passion.. hehehehehehe:P
ReplyDeleteBy the way hi di... hope you are doing great..
will be waiting eagerly to read this new story :)
Superb start.. Hp's monologues were interesting.. waiting for the new journey of ArShi to begin..
ReplyDeleteWow. New story as promised. Thanks much Smitaji
ReplyDeleteWelcome back Smitha.. awesome start.. waiting for the rest of the story line..
ReplyDeleteWelcome back dear......Arnav has got info on who has been responsible for his parents death......can't wait for the story to unfold
ReplyDeleteLovely to have you back!
ReplyDeleteAmazing... ur back...yay..
ReplyDeleteAwesome Start
Nice start dear waiting for nxt
ReplyDeleteJust saw this post. Nice start. Hope you had a good break.
ReplyDeleteWelcome back smitha
ReplyDeleteOhhhh I am late. Wonderful as always Smita. Cannot wait to cherish another one of Smita Masterpiece.
ReplyDeleteHey Smita!! You are back :-) :-)
ReplyDeleteI was just re-reading one of your old stories today.
Awesome start....can't wait to read what bitwa is planning.
The title says a lot about what's coming up :-)
Y I'm scared of arnav anger now it's nothing new right but hope it will clam down after meeting kushi
ReplyDeleteCongrats on new story di
As always good can't wait to read more
My my Smitaji !!!! What a concept. Tussi you aate hi chhagaye... Welcome back my genius friend. Waiting eagerly for the next part.
ReplyDeleteHello Smitaji,
ReplyDeleteWishing you and your family a very Merry Christmas!
Wishing you and the family happy holidays!! When are you starting on the second update to the new story? Waiting....
ReplyDeletewow!! looking forward to this story!
ReplyDeleteHi Smitaji,
ReplyDeleteWishing you and your family a very warm, special and filling new year 2019!
Hope you get success in everything you do😊