Thursday 18 January 2018

22. OS 19. His Elusive Lover (Part 22)

20 Jan 2018, noon

Darlings, with your generosity, we raised Rs.10,000. Other well-wishers raised another 10,000. The amount required has been collected. Now Girija and her husband will not lose their home.

Please don't send me more than the cost of the book now.

Thanks a million to Soumya, Alpana, Rajasri, Supriya, Rash, Nancy and Nirmala for your generous contribution.

Thanks to Deviyanee, Ramya, Fermeen, Sadia, Suja, Saman and Stories 1408 for buying the book.

Love,
Smita






Heartfelt gratitude to Hetal, Girija and Meemou for contributing to the Girija fund. Your generous contributions have been paid into her account.

Thanks to Jaya, Sravya and Parvathi for buying the book.






Thanks to Anju, Sudha, Maya, Sahasranju, Mansi and Avan for purchasing Sujatha.


Paid in Rs 7,000 solely due to Meemou and Sudha's generosity. May God bless all of you.






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We have reached the last part of  His Elusive Lover, which will be posted before evening today.

I will be taking a short break of a couple of weeks to write another story that has been nagging me, asking to be written.

In the meantime, I would like you to purchase SUJATHA, a story I wrote many months ago. The cost is the same as A Royal Bride. The netbanking and PayPal details are as given in Part 1 of The Handpicked Bride on the old blog.



Those using PayPal are requested to pay in $5.
email id: smita.ramachandran@gmail.com


Those transferring money to my bank account are requested to pay Rs.300.
Name: Smita Ramachandran
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Then contact me via email. Those preferring net transfers, please include your transaction number in the mail. I will send you a copy of the story.






SUJATHA tells the tale of an independent but wounded girl who has a love-hate relationship with Madhavan, my adorable hero with a man bun.

Kindly complete your purchase by the end of February, 2018.




Part 22



Arnav led Khushi out of her room to the living room where the two families were sitting, stunned and bemused.

“I am taking Khushi with me to my house now. We will be getting married tomorrow at 7am. You are welcome to attend it,” Arnav announced, handing over a card with his home address to Sasi Gupta. He turned to look at buaji and Garima. “Khushi has taken only her mother’s jewels, a document and her parents’ photo from your house.”

“Hum chalte hein, babuji, amma, buaji, jiji,” Khushi bid them farewell, hands folded. “I will never forget that you took me in when I had no one. I am sorry I couldn’t oblige you in marrying a boy you wanted me to. How could I do that when I want to spend my life with Arnavji?”

Buaji sniffed. Garima flushed with anger.

Payal and babuji smiled at her.

“Khussi, hamesha khuss rehna, bitiya,” babuji said.

“Apna khayal rakhna, Khussi,” Payal said tearfully. “Phoone karna hamein.”

Khushi hugged Payal and took her father’s blessings. When she went to touch Garima and buaji’s feet, they turned away in anger.

“Khushi, chalein?” Arnav asked.

“Ji,” she replied, drying her wet cheeks.

Arnav looked directly into Sasi’s eyes and said, “I will take care of Khushi. She will never want for anything.”

Sasi nodded.    
               
He led Khushi to the door.

At the doorway, he paused, turned around and said to the Guptas, “It is better you know this. I purchased Gomti Sadan.”

The Guptas stared at him, their eyes like saucers and their jaws on the ground. But more shock was yet to come.

“I bought it for Khushi. Now the house is in her name. Khushi Kumari Gupta owns Gomti Sadan,” he stated.

Leaving a shell-shocked audience behind, he took Khushi’s hand and led her to his car.



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He opened the car door for her.


As she took her seat, he saw her feet in the jooti he had sent her.


“They look beautiful when you wear them,” he whispered, touching a pearl on the jooti.


“Shukriya,” Khushi murmured, feeling overwhelmed and shy.


He lifted her chin with one finger and looking into her hazel eyes, he said, “No one has fought my battles for me. Ever. No one has defended me, except you.”

He took hold of her hand and kissed her palm.

Her breath hitched at his touch.


He put his hand into his pocket and pulled out the earring she had been holding in her hand when he had called her. Slowly he pushed the stem of the ornament into the piercing in her ear and fastened it.


Her eyes were shut and she was breathing heavily.


He stayed still, his eyes taking in her beauty.


She opened her eyes and looked at him. 

                                
“Shall we go to your house?” Arnav asked softly.


She looked at him for a long moment and then nodded, tears sprouting in her eyes.




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They arrived to a rapturous welcome by the Raizadas. Only Anjali was absent from the party, but no one minded that.


Nani was at the door, ready to welcome the new bahu.


“Khussi bitiya,” she exclaimed as she saw Khushi being escorted out of the car by Arnav.


Mami came running with a thali holding a lit lamp, sindoor, flowers and rice.


“Bhere ijj hamri bahuriya?” she asked, thrusting the thali into nani’s hands. 


She peeked over nani’s shoulders and a beatific smile spread over her face as she saw Arnav and Khushi walking towards them.


“Hello hi bye bye! Hamre Arnav bitwaa and hamri Khussi! Eben Aishwarya Roy and her husband bill be jealous of ujj bhen they see our couples,” mami declared.


“Nani,” Arnav said, his cheeks flushed, “Here is your bahu.”


“Haiyye!  Hamre Arnav bitwaa ijj blushing like he used his mami’s blush on his facewaa,” mami chortled.


All laughed.


Nani did aarti of Arnav and Khushi and both of them touched her feet and took her blessings. She hugged and kissed them on their foreheads.


Mama hugged them both.


So did mami, crushing Arnav in her arms as she wept all over his shoulder, leaving streaks of makeup on his coat.


“Ab bas bhi karo, Mano,” mama teased her. “Keep some tears for the wedding too.”


Akash hugged his bhai and touched his bhabi’s feet.


“Beta,” mama told Khushi, “we are your own family. Don’t hesitate to ask us if you want anything. It is your right. Haq se mango.”


Khushi couldn’t control her tears.


“Rote nahi, beta,” mama consoled her. “Arnav bitwaa, don't let our bitiya cry.”



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Dinner was fun.


After many days, the Raizadas were free to be happy.


They embarrassed Arnav by telling exaggerated tales of his childhood pranks to Khushi.

He sat there, his eyes filled with laughter, his soul drenched in happiness, his heart light with hope.


Khushi’s face was one big smile as the whole family roasted Arnav, using the rare chance they had gotten to get back at him.


Anjali sat silently at the dinner table and answered in monosyllables when her family tried to interest and involve her in the conversation.


Khushi had felt bad when she had seen Anjali’s morose face when the family had converged in the dining room for dinner. Her attempt to step back and hide behind Arnav had been foiled by him who had taken her hand and tugged her to stand by him.


He had told Anjali, “Di, I have brought Khushi home. We will be getting married tomorrow morning at seven.”


Khushi’s heart had almost stopped in fear.


But all Anjali had done was nod.


“I have made arrangements for your cruise. The nurse will be accompanying you,” he had added.


Anjali had only nodded.


Khushi stole a glance at the stone-faced Anjali who was spooning food into her mouth.


“She will be fine,” Arnav said under his breath. “Don’t worry about her.”


Mami said loudly, “Khussi, we selected ten shadi ka joda for you. You pick one. Iph you don’t like hamre choicewaa, we bill call Ram Lal. He bill bring more joda phor you.”


“I will take one from the ten you have selected, mamiji,” Khushi said with a smile.


“My daughter, Ratna’s jewellery is with Chotey in his locker. Khussi bitiya, they belong to you now,” nani said.


Anjali glared at nani, her eyes steely.


Nani continued, “Anjali bitiya was given her share when she got married. Now all that remains belongs to you, Ratna’s bahuriya.”


Anjali looked down at her plate as the others enthused about the wedding arrangements.



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Khushi went to her old room through the door opening from the corridor. The connecting door was shut and she was too shy to try and open it.


Smiling faintly at the memory of the jokes mami had cracked while they sat deciding on the joda and the jewellery, she showered and changed into a pair of pink nightclothes she found in the wardrobe.

She then got into bed, making sure that she could see the sliver of light at the bottom of the connecting door.

A knock sounded on the connecting door.

“Come in,” she called, her voice shaking.

Arnav opened the door and stood in the doorway looking at the enchanting picture she made, curled up in bed.

“Tomorrow night, you will be with me in my room, Khushi,” he reminded her, his eyes naughty.

Khushi blushed.

He walked towards her bed.

She sat up, clutching the blanket to her chest.

He sat down by her.

“Arnavji,” she began.

“Hhmm?” he asked, his eyes on her lovely eyes and tempting lips.

“I am scared of darkness,” she confessed. “I used to sleep looking at the light from your room.” She pointed at the gap between the door and the floor. “My parents died at night in a car accident.”

He swallowed past the lump of pain in his throat.

“I am scared of speed,” she admitted. “And I am scared of sleeping alone. I managed to do it last time because I knew you were in the next room. I am telling you all these things so that you can change your mind if you want to. Matlab, you don’t have to marry me.”

Arnav struggled to smile. He said, “On the contrary, I have to marry you now.”


“Ji?” she asked, confused.

“I can’t let you sleep alone, can I?” he asked, running a gentle finger down her cheek.


She blushed.


“I will make sure that the night lamp is on in our room all night,” he said. “I promise not to drive fast. I also promise never to leave you alone at night and to keep you so busy all night that you have no time to be scared.”


Khushi gasped, her face as red as a tomato. Finally she said, “You...Arnavji...you are saying such things...matlab, I never thought...” She lowered her flushed face.


Arnav smirked. “Well, I never had a bride before,” he said.


“Amanji would be so shocked,” Khushi said in wonder.


“He would be,” Arnav conceded, trying hard to keep a straight face. “I have never spoken to him like this.”


Khushi had to laugh. “You are so naughty!” she exclaimed.


He quickly bent his head and stole a kiss from her, his warm, hard lips on her cheek.


Her hand went to cover her rosy cheek and her lashes fell to cover her bashful eyes.


“I love you, Khushi,” he whispered, holding her hand. “More than my life. I never thought a girl like you would come into my life.”


Khushi blushed again, but raised her eyes to meet his. “Hum bhi...hum bhi aap se bahut prem karte hein,” she confessed, her voice low and shaky.


His hold on her hand tightened.


“Khushi, I am sorry for bringing you her to trap Shyam,” he said, his eyes serious and remorseful. “I regret that more than I regret anything else in my life.”


Khushi smiled at him. “If you hadn’t hatched that plan, I wouldn’t have gotten to spend time with you,” she reminded him.


The guilt remained in his heart. He would make up for his mistake every day of their lives together, he promised her silently.


Khushi looked at the strain on his face. She knew that he was beating himself up about his mistake.


She leaned forward and kissed him on his lean cheek.


Shock and pleasure drove the guilt from his mind.


“Khushi!” he teased. “You are so shameless! Kissing your groom, are you? And that too before shaadi?”


Khushi blushed furiously, but managed to say, “He is my groom. I can do whatever I want to.”


“Really?” he teased. “What else do you want to do to me?”


“Aap jaake so jayiye,” Khushi begged, hiding her red face in her blanket.


“On one condition,” he stated.


“Kya?” she asked.


“Leave the door open so that I can see you,” he demanded.


“Ji,” she agreed.



They spent the night looking at each other, lying in their respective beds.





Soon it dawned, the sun bringing with it their wedding day.


The Raizadas gathered around her and Arnav, helping them to dress. Jokes at their expense were cracked at regular intervals. They were hugged to an inch of their lives and literally led into the mandap by their family.

The Guptas sat with the guests, staring at the grandeur of the house with wide eyes and open mouths.

Sasi Gupta did kanyadaan and soon the wedding was over.



The new bride had a designer diamond mangalsutra and red sindoor in her maang and was hugged by the Raizadas till she felt her ribs would collapse.


Arnav had a smile on his face that Aman had never seen before.


As Aman stood on the sidelines enjoying ASR’s happiness, Khushi came to him and quickly touched his feet, taking his blessings.


Aman whispered, scandalised, “Khushiji, you are my boss’ wife. You shouldn’t touch my feet.”

“You are my bhaiyya first and Arnavji’s employee next,” Khushi asserted.


Before Aman could remonstrate, Arnav came to him and hugged him tight, murmuring, “Thanks, Aman,” in his ear.


Khushi beamed.




Buaji and Garima managed to get hold of Khushi.

“Khussi, you have selected a very rich boy,” Garima said in awe.

Khushi said nothing.

“You have everything now, including our house, Nandkisore,” buaji said. “Now show some kindness to Payaliya, your jiji. Let her marry from Gomti Sadan.”


Before Khushi could respond, buaji saw Arnav walking towards them.


“Hum chalte hein, Nandkisore,” she said, leaving, dragging Garima with her.


“What did they want?” Arnav asked directly.


“To have jiji’s wedding at Gomti Sadan,” she replied honestly.


He smiled at her, his eyes full of love. “The one benefit of having an akdoo, short-tempered, bulldozer of a husband who shouts at people is that you needn’t take the responsibility or the blame. If you wish to refuse, tell them that I wouldn’t approve. They will never dare to approach me.”

Khushi looked cutely cross as she said, “You are not akdoo. Nor are you a bulldozer. You used to be short-tempered, but aren’t now. Don’t put yourself down. I won’t tolerate it, hum kahe dete hein.”


In the presence of his delighted family and all the slack-jawed guests, Akhdoo Singh Raizada kissed Khushi Kumari Gupta a.k.a the lion tamer on her cheek.



The End

76 comments:

  1. Smita plz post the link for the transaction.Cant seem to recall them at present.

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  2. I'm saving my spot here...the link is on the old blog spot?

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    1. Sorry for this late reply, but it just meant if I gave a final review to this story it actually meant said story has ended. I don't like giving last reviews to your stories but life goes on and the next one comes along and it's starts all over again (the jig, the laughter, anger and happiness etc)

      I had to read it again just to make sure for myself. As usual, all the words in the dictionary won't be enough to comment on your chapter but I'll try like I've been doing for the past number of them.

      I loved it. Loved the whole story and this final chapter was the perfect ending to ASR-KKGs love story.
      He came, said his piece and left with his bride in tow. When he told the Gupta's about Khushi owning their house, I cheered! "Take that! 🥊" and "in your faces!! 😛😝" was all I could think off. Tables have turned. Garima and Buaji are still so...ugh. Payal and her father: you can count on them to be happy for Khushi.

      Raizada's!!! They made me so happy and proud. Welcoming their bahu with such joy and pomp, truly showing how happy they really are for their Chotte and his wife. Loved Mami and her comments and ASR, so cute when he blushing 😊 😊 Such a joy to read about.

      The scene in the bedroom was so ☺️😊☺️😊☺️😊 Had me blushing as well for Khushi. This Aashiq Singh Raizada has learnt well in the romance department. Haha he didn't need Aman to help him this time. 😂😂

      Garima and Buaji have no shame, even now still asking for Payal. Typical 🙄🙄 and Anjali. How could you be angry for Khushi taking her rightful share of your mothers jewellery?! Never cease to amaze me these lot.

      Loved the last bit. ASR's right Khushi. No one will blame you for having such a khadoos man for a husband, such is ASRs character. Don't mind him.

      Thank you Smita-ji! Thank you so much. For all of your stories. I intend to buy your newest one soon and am looking forward to whenever your decide to write your next ASR-KKG one. Adios 😘

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  3. sure done di :) will be waiting for the update.
    I already have that lovely story with me. All lovely readers here its a good story to read again and again. she has added another lovely flower to her beautiful garland. Do experience it.

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  4. Can someone plz post the old blog link.... forgotten 🤔

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  5. Dear Friends,

    We all know Smita the author, who has given us countless moments of sheer joy. Our go-to person for Arshi fix. But few of us know the magnanimous person behind the writer. She is a genuine dog lover and by that I mean she takes in strays, gives them her unconditional love, provides them a home. She raises funds for charities. She has supported many a people who are less fortunate, both financially and emotionally. Currently she is raising money for an elderly lady called Girija and her husband. Girija is fighting cancer and to provide for the exorbitant medical expenses the couple had to pledge their home. They cannot afford to make the installment payments anymore and the bank is foreclosing their house. This is the reason Smita has put her book 'Sujatha' on sale. All the proceeds from the sale would go to the Girija cancer fund. So friends here's an opportunity to show Smita how much we love her. Go buy the book and get yourself a handsome Dr Madhavan, a withdrawn Sujatha and a dreamy HEA.

    In the words of the Dalai Lama, "The roots of goodness are in the soil of appreciation for goodness". Let's all render our support to this worthy cause.

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    1. Thank u, darling! I treasure our friendship.

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    2. Priya, I definitely second, third and fourth ( does this even exist ) your sentiments.

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    3. Smitaji
      You r the Khushi in real life for such selfless service. May God Bless you with Success in your efforts.

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    4. Priya
      Many thanks for making me know the Real Smita. Unlike you all here, I am a very late entrant to IF. Early 2016 and hence have been reading her stories only in late 2016.

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    5. PS: This cause is very dear to me having lost both my parents to Cancer

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    6. Thank you, KC <3 ... and yes, it does exist!

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    8. So sorry to know that about your parents, Krisgeet. My heartfelt sympathies. You are in my thoughts. <3

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    9. Love you too for putting the write up Priya... Can I add my two cents... If possible kindly increase the amount you send in addition to the book cost. Quite a bit is needed to be raised... Mind you I am not insisting... Its your choice...

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  6. As long as you write, I'll keep buying your stories. Just finished "Waiting for You" once again. I'm not going to say how many times I've read it before. Shivettan - siiiiiiggghhhh. Loved it all over again.

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    1. You will love Madhavan too. Pukka.

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    2. Same to same Kaycee. You loved Shivettan, will love Madhavan too.

      Smitaji I already purchased it. Loved it. Eagerly waiting for the next one.

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  7. Hi...smita
    This story and all the stories u write are as always amazing...and personally..i cannot wait to read another one from you.
    I loved waiting for you and i know i am going to love SUJATHA as well.
    I shall get back to you after the purchase to share my experience.
    Until then...keep writing and keep posting.

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  8. Amazing ending.. loved it.. Khushi didn't like Arnav calling himself the names and Mrs Raizada literally made him understand that in a superly wifey way making Raizada kiss his bride in front of all the guests present for their wedding.. it was awesome story.. Thanks a ton Smita.. will be buying the book and sending you the link..

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  9. Loved the ending, lovely. Arshi together and married. I have sent you the payment and an email, eager to read your new book.

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  10. It was a quick, but beautiful ending..waiting to read your book and the next story..

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  11. Hi Smita.
    I have loves reading every single story which you have written and that is because you make me fall in love with each one of them... just like with this one.
    Loved it as always.
    Will be waiting for the next story.

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  12. As usual my Dil maange moreeeeee. Lovely ending. Loved the way Khushi got her share of unconditional love. Eagerly waiting for your next story and of course Arshi's new story too.

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  13. Super awesome ending dear. Loved it. Looking forward to reading Sujata as well as next ArShi story.

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  14. Very beautifully ended... Khushi got the cake and Anjali, buaji and Garima the just desserts...

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  15. Hi Smitaji!

    First of all, this story was brilliant. The comeuppance of Shyam, Garima, Buaji and Anjali was well and truly deserved. This end once again reiterates what I said in my last mail to you.
    As always, I am eager for your next story.

    Now for Sujatha...

    It was a meticulous piece.
    Once again you have shown that your strength is unparalleled when it comes to description of scenic beauties. The rustic landscape, especially Sujatha's home were beautifully described.
    As for characters...

    Sujatha- You have brought out a truly strong character. She's a lady who is torn between heart and mind, past and present. Her bitterness due to the stigma attached to her name was aptly portrayed, so was the feeling of her fury at the betrayal meted out by Madhavan when he chose to believe Rahul.

    Madhavan as a complex, love lorn man tugs at the heartstrings. His remorse for the way he treated Sujatha which led to him losing her regard for him was truly poignant. He is the epitome of truth that everyone has flaws... that no one is perfect. Even the best, most compassionate and loving of us can do mistakes. To err is human...

    But my favorite was Kalyani amumma. She was damn adorable! Her craze for cricket, her indomitable spirit and her attitude towards life was inspiring. Her match making ways were fun to read.

    Rahul- he is one despicable character. Unscrupulous, vicious and scheming, he is an astute manifestation of the shades of 'grey' existing in humans which can overpower even most moral of men. Jealousy can drive people to unimaginable lengths and that's what he stands for.

    All in all, a great story with complex character and a beautiful happily ever after.

    This is a story you don't want to miss. The fact that the money will go to such a noble cause only adds to its charm.

    Its a must read.

    Thank you, Smithaji, for this delightful book and hats off for your good work! Thanks for sharing all your works with us.

    Love,
    Akansha

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    1. Yes you are right about Kalyani ammumma
      She reminded me about my Naani and Badi Ma who would be glued to TV even in the days of Test matches egging SUNIL gavaskar N srikant to score runs and not just play the ball without scoring.

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  16. Smita...that was a brilliant story...loved it...:)

    Have made a transfer ...please check...long live you...

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  17. Amazing ending smitha di.. yet another beautiful story ended.. can't get enough of ur writings.. after reading ur stories I knew u we're fabulous writer with a most creative mind but after reading the cause of u selling ur writing I got to know how kind hearted u r.. u truly r an inspiration to many. Sorry dt I couldn't help I was busy with work nd now wn I came to check I read all d comments nd post. Wish I could have helped u somehow. Please smitha di let me know how to access ur previous blog if u want me to buy any book I'm ready to do dt also.. eagerly waiting to read ur next story.

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    1. Just go to Pothi.com and buy Waiting for You. Forward me the receipt. I will send u the PW.

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    2. Sorry for d delay smitha di.. got to see ur reply today. Few more days waiting for my salary. Wl surely buy nd send u d receipt. But can I ask you something? Can u let me buy any other book f URS which s of much less cost den waiting for u. Honestly di I want to read waiting for u. Bt facing too many financial pblms being d only person who feeds 5 members in a family had to think bfr even spending a single rupee n myself. Dts d only reason dt it took me so many days to actually buy a proper mobile to read ur stories or to b in a position wr at least I could try to buy ur stuff. Bt still I'm lagging behind.. Would be kind of u if u consider my request please don't take it otherwise, I'm a genuine fan f ur stories nd im trying my best to get access to all ur work. Hope u consider my request 🙃

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  18. Wow what a lovely ending to a wonderful story. From throwing away Khushi's roses n breaking the vase Arnav has come a long way under her watchful eyes ready with a pyaali of chaai, Caffee and specially made nimboo paani.
    Loved the way Raizadas smothered the pyaar ki bhooki Khushi with lots if love.
    Enjoyed the WAY Anjali was banished to forcibly go on a cruise and the way the jungle Guptaas were dealt with by Akhdoo ASR.
    Lovely ending to the tale with Aman too getting the credit due to him.

    Sumatra
    Awesome story
    If you had Gauri waiting for Shivettan in Waiting for you, you have Madhavettan waiting for his Sujata in this book. Loved the Cupid Kalyani ammumma.

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  19. Hey there S ji,
    A Very Happy 2018 to you and yours. Just finished Sujatha. Actually that is not true. Finished Sujatha and then I had to go and read Waiting For You... all over again. Of all your stories, Waiting For You is my most favorite. Don't get me wrong... Loved Sujatha. You convey heartbreak with such conviction. A Home for Meenakshi was also fantastic (Full disclosure I switched the names of protagonists to Arnav and Khushi). Even in Sujatha, I could see Arnav in Madhevettan. Blowing up in the heat of the moment, before he had all the facts (Of course he paid a high price for it.) But I swear I could not mould Shivettan into Arnav. I tried... I failed... And I didn't mind it a single bit. Your Shivettan was pure perfection.
    So Waiting For You is closest to my heart. I am not going to be able to do justice to the beauty of the story. The grace of the two lovers is... is so ( and here comes the struggle for words that I knew would trip me up) awesome? (yep I was right, doesn't do justice at all) The dignity with which the two comport themselves... I loved it. Somehow in pop literature/theater/cinema, the intensity of love has to be portrayed by the lovelorn behaving in the most asinine manner. A manner guaranteed to make one cringe. But your Gauri and Shivettan... Gauri with her innocence, her blind love maturing into deeper understanding of her love (Shivettan)... which made her both fall in love (convoluted much?) deeper and simultaneously willing to give him up. God I loved her inner strength... even more so, her inner monologue. It made me smile and tear up at the same time. And Shivettan, with his sense of responsibility and fair play. Two amazing characters that even you, S ji, will have to work hard to top.
    I loved your portrayal of the dynamics of village life, loved Gauri's relationship with Unni, her family, loved all the celebrations, loved the foods ( twenty six curries... seriously?), resented the fact that but for my ignorance of the culture and the language, I would have probably enjoyed the story even more. For example what does Shivettan mean? I mean (laughing here) how is it different from Shiv, or Shiva or Shivam. I think you used all forms of his name in the story. Is Shivettan a term of endearment?
    Obviously I could go on and on. But really, the emotions in the story tug at the heart. Sigh... I should stop coz I think I am preaching to the choir!
    Thank you for sharing your stories S ji, both on and off the blog. Love them. Please keep them coming.
    Regards,
    Sam

    P.S. Needless to say His Elusive Lover was a most enjoyable read.

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  20. Wow finished it off in a single day. Once i started reading it just couldn't put it down. Thank you for sharing your amazing talent with us.

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  21. Finished reading Sujatha - again. As usual, I read it entirely too fast, loved it and re-read it. You spend so much time and effort and energy into writing and sharing your stories, it is only fair we do just by savoring every word, every experience and all the laughs and tears of your characters. I really do try to read the stories slow the first time, but that never happens. You’ve got us hooked! Beautiful story! Fell in love with Madhavan. Never thought I’d care for a man bun! But your Madhavan seemed to change that. 😉 Looking forward to many more of your works.

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  22. Sent you the PayPal transfer of $5. Mansipagosa@gmail.com. Do send me your book please

    I love your stories. They are so wonderful.

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  23. Hi Smitaji,

    Sorry for being MIA...the Asli Dunia was kicking my butt and so i was inactive for quite a while...anyways things are looking up again...so here i am;)
    First of all let me congratulate you for saving Girijaji's house...you really are a gem of a person and i am glad that i know you. As long as there are people like you in this world there is some hope for humanity to survive.
    Ahh...i have missed so much. The journey of another wonderful story has come to an end...I loved the part where Khushi made use of her Jutis and Shyam got what was coming to him...even the Gupta ladies had their mouths shut..Arnav never really does anything in half measures does he...the way he claimed khushi as his own in front of the Guptas and Sinhas made me fall in love with him again...you are a magician Smitaji...am glad that i got the chance to read your works.
    On a different note i wanted to ask you if purchasing the book Waiting for you From Pothi dot com and forwarding you the receipt is ok to get the access to your old blog..i would love to read all the stories that i have missed over the years...please do let me know soon.

    Take care and enjoy your break. Hope to see you with another tale for us to enjoy. God bless you!


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    1. Just go to Pothi.com, purchase Waiting for You and send me the receipt.

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    2. Thank you for replying smitaji. Have downloaded the book. Will send you the receipt as soon as possible.

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    3. I have sent you the receipt Smitaji. Please do see once.

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  24. Read Sujata. It was an amazing fantastic story. I am especially in love with Kalyani ammuma and Narayani. Looking forward to your next book and new ArShi Story

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  25. Hi Smitaji,
    Please do check you email once. I have forwarded you the receipt for Waiting for You.
    Missing you and your stories.
    Hope to hear from you soon.
    God bless you!

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    1. I haven't recd your mail, dear. What is your name? Did you send it to smita.ramachandran@gmail.com?

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    3. I didn't receive it, my dear. Pls send it to me again.

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    4. I have sent it again Smitaji....if you still haven't received it do let me know...

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    5. I haven't received a mail from you, dear. Koi technical prob?

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    6. I think there must be some problem. I am out of town today ...will be returning tomorrow morning...will send you another mail till then ..but if you aren't getting my e-mails ...then I, too, am at a loss about what to do. Do you have any suggestions Smitaji?

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    7. Pls check if you remembered the dot between smita and ramachandran in the email add. Will look forward to your mail.

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    8. Smitaji I have sent you a mail from my other account. Hope that it will reach you. The email is is in my name.
      Please let me know if you receive it otherwise I don't know how I will resolve the problem.

      Thank you for your time Smitaji.
      Take care 😊

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    9. Smitaji, is it possible that my emails go to spam? Could you please check into it when you have time? I even sent you one from a different id but I guess you haven't received it.

      Take care

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  27. Hi didi,

    How r you?? Long time... How is life asa everything

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  28. Have you started a new story yet Smita? Just asking. I assume you will be continuing with this site.

    Hope all is well at your end.

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  29. Hello. Hoping that after the most amazing sujhatha we have anther Arshi. Hope you r in good health and we get to read a new story soon.

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  30. why did it end? I read this story from chapter 19...then I went back and started from chapter 1...and I've been glued to my screen ever since...This is the first time I am commenting on an Arshi story, and I have to say that your writing style is one that held my attention. I love reading so when a story is not that good, I dismiss it immediately like ASR. But this one held my attention. The way you paid attention to detail, having enough humour and serious talks in the story was just mind blowing. There are a lot of writers out there who still find it hard to write a simple yet meaningful story like you do. Well done and thank you

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  31. You write extremely awesome stories and i simply love reading them. Thnx for allowing me to do so. I greatly appreciate it. Thnx.

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  32. Loved the whole story
    Sorry for not commenting some parts it's 1:30 at night so mind is kind of zombie state

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  33. I enjoyed this one so much.

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  34. I have read this story more times than I remember. And I don’t get bored of reading it over and over and over. Thank you for such thrilling and amazing stories

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  35. Lovely story, Smita. Thank you

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