Tuesday, 25 June 2019

8. OS 21. An Unwilling Passion (Part 12)




Part 12

Arnav was not asleep, but lying in an antique armchair, his legs raised and head laid back, contemplating the misery of the universe, especially his and Khushi’s universes.

It drizzled outside, the rain in keeping with his more sombre than usual mood.

There was a series of insistent bangs on the front door.

He sat up, frowning. Who was it at this time of the night? He got up and padded towards the door.

The bangs sounded again, much louder this time.


He threw open the door to see Khushi standing on his front step, soaking wet.



“K..Khushi?” he asked, shocked.

She stumbled towards him and caught hold of his arm. She stammered, “Ar..Arnavji..please..please come with me...please...babuji...babuji...he fell...aspatal jaana he...Arnavji...gaadi...”

“Yes, yes,” Arnavji murmured, his shocked eyes on her face wet with tears and rain. “I will get the car.”

He freed himself from her hold and ran to get the car keys. Locking the house with urgent fingers, he drove to the entrance of Gomti Sadan.

Exiting from the car, he ran with Khushi towards her house, leaping over the puddles, his mind clear of all thoughts of revenge and retribution.

He entered the courtyard and Khushi silently pointed him towards a room.

He entered it in a rush to see Sasi Gupta slumped on the floor. Garima, Payal and buaji were calling out to him in teary voices and trying to lift him, but his dead weight was too much for them.

Arnav lifted him in his arms, his worried eyes scanning Sasi’s pale face. He carried the middle-aged man to the car and soon he was driving to the nearest hospital, Khushi pointing out the way to him.


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Stroke.

The shock of Payal’s wedding being cancelled at the last minute had been too much for Sasi Gupta.

Arnav turned away from the doctor and slowly walked away to stand at a distance from the Gupta family surrounding the doctor.

What had happened today at the Guptas was only a fraction of what had happened in his house years ago. What if his nani had collapsed at the news that her only daughter had shot herself? He swallowed hard. He quickly took the phone out of his pocket and called his nani.

It was dawn and the elderly lady had woken up early to light a ghee lamp at the feet of Devi Maiyya as was her practice.

“Chotey?” she enquired. “Kaa hua? Aap hamein iss wakat kaahe phone kar rahe ho?”

“Are you...are you fine, nani?” he asked.

Nani frowned. “Hum theek thaak he. What can be wrong with me?” she asked frowning.

“Nani,” he paused.

“Kaa he, Chotey?”

“I just wanted to say that...that I am grateful to you for looking after us,” he said softly.

Nani was shocked out of her skull.

“And..and for staying strong when our lives fell apart.” He swallowed a boulder lodged in his throat. “But for you...”

There was a long silence as nani tried to regain her composure. “Chotey, when are you returning?” nani asked.

Arnav stretched his neck and rubbed his nape. He was tired and fed up of the whole revenge plan that had backfired royally. “Soon,” he replied. He spotted Garima walking towards him and quickly finished the call with nani and turned to face Garima with an expressionless face.

“Bitwaa, I want to thank you,” she said tearfully. “Doctorsaheb was saying that had you not brought us here so soon....” She couldn’t continue.

Arnav said nothing. This was not the place or the time. He made to turn away.

“Bitwaa, you are a stranger to us, lekin you helped us at the most critical time. Pata nahi aap se kaa rishta he hamara that you appeared like the almighty when we needed you the most,” Garima continued.

Something gave within Arnav.



He turned to look at her tear-stained face and said in a sibilant hiss, “I may be a stranger to you, but I know someone who is not.”

Garima blinked heavy eyes.

“Arvind Mallik. I am his son,” Arnav said quietly, his stare menacing enough to chill Garima’s blood.

There was a moment of perfect silence as Garima stared at him open-mouthed.


“Today’s tragedies in your life are not my doing, but I promise you that just as you were instrumental in my mother’s suicide and my father’s death, I will destroy your family and drag your family’s name through the mud.” Arnav turned and walked away.

Garima stood there, petrified.

Khushi came to her and asked, “Arnavji chale gaye? I wanted to thank him. But for him....”

Garima stumbled.

Khushi took hold of her and led her to sit on a bench.




Arnav walked towards the entrance of the hospital. A weight was off his mind. Now it was a direct battle between Garima and Arnav Singh Raizada. He drew in a deep breath, his spine straightening, his head arched high. A battle he would win for nothing else was acceptable to him.

“Sir,” the lady at the reception called.

He turned reluctantly.

“Sir, Mr. Sasi Gupta has been admitted in the ICU. Here’s the bill,” she held out a sheet of paper to the man who had accompanied the patient.

Arnav opened his mouth impatiently to deny any association with the cursed family, but the image of Khushi’s tired face and tear-filled eyes flashed through his head. She may not have money with her, he thought. He looked out at the rain falling on the tiles in the portico. Rushing home in the dark, battling rain to get money from home would be very difficult for Khushi. He frowned. Did she have money at home?

He took the bill from the receptionist and looked at it. The private hospital had charged a sizeable amount. His lips tightened. Regardless of how much he hated Garima, he couldn’t let Khushi take on more stress.

“I will pay for a month,” he declared.

The receptionist gaped at him.

“If Sasi Gupta is discharged before one month, return the remainder of the money to the family,” he ordered.

The lady nodded, her head bobbing like a buoy riding the sea.

Arnav dealt with the money issues and then walked out of the hospital, glad that the smell of phenyl was gone finally.




He entered his car and sat back for a moment. He hoped Khushi was fine.

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20 comments:

  1. Yeah I am first again but still not read it will read it tomorrow and give comment.
    This one is for your old story A DELICIOUS THEFT I am reading that now and every time I read it, it gives me a emotional rollercoaster ride and every time the feelings are of reading first time ever.
    Just what a Mind Blowing and Awesome story.

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  2. After 9 days from last update please bring it to a week gap please. We do wait desperately for your updates.

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  3. Great he came clean as ASR before Garima now he have peace for the battle ahead.
    Best part was ARNAV thanking and expressing his feelings for his NANI for first time openly to herself. He realized what he got after he lost his mother seeing Shashi in Near Death condition and he expressed it. Many in real life can't do that it is not hard but simply never come to mind or even if it comes it never escape from mouth so this part was my all time favorite.

    A small query don't you reply to comments anymore.

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  4. I have been following your work all through the years. Smita, I don't think anyone (any other writer) can bring the Arnav in ASR out like you do. The change, the mask falling is so rapid and you do that so eloquently. Hats off to you. Arnav protects people he loves and ASR destroys his enemies both in one paragraph wow......

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  5. I know it's Khushi's sorrow that made him restless. Glad that now Garima knew who he is. Hope she will clear her stand. I loved the way he talked with his Nani. Eagerly waiting for the next part.

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  6. wow where is the revenge here?? hehehehehe.. just kidding.. anyways di now that garima knows who arnav is i really hope she has some her side of story to explain or something.. i really do hope that..
    Waiting already for the next update.

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  7. He’s becoming torn between his need for revenge and his feelings for Khushi. The ASR in him is fighting against the Arnav part that is slowly developing due to Khushi and her aura that envelops him so strongly. He’s also slowly becoming Chotte once again: thanking his Nani, realising the sacrifices she made and was made to endure. He’s coming to realise he wasn’t the only one who was affected, and I think you have done that so wonderfully as only you can do. The show didn’t really portray that; there were very few Arnav-Nani scenes.

    Now that Garima knows who he is, I hope he gives her the chance to talk about her side of the story. Remember Arnav, there are always multiple sides - everyone who is involved has a side to tell. Don’t let your ASR anger get in the way of the truth and destroy any chance you have with Khushi!

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  8. Great. He's going to fight the battle directly. But will ASR give garima a chance to explain herself? May be for Kushi's sake. Waiting eagerly and thanks for the update

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  9. Loved it chechi
    Ella storyum pole thanee
    Superrrrrrrrr

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  10. Hope you are better now Smita...

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  11. Finally Arnav gave his identity.....but he has a soft corner for khushi....it was a touching moment when he called his nani and said his gratitude.....now he opened up, his nani will be able to make him understand that hatred is not going to help him in any way.....Awesome chapter Smita....take care

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  12. Wow!!! Arnav is torn between revenge and love!!! He totally forgot that he was supposed to get his revenge through Khushi by hurting her!!! But now he can't see the suffering of that said girl. Now he is going to extract revenge by destroying Garima's family, he said!! Perhaps Arnav should remember her family includes, Khushi, Payal, Shashi also. How would he get his revenge when he is busy smoothen out Khushi's life bu lessening all her worries. It will be interesting to see his strategy now. As by now he should have understood that Khushi is a person who can do anything to protect her family and getting revenge on Garima will directly affect Khushi and feelings or not she will not shy away from fighting Arnav!!!

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  13. Loved the chapter. Arnav thinking about Khushi and caring for her. He has taken the battle direct to Garima. Eager for the next part.

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  14. Awesome update.
    Arnav may hate Garima tobthe fullest but he cares for khushi more. He cannot see her in any kind of stress.

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  15. Arnav's care for Khushi so remarkable that his hate for Garima takes a backseat.. amazing update.. Thanks for update <3

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  16. Hi smita di,
    Wonderful update loved it. Sorry had been busy lately couldn't comment. Could you please tell me what should I do to get access to your private blog with stories? Please tell me how much to pay i will do

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