Part 10
It was a restless night for Arnav
Singh Raizada, the major part of which he sat by his window looking out at the
shed in which Khushi was cooking. It was dawn when she left the shed for a
couple of hours of much-needed sleep and ASR could finally lay his weary head
on his pristine pillow.
He was woken up by the persistent
ring of his phone.
Aman.
“Yes,” he growled.
“Agarwal is neck-deep in debt. Why is
he letting his son marry a penniless girl? Beats me,” Aman ran his fingers
through tousled hair.
ASR sat up in bed, all sleep
vanishing. “In debt?” he mused. “But he told the Guptas that he didn’t want
dowry.”
“The whole thing doesn’t add up,”
Aman remarked.
A moment later ASR said, “It does. He
intends to wait until the eleventh hour and then demand a huge amount as dowry.
Desperate for the wedding to happen, the Gutas will arrange the cash. That’s
the plan.”
“The crook!”, Aman was moved to
exclaiming.
“Yes,” ASR murmured. “I will stop
this from happening.”
“Sir,” Aman ventured hesitantly. “The
Guptas are our enemy.”
“I know,” ASR muttered. He tried hard
to dredge up the hatred he felt toward the Guptas, especially Garima. “But I
will take my own revenge, not enjoy it vicariously through the damage caused by
the greedy Agarwal. They are my prey, not Agarwal’s.”
“Yes, sir,” Aman agreed, not fully
certain what was going through his boss’ head. He wondered if ASR knew what was
going on in his own superior, Haridwar-trained brain.
***
He had to dissuade Khushi from
letting Payal marry that money-grubbing fellow, ASR decided. But how to do it
without letting her know that he knew the Agarwals were in debt and planning to
ditch the bride at the last moment if the dowry wasn’t paid?
A doubt crept into his mind. Why was
he fretting over Payal’s future? The image of Khushi’s tear-filled eyes flashed
in his mind, sending him all flustered, confused and anxious.
He shook his head to clear it, but
his bewilderment continued unabated.
***
“Khushi,” he called.
She looked up, her eyes lighting up
and a big smile blooming on her tired face. “Aap?”
He quickly grabbed the bag she was
lugging. It was heavy. He looked suspiciously at it. What was in it? Rocks?
“I am returning from the market,
Arnavji,” she explained. “We have a big order for tomorrow.”
“Where is Payal?” he asked, angry
that Khushi was left with the hard labour as always.
“Jiji is making laddoo for an order.
I need to get back soon,” she said with a sigh, fanning herself.
“Khushi, this shaadi,” he began.
“Aap aayenge na? Don’t tell me you
have to go to work that day!” she protested.
“No, no, Khushi, listen to me,” he
urged.
Khushi looked at him with mild
surprise in her eyes. “Kya hua, Arnavji?”
“Are you sure this is right...for
Payal?” he asked.
Khushi frowned. “The boy and girl
liked each other,” she said slowly.
“The family. What do you know about
the Agarwals?” he asked.
She looked bewildered. “Jaanna kya
he, Arnavji? They have a shop in Lucknow market. Ache khaate peete log he. They
will keep jiji happy. The boy’s mother was very sweet to her when they visited
us.”
“You..you should find out more about
them,” ASR urged.
Khushi smiled uneasily. “I will ask
babuji to do so. Hum chale? There is a lot of work left.” She took the bag from
him.
“Khushi,” he called to stop her.
She paused.
He took the bag from her. “I will
drop you home,” he offered and without waiting for her to reply, opened the
door of his car and placed the bag inside.
He held the door open for Khushi.
She entered the vehicle with an
appreciative sigh and sat back in relief. The bag was heavy and the day hot.
She relished the cool air blowing
against her face for a moment.
“Is this your car, Arnavji?” she
asked then, a mild frown on her face.
ASR’s eyes widened. He had to be very
careful or his cover would be blown. “No, the company’s,” he muttered, his eyes
on the road.
She remained silent and relaxed until
he reached Gomti Sadan. Then with a smile, she thanked him profusely for the
lift, lifted her bag and entered the courtyard.
ASR drove to the house next door,
frustrated that his words hadn’t made an impact on her.
***
In the following days, ASR made
several concerted attempts to meet Khushi and persuade her to stop the wedding.
But all of them failed. How could he get her to understand the seriousness of
the situation when he couldn’t get five minutes alone with her? he fumed. She
was way too busy for them to exchange more than a few words each time he
managed to meet her.
One time she told him, “Babuji
enquired about the Agarwals. They are good people,” as she breezed past him.
He opened his mouth to ask further,
but she was long gone, her arms laden with sarees, her plaited hair flying
behind her in the strong wind.
ASR gritted his teeth in frustration.
***
“Khushi!” he called.
“I was coming to see you, Arnavji,”
she said, laughing. Her eyes shone with joy. “Today is sangeet. Please make
sure you are free this evening.”
“What the!” Arnav blustered.
Her brows crinkled slightly, but her
smile remained undimmed. “What the nahi, sangeet. It is the night of dance and
music. Aap aayenge, na?” she asked.
Before he could reply that dancing
was anathema to him, buaji called, “Khussi, o Khussi? Where has that girl gone
off to? Who will plate the halwa? Parmeswari? Sanka Devi?”
“Aaayi, buaji,” Khushi called,
running away before Arnav could stop her.
He spent the whole evening pacing,
his fists clenched, his jaw tight, the music from the house next door fueling
his unease and the gut feeling that something was going to happen.
He looked out through the window of
his bedroom on the top floor to see Khushi dancing. Wearing a coral anarkali,
she was rocking the stage with a group of young boys and girls. The song was
unfamiliar to him, but the beat was entrancing. So was the sight of her moving
gracefully on the stage, her mehendi-covered hands and arms adding to her
beauty. He stood watching her till the dance ended and then resumed prowling.
***
The next day he watched ladies
heading towards Gomti Sadan that was decorated with yellow flowers. Most of the
guests were in yellow clothes and he watched Khushi carry a dish filled with
haldi into the house.
He turned away, feeling acute
disquiet. The wedding was to be held that evening.
He heard Khushi laugh and turned his
head to see her laughing at something an elderly lady had said to her.
Her joy was infectious. A small smile
appeared on his lips, but it soon died away. Everything in him told him that he
was going to witness a repeat of what had happened to his di.
He drew in deep breaths to calm
himself. This went against everything he believed in and had practiced to date,
but maybe he...maybe he was wrong. Maybe Khushi was right. Maybe the Agarwals
were genuinely good people. Maybe he was being too cynical. Maybe he was
just...just crazy...and too guarded and too weighed down by too many bitter
memories. Maybe he should let things happen and deal with them....
He frowned. Why was he worried about
the safety and happiness of his enemy? He shook his head to clear it. ASR and
idealism didn’t breathe the same air. And his intuition was always spot on.
***
Aaaahhhh the sweetness of Kushi is seeping through to the Akhdoo ASR. Lovely as always. It was the much needed drop of rain after a long drought (your writing I was waiting for the next chapter). Thank you
ReplyDeleteKhushi is weaving her magic around him and he’s slowly learning that with Khushi comes all sorts of feelings he’s denied himself all his adult life. He worries and she frets. Jodi made in heaven 😂
ReplyDeleteSmashing update as usual. I’ve been rereading your previous work just to get your writing and stories in my head again. Reading the books again too.
Ah.. Khushi has entered his heart unbidden. Love is in the air👌
ReplyDeleteHello there I really want to read more of your works and I read many of them on another non restricted blog of yours but then you one day decided to leave that blog and put one restricted blog instead for further posts of your works and I wasn't able to read many of your works then I thought maybe leave comment there to get permission for new blog entry but even about that I wasn't sure eoyhei so I just read those old pearls again and then here today only I stumbled upon here through Google search results and got to know you have now one more non restricted blog so I am commenting now itself but still this blog is also from 2017 only and I don't remember when you left that blog but I want to read those unposted FF of yours too but only if you grant permission.
ReplyDeleteAnd now I give you my thanks for once again starting an open blog for us and it took me 4 years to trust myself to comment on this amazing writer community works on different platforms while some I lost like MYEDUNIYA OR HINDITVADDA you can say so now I understand what a comment matters to those who take pains to post their hard work for us for no charge applied and I truly appreciate it and thank you and many other guys out there who are doing same this even in their busy lives for us.
So thanks once again for your time and these gems here and I surely will read and give my one comment about them but after reading only now I am not reading but I shall read them for sure and there is a secret too I was so poor in my English and that was the case till 12th standard but then I come to know ARSHI FF world and I got this craze to read then by reading these simple stories I learnt words from English and now I can read any englEngstory easily by this and these stories out here play great role in my learning englEngso a thanks for that too.
I am waiting for the reply.
I just read AN UNWILLING PASSION till part 9 but I am not sure how to give my opinion till now I can say about characters some things Mostly abou ASR yeah not about ARNAV or KHUSHI.
ReplyDeleteBut I don't know I think it is too early to give my opinion on this story but all I can say is that this one is a different approach to Arshi stories ASR himself finding Garima first and then it is imaginable to see him trying to exert revenue on Khushi as a part of revenging GARIMA indirectly.
That's all for now when I'LL read more I will post here till then thanks and please keep the good work going.
Arnav is fighting with himself but the determination of ASR to revenge GARIMA is too deep instilled in him that he can't see how KHUSHI is making her way in his heart and that is good to see. Hope soon ARNAV realize what he wants and that is Khushi.Yes his intuition are always spot on that is true but he need to get an insight of himself to walk on the right path ahead and like the way you are making story progress.
ReplyDeleteAnd my most liked element of an Arshi story AMAN and ASR are there in this story and in amazing chemistry.
Thanks waiting for next update.
Loved the chapter. Arnav already caring about Khushi welfare, despite what he tells himself. What is going to happen, are his suspicions going to be founded, eager for the next part.
ReplyDeleteGreat to see you back Smitha. Wonder who wins in the end ASR or Arnav?
ReplyDeleteSmitaji what an update. Aman was little confused when Arnav told he will stop this marriage before hand..poor man tried hard but couldn't. When comes to his Dushman ASR is very serious abd I mean it.😋 He is disturb when he saw haalat of his darling Dushman... Yeh pyaar ki taraf pehla kadam hi toh but ASR here is very buddhu...Khushi is fond of Jalebi... Here ASR is Jalebi and Khushi is chasani. After all bitter taste ke baad kuchh mittha zaroori hai. As usual beautiful part. Hope to see you soon with next part.
ReplyDeleteLove n hugs.
Hmm looks like Arnav is getting confused with his feelings. I pity him. He can neither hate Kushi nor love her. Hope he clears his head and heart. Wonder how the Guptas don't know that the Agarwals are in debt. Waiting eagerly for next update.
ReplyDeleteAmazing one.. worrying for your enemy ASR you surprised me.. well waiting to see what happens whether Arnav is correct or Gupta's are happy.. loved the update.. Thanks.
ReplyDeleteYou know, in all your stories I like the unique Khushi and compassionate Arnav..!!!
ReplyDeleteAwesome....Aman was confused that ASR is trying to stop the damage.....He was in Lucknow to let his enemy face the same situation as his family and now h e himself is trying to protect them....such a nice change....
ReplyDeleteAwesome update
ReplyDeleteHi just now I came across your ff . Can pls give full part of "too tempting to resist" pls pls pls
ReplyDeleteAm thinking how he is going to behave when he sees the smiling kushi crying her eyes out.. its going to be the best.
ReplyDeleteNice update di.. he is already caring for her though he doesnt want to acknowledge it.. Poor aman as always..
Hope you are doing good di.. Have a nice day.
Waiting for the next chapter!!!
ReplyDeleteUpdate cheyyu chechi
ReplyDeleteEtra nalayi wait cheyyunnu
Chechi evudeya
ReplyDeleteToday is INDIA V/S PAKISTAN MATCH AND IF INDIA WINS PLEASE GIVE US AN UPDATE AS CELEBRATION.
ReplyDeletePLEASE PRETTY please