Saturday 22 August 2020

2020. 1. Heart of a Rose (Part 7)

 

Part 7

Garima stood shell-shocked as Mami clutched her with eager arms, weeping all over her shoulder.

Sasi stood gobsmacked. Where was the upper-class lady who had entered his house a few minutes back, all Benarsi saadi and poise?

“Garima, how could you forget your Manno?” mami wept, lavishly spreading her kajal on Garima’s clothes.

“Manno?” Garima asked in acute shock. She held mami away from her and gazed at the colourful face before her, unable to recognise her. The eye makeup, rouge, and the hundred other cosmetic products mami had slapped on her face had mixed and mingled, turning her face into an abstract painting by a toddler.

“It is me, your own Manno, Garima. Remember how we shared the same bench in classwaa and how the bald Maths teacherwaa would ask me questions every day and you would whisper the answers to me,” mami wept.

Garima’s mouth fell open. It was Manorama! “Manno,” she whispered, fervently hugging her dear friend whom she hadn’t seen for decades.

Buaji’s face was a picture as she looked at the touching reunion happening in her living room. She raised one eyebrow at Sasi as if to ask him what in the name of Nandkisore was happening. Sasi shrugged helplessly. He had lost the plot a while back and it didn’t look like he had any hope of regaining it.



The Raizadas were no less intrigued. They watched the happenings with interest, smiling away at mami’s nautanki. Chandu Lal was thrilled. Finally, he was seeing light at the end of a very complicated and twisted tunnel.

“Meet your jiju,” mami said, tugging Garima to Manohar who stood up with folded hands to greet his wife’s childhood friend.



“I have heard numerous stories of your escapades, Garimaji,” Manohar said laughing. “I am so pleased to finally meet you. Manno had been gnawing away at my ear with tales of your eventful childhood.”

Garima smiled, saying tearfully. “Aap hamare ghar padhare, that itself is our good fortune. I never thought I would see Manno again in this life.”

Mami introduced Garima to her entire family. Anjali hugged her warmly while nani gave her blessings with a generous hand. When Garima was introduced to Akash who bent to touch her feet, she held him by his shoulders to lift him, kissed his forehead, and whispered, “Manno’s son, so grown up. Jeeyat raho, babua.” She then turned to mami and teased her, “How come you have such a well-mannered son, Manno?”

Mami laughed out loud. The Raizadas had to smile at the truth of the statement.

“Laagat he, Garima bitiya, Akass bitwaa has more of my son in him than his nautanki mother,” nani remarked with a laugh.



When the laughter died down, Garima turned to Sasi. “Payaliya’s father, this is Manorama, my childhood friend. We studied together for years. Manno, this is your jiju. That is your jiju’s jiji,” she introduced buaji who nodded pleasantly saying with a laugh, “Laagat he koi phillum chal rahi ho, Nandkisore. Do bichade yaar meeting after years. Garima, are you sure you don’t have one portion of a soapbox and Manoramaji, the other?”

All laughed.

Garima’s face grew serious. “Manno, you have come to see Khussi?”

“Yes, for Akass bitwaa’s cousin, Arnav bitwaa. Garima, you can’t deny me our bahuriya, hello hi bye bye!”

The Guptas shared worried glances.

Into this tense moment walked in Shri. Arnav Singh Raizada.

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Sasi, buaji, and Garima gasped seeing the dapper, mature-looking, suljhe hue successful businessman who wanted to throw in his lot with that of Khussi, the jhalli rani.

“Hai re Nandkisore!” buaji exclaimed.

“Jiji,” Garima whispered, a scared look thrown at buaji.

Nani introduced Arnav to the three Guptas. Like a good boy, Arnav greeted them with folded hands. The Raizadas heaved a sigh of relief as their scion displayed perfect manners and an irreproachable attitude.

“Garima, bhere ijj Khussi? We have been waitings to see her,” mami complained.

‘Hanging upside down from the balcony next door,’ Arnav could have told his mami. He hid a smile as her image flashed through his mind.

“We thought you were here to see Payaliya,” Garima revealed.

Akash gasped.

“What?” Chandu Lal asked. Could the day get any worse?

Arnav was too shocked to respond. But the other Raizadas were vocal after a long moment of acute shock.

“Payaliya? Your other daughter?” nani asked.

“But we told Chandu Lalji that Arnav bitwaa liked Khussi’s photo, hello hi bye bye!” mami exclaimed.

“I told Madhumatiji over the phone. I did. Kasam se. I told her the bride was Khussi,” Chandu Lal tried to establish his innocence.

Buaji hit her head. “Hai Re Nandkisore! There was something wrong with our phone, Devyaniji. I couldn’t hear him fully and he couldn’t hear me at all.”

“We had no idea it was Khussi,” Sasi said with a sigh.

There was silence as the Guptas looked at the Raizadas wide-eyed and the Raizadas returned the favour.



“Is it a problem that I wish to marry Khushi, uncle?” Arnav asked quietly, breaking the silence.

The Guptas hesitated, but finally, Sasi spoke, “Bitwaa, I have two daughters. Payaliya is the older one and Khussi the younger. We were expecting to marry off Payaliya first and then Khussi.” He looked at nani who nodded, understanding a father’s desire. "So, entertaining a proposal for Khussi when Payaliya is unmarried is...difficult. Moreover...” Sasi looked Arnav in the eye and said clearly, “Khussi is an orphan. She is Garima’s sister’s daughter. After the death of her parents in an accident, we have been looking after her...” His eyes pleaded with his sister to put into words their reservations.

Buaji took up the onerous duty. “Woh kaa he, Devyaniji, our relations, especially our mother, didn’t like us taking on her responsibility. She has spent many years in this house feeling like an outsider. So we were planning to get her married to a boy in Lucknow with a large family that accepts her as she is and doesn’t mind that she is an orphan, Nandkisore.”

Arnav’s heart ached for the beautiful maiden who was alone and helpless against the world. He would give her a home and a family and make up for all the bitter experiences she had undergone in this house.

 Buaji drew in a deep breath and blurted out the truth. “He will also have to accept that she is sanki, jhalli, and a parmeswari!”

The Raizadas were too astonished to speak. Arnav blinked. Chandu Lal clutched his heart. He strongly believed that too much honesty was very detrimental to the successful negotiation of a marriage proposal and buaji was determined to cross all existing boundaries of honesty.

Garima continued from where her jiji left off.   “She is young, naughty, does everything without thinking of the consequences.” Her eyes lingered on Arnav’s pristine appearance with doubtful eyes. “It will take a lot of patience and fortitude to bear her antics.”

Buaji and Sasi nodded in full agreement.

“She is pure-hearted and fun-loving, Devyaniji, and I fear, too immature for marriage to any man, let alone someone as successful as your grandson is,” Sasi spoke softly, knowing he was disappointing the whole family.

Chandu Lal's heart sank into his jootis. Nothing could save this deal when one party was determined to undermine it by being too honest.

ASR was nothing if not persistent. Water dripping on a stone for centuries to carve out a hole had nothing on him. A breath later, Arnav said softly, “My di and I are orphans, just like Khushi. So her lack of parents is not a matter of concern for us. I have a large family that is willing to make her a part of us. And although we live in Delhi, we are from Lucknow.” He was determined to save Khushi from a life of loneliness, neglect, and penury.

Nani spoke up, “Sasiji, to know if Chotey and Khussi bitiya are compatible, I think they should meet. How can we decide if they will get along?”

All the Raizadas except Arnav added their persuasions.

Sasi looked at buaji and Garima, helpless in the face of this joint entreaty.

“The girls are with their friend next door. I will summon them,” he said quietly, leaving the room.

Arnav and Akash felt their hearts lighten. They had laid eyes on the right girls.

Garima and buaji pushed the Raizadas to taste the snacks, unaware of the thoughts rushing through Arnav and Akash’s heads.



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118 comments:

  1. Amazing,, was waiting for the update since i received the notification

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    1. Sorry for keeping all of you waiting. Real life put paid to my plans to update regularly.

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  2. Loving it! How do you come up with these story lines?

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    1. Sorry for the delay. Half the chapter was ready. Couldn't find time to write the rest.

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    2. Hi Smita, Hope you are doing well. Chapter of any length, i think, even a line would make our day.

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  4. I was so depressed with myself that i got up early on a Sunday but now it's compensated.. lovely update.. i was visiting the blog everyday waiting for your update.
    Loved each line to the core.. it was so cute.. waiting already for next update..
    Stay safe di.. and happy sunday

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    1. Thanks u, my dear. Enjoy every moment of this day. And no negative thoughts, only positive ones allowed.

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    2. yeah for sure... no negative thoughts...
      waiting for the update di.. really missing your stories so i am going back to read waiting for you again. :P :P

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  5. chechi nannayitund story.be careful,stay safe

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    1. Thank u. Ivide daily cases undu. Number increase cheiyunathallathe kurayunilla. Enjoy the story.

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  6. Chandhulalji doesn't know that honesty is always the best policy. Arnav and Akash have started dreaming already 😁

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  7. Adipoli... Adhyaitta malayalathil converse cheyyane... I just loved it.. Arnav is all set to marry khushi... If possible he will take her away right now🤣

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  8. Ahh thank you for this update!

    Manno and Garima - childhood friends reunited! How sweet the both of them are.

    Arnav uses his charm to meet Khushi. This dilwale will definitely lejayenge his dulhania! 😂 both brothers are dreamers - looking forward to the day they become dulha’s and wear the sehra’s.

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  9. What a confusion indeed, but at least both the Raizada boys and their family will get their bahuriyas. And Smitaji, i really like your Manno mami in all your stories. She is as crazy as in the show but lovabale too.

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  10. What a confusion indeed, but at least both the Raizada boys and their family will get their bahuriyas. And Smitaji, i really like your Manno mami in all your stories. She is as crazy as in the show but lovabale too.

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  11. Super fantastic update.❤️❤️❤️it. Finally the love train is on right track...

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  12. Smitaji...thanks a lot for this beautiful part. Smile lingered on my lips via ❤. Hope to see you soon with next part.

    Take care of yourself.

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  13. Hello smita,, i have sent you the purchase receipt of your ebook in your mailbox.. please give me the password of your blog stories

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  14. ahhh when will the next update be... already thinking about their meeting. Dont know how many times i have read this update already..
    Love your writing di and you too..
    Stay safe..

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  15. Wonderful update di....I loved it..
    Eagerly waiting for Arnav and Khushi meeting face to face... Thank you for the update di.... waiting for next update 🙂

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  16. Hi Smita...confusion is still continuing...you are an awesome writer...only you can write such wonderful and hilarious stories...especially mami's dialogues...your Arnav babua is so cool...Eagerly waiting to meet our parameswari

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  17. Loved the update. Garima and Manno best friends. Confusion part 1 cleared on the proposal. Eager for the couples to come face to face.

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  18. Wonderful update.
    The Gupta's underestimate ASR, for he has already accepted Khushi as his bride.
    And they might be in for another shock when Akash would soon propose Payal.

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  19. Just came across this blog.....enjoyed reading it

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  20. Wow that's amazing chapter
    I loved this di
    Ideas running in the brains of Harvard boys
    After seeing the girls
    Buaji and gupta family in for a shock
    And I was quite shocked when u revealed garima and mano mami child hood friendship
    Superb one di

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  21. I have read the update again and again
    Wonderful story
    Amazing writing
    Looking forward for another update

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  22. An entertaining update...

    Loved Mami's antics and the flabbergasted reactions og the Guptas....

    And the mix up of the brides... Lets see how the meeting goes with the two couples....

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  23. Thanks for the update Smitaji. I am greedy. Once in a Month is not enough. Stay safe and healthy and write more

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  24. Hi Smitar, How do I get the password for your blog story Sweet as Jalebi, Handpicked Bride? I want to read that stories. Can you help me?

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  25. Happy onam wishes di.. and also to all my fellow readers here.. may the next year bring all prosperity in all our lives..

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  26. Hello dear
    Loved the update .....
    Waiting for the meeting
    Keep updating whenever u have time
    Love u

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  27. Loved the update!!!!
    Waiting for more...

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  28. Eagerly waiting for the next part of this udham FF

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  29. Hi wsaiting for the update... Hope all is well in your world....

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    1. Yes, dear. Just run off my feet. I am busier than a bee!

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  30. Plz update soon. Love your stories

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    1. Yes, dear. Just so busy that I can't see straight. Hoping to be back soon. Love,

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    2. No Problem Smitaji
      Take ur time
      Take care

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    3. Thank God you are alright Smitaji. Take your own time. Stay safe, stay healthy

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  32. Eagerly waiting for their meeting.

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  33. Hi Smita. Felt happy seeing your reply..I was getting a little worried...Take care and be safe

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  34. Hello Smita hope all is well in your world... Happy to get a message from you ....
    Hope to get an update soon ....

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  35. Hope all is well in your world Smitha....

    Wishing you and your family "Happy Dussera"... May all the negativity, in and around you, is cleansed by the positivity within you.....

    Stay safe....

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  36. Hi di. Hope you're doing good.. really missing your updates.. stay safe and stay happy. Will be waiting eagerly to read more.. and i know how busy you will be in life but the avid reader in me really want a new book of yours. I was reading waiting for you, the royal bride, taking care of you, sujatha and the indulgent guardian again.. i guess it's that effect of this ranting😂😂😂

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    1. Same to same Smitaji. Eagerly waiting for the next part as well as new book.😋☺

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    2. 🤝🤝🤝👍👍👍welcome to the club..

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  37. Also wish atleast i get one update here on my birthday is 28th Oct😅😅😉

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  38. Can't wait for ASR and khushi's meet

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  39. Hi Dear, I really love the work posted by you. All your stories are beautifully crafted. It is so wonderful and pleasure to read them.

    If possible can I get new smitaramachandranauthor password, I would love to read the other stories.

    Thank you for such amazing work. And all the best for all the future endeavor's. Stay healthy and stay blessed.

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  40. Happy Diwali to all.... May this Diwali dispel darkness overcoming the obstacles that come across on your journey....

    May the lamps of love,luck,learning,laughter and happiness light your path as you and your family "Live" life to the fullest....

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  41. Hey Smitaji, where are you? Hope you are alright...

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    1. Run off my feet. Too many commitments. Sorry for the delay. Love,

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  42. Hi Smita. Hope everything is good.

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  43. hi di will we have a christmas present to open? sorry really to trouble you :( :( and i really hope you are hale and hearty :) :)

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  44. Hello Smitaji hope all is well with you... Waiting for a long time to hear from you... Please put up a note saying if all is well in your world... Stay safe....

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    1. Just so busy, my dear. And not well. Hoping to update soon.

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    2. take care di.. Health comes first. Merry Christmas and Happy New year to you and your family.

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    3. Hello Smita

      Thank you for the note... Take your time ...feel better ... look after yourself... I (we) will be waiting....

      Merry Christmas 🎄

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  45. Hi Smita..Thanks for the note....Missing your story..Get well soon..Take care and be safe

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  46. Happy , healthy and peaceful new year Smita di🙂 get well soon ... Waiting for your update 🤩

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  47. Happy new year smitha di😍😍😍😊 may this year bring peace and happiness to everyone here.. happy new year to all my friends here..

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  48. Happy New Year Smitaji to you, your family and all readers here

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  49. Happy New year Smita and to all the readers!! Wishing you and yours a very happy,healthy and blessed 2021🎉🎉

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  50. Finally got a chance to read all the updates. Loving this story❤️

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  51. Hi Smiths, hope all is well in your world. Hope to hear from you soon. It’s been ages.

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  52. Hoping to update soon. Sorry for keeping you waiting.

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    1. Stay safe during this pandemic. We are a long time readers of yours and will be waiting for you to continue writing as long as you write.
      Hope to hear from you soon.

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  53. Hi Smita....Glad to know that you are going to update soon...Thank you..Eagerly waiting

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  54. Hello
    This is Sirin Fathima
    I purchased your book waiting for you and mailed the details.
    Please check it out and send me the password
    Thankyou

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  56. Hi smita.. can u please give me tha password of your protected stories? I have already forward you the purchase receipt of your ebook in your email adress. I have been waiting for 6 months for your reply.. please please please give me the password.. thanks

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    1. Pls. send the mail again. Also the receipt for Waiting for You from Pothi.com. Sorry for delay.

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    2. Thanks for your reply. And please check your email today.. i am eagerly waiting.. thank you

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  57. hi Smitha,
    hope you are well
    i am an old reader of yours. would it be possible to get the password again for your old blog to reread your stories. i did not store the passwords :(

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  58. Hello,
    I love your stories. I sent you the payment receipt of your E-book to your email. Is it possible for me to get the password for the blog? Thanq

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  59. Smitaji how are you? Missing you .

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    1. Same to same smita di. Missing you badly.hope you are doing good

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  60. I hope you are doing good. Have you continued this story of yours in another blog ?;

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  61. Are you safe?atleast give a hi message

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  62. Hey Smitaji, please let us know you and your family are safe...

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  63. Loved the story soooo far … as amazing as your others ….plz update soon

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  64. hi smitaji.. hope you are doing good... Waiting for your updates...

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  65. It has been a year of your update di. Hope you are doing well and having a good time with your family. Onam wishes to you and your fam di.
    If you feel like continuing please update sometime.
    Will be waiting to hear from you.

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  66. Please update chechi....chechikku kuzhappamonnumillalo....

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  67. very Interesting & full of fun. Really liked it. Waiting for next update....

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  68. Interesting and awesome... please update

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  69. hello... Hope you are doing good... its more than a year you update last... waiting for your updates..

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  70. Are u ok Smitaji?
    Hope all is fine.

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  71. Hi Smita! Please continue your stories.. your stories make life seem better

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  72. Loved this...Amy plans to continue..

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  73. Please continue your stories.eagerly waiting for your update

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  74. Hey Smitaji. Sent you the receipt. Could I get the password please?

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  75. Sorry for the delay. Life has been busy and filled with exciting and trying events. I am struggling to manage all my responsibilities.

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    1. cool. its good to hear from you smita di. have a good time. If at all you are planning on writing anything new pls do let us know.

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    2. Hi there I am tried read your other stories but need password. I want to purchase your book to support your work and to continue reading your ff. Please guide me how, tq

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  76. Hi Smita, good to know you are doing good. We will continue to re-read the beautiful stories you have written, until you find the time to update the current one.

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  77. Hi Smita...Happy to know you are doing good...Thank you so much for giving us so many lovely stories...Eagerly waiting for you to continue the current one..Take care and be safe

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  78. Happy new year Di.!!! Hope this year brings your dreams true and be happy always..

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  79. Hope you are ok and reading comments. I'm new here first time commenting. I read one of your ss e book "taking care of you". I love it. A and Ju are awesome. If you are still writing stories please let me know how can I get the access...

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  80. Hi ,

    U r such good writer we always wait for ur stories, this one was so nice y don't you complete this one please it is a kind request

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  81. Hello chechi.. Natil evidya.. നല്ല സ്റ്റോറി ആണ് എല്ലാം... എന്നാ ഇനി അപ്ഡേറ്റ് ചെയ്യാ.... പാസ്സ്‌വേർഡ്‌ എങ്ങനെ കിട്ടും

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