Monday, 23 April 2018

1. OS 20: The Temperamental Tyrant (Part 1)



Will be posting today. Finally.

Sorry for the delay, darlings. Had to have a minor surgical procedure. Now back to form and raring to go.

Thanks for your patience.

Love,
Smita




The Temperamental Tyrant  (Part 1)







Hariprakash sighed looking at the stairs. His knees were killing him, but Arnav bhaiyya had to have his early morning tea, hot as hell and black as sin.

As he made to move ahead, a sweet voice stopped him.

“Hariprakashji, I will carry the tray up. Aap takleef na karein. Which room is it?” she asked, taking the silver tray from him.

He turned to look at the sweet, sanskaari girl standing by him, dressed in a fluorescent pink salwar kameez, stitched by a darzi in one of the bylanes of Lucknow. Her nose pin twinkled and her hazel eyes shone.

HP smiled fondly at the girl. “Khushiji, it is the last room. It is very kind of you to offer to help me.”

Khushi smiled widely at him and made to climb the steps.

HP’s face lost its smile.

“Khushiji,” he called.

She turned to look at him.

“Suniye....knock on the door. Arnav bhaiya is very particular, very set in his ways,” he said, almost hyperventilating.

“Arnav bhaiya?” she asked, frowning.

“You met Anjali bitiya yesterday,” he reminded her. “Arnav bhaiya is her brother.”

“Acha,” Khushi said with a smile. The brother of the pious lady who seemed permanently attached to the pooja thali must be older than her, she thought. Otherwise why would Hariprakashji call him Arnav bhaiya?

“He is...he is thoda gussawala, thoda...khadoos. Be very careful when dealing with him. Knock on the door. Open it. Place the tray by his bed, draw the curtains and leave,” HP instructed, a scared look on his face. He glanced at the clock. “Go fast. It is time for his tea.”

Older than Anjaliji, with a beard and matted locks and a temper to boot. Pukka sant aadmi, like sage Durvasa who was known for his temper, she concluded. 

“Don’t worry about me, Hariprakashji. I am Khussi. How can anyone be gussa with me?” she asked, beaming away. Then, with a flounce, she turned and went up the steps, humming Dekha he pehli baar, saajan ki aankhon mein pyaar...tan ta  na na, tan ta na na, tan ta na na, tan.

Hariprakashji wiped off the beads of sweat that had formed on his forehead in spite of the chill in the early morning air. Pyaar? He hoped she was not fated to witness one of Arnav bhaiya’s legendary temper tantrums! The last three men employed to assist him had run for their lives, fled the house before they had unpacked completely. He hoped Khushiji was made of sterner stuff and stayed at least a month.



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Khushi knocked on the door, still humming the love song,

Dilbar tujhe milne ko kab se tha mein bekarar...
Ab jaake aaya mere bechain dil ko karaar....

She frowned. There was no reply.

Hariprakashji had asked her to knock and enter. He hadn’t mentioned she had to wait for the bearded ascetic’s permission.

So she pushed the door open with one hand, the other balancing the silver tray with one mug of an evil-looking, black concoction.

The room was dark and smelled faintly of sandalwood.

Her guess was correct, she congratulated herself. Hari Prakashji’s Arnav bhaiya was definitely a sanyasi who did pooja in his room. Otherwise, why would his room smell of sandalwood? Like brother, like sister, she thought.

Breathing in the fragrance, an appreciative Khushi looked around for the windows so that she could draw the curtains and let some light in. She finally located them and moved towards them on silent feet to draw the curtains.

Mellow, golden light filled the room.

Through the glass windows, Khushi laid her eyes on the most beautiful garden she had ever seen, set around a small pool.

She drew in a deep breath, thrilled at the sight.

She turned around and moved away from the window, to set the tray on a low table nearby.

Light fell on a sleeping Arnav’s face.

He stirred and opened his eyes, expecting to see HP.

Pink? Really?

He blinked. When had HP taken to wearing a pink so bright that he needed shades to see it?

“HP?” he called, his husky voice turned huskier by sleep.

His voice sent shivers down Khushi’s spine.

She turned to look at him and stood gaping at him, her eyes wide in shock.

"What the!" he exclaimed.

He sat up in bed, the sheet falling to his lap, revealing his finely muscled chest clothed in a beige t-shirt.

Her eyes ran over his molten chocolate eyes, the unruly hair, the finely shaped jaw, the stubble, his cute ears and his straight nose. She tried to keep her eyes on his face and not slip down to peek at his chest. After all, she was Sasi Gupta’s sanskaari daughter. From Lucknow.

“You are not HP!” he declared, his shocked eyes trying to take in her bright and colourful gorgeousness, her dangling earrings, her nose pin, her hazel eyes and her open mouth.

“You are not old!” she protested. “Where is your beard?”

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39 comments:

  1. eagerly waiting for the story.hooe your health is fine

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    1. Much better now. Happy to be back here and writing.

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  2. Welcome back my darling Smitaji😘

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  3. Smitaji sending you hugs... lovely start. Bholi Kabutri VS Sahitan Saiyaa... Wow first meeting mein hi itte saare questions??? Definitely they will fight...poor HP...
    Waiting eagerly for the next part as usual.

    Take care of yourself

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  4. Welcome back. Glad you are doing fine. Love the start, interesting first meeting. Eager for the next part, the fireworks.

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  6. hey! read the his elusive lover in one go. such a beautiful story it was and was very happy at last Arnav took a stand and literally swept Khushi off her feat in front of her bua and mother. Served them right for never thinking about Khushi and taking undue advantage of her emotions. they didn't even leave her mother's Bangles! gosh!

    But at last Khushi and Arnav got their happily ever after with each other.

    A new story yay! This Khushi is pagli! you are not old! lol! such a cute start. let's see how Arnav bitwa take this pink pink girl in his room bright and early.

    Also,Wanted to read too tempting to resist from the start but some intial chapters are not here but on another blog and is password protected. If you can please provide me it's password. My email is: arshinadamon@gmail.com

    Thanks
    -arshina

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    1. Kindly purchase Waiting for You, my e-novel from Pothi.com and forward me the receipt. I will send u the Password.

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  7. Welcome Back Smitha!! Lovely start

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  8. Hey Smita
    Welcome back. Good to know that you r fine. Had been doggedly visiting daily n the day I missed Lo behold there was an update. Anyway Better late than never
    Lol what a start
    A Pink clad HP and Sant Arnav with a Beard.
    Wonder when will Khushi know how far from Santhood is Arnav Bhaiyya.
    What if she calls him Arnav Bhaiyya like HP? What the ?

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    1. LOL! Arnav will have a heart attack. That is, if he has a dil.

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    2. Oh yes. His dil is under lick n key. I wish she had said Daadhi instead if beard!!! Would have loved Khadoos Durvasa with shocked expression

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  9. Yaaaaay new story! πŸŽŠπŸŽ‰πŸŽŠπŸŽ‰

    First of all hope you're doing well Smita-ji, wishing you lots and lots prayers of well being your way.
    Thank you for this new story of ASR-KKG. The title alone has got me captivated (like all your titles have!) she thinks he's a saint? Wonder what will happen when that notion gets rocked off!? Haha he was woken up to a vision in pink! Like a freshly bloomed flower in his room! HP wearing pink πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚ the song she was singing was so apt but that definitely did not occur hehe πŸ˜‚. Looking forward to more!

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    1. Thanks, darl. Arnav-Khushi takkar has happened. Now moving towards aankhon mein pyaar...ya nafrat?

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  10. That was such interesting and awesome start. Made my day!!! Looking forward to next part

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  11. Hope you're doing well, Smitaji. Wishing you a really speedy recovery.
    This new story was worth the wait of all these months. Durvasa Rishi, indeed! With blazing eyes, sharp tongue, and cantankerous demeanor, ASR does give the fabled sage a run for his money. Poor Hariprakash! So much for trying to warn the poor soul. Like insect in the treacherous web of spider, Khushi is bound to get trapped in Arnav's web. And how well it started! The tale of 'Temperamental Tyrant' and 'Naughty Nymph'.
    Waiting eagerly to see how everything pans out until... 'Dekha hai pehli baar, sajan ki akhon me pyaar...' comes true.

    Take care!

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  12. Welcome back Smitaji.. praying for your good health..Ahh..wat a start♥️loving it..sajan ji or swami

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    1. Thank u, my dear. LOL! Now it is enlightenment time for Arnav.

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  13. Welcome back Smita.. hope you are back to good health.. super start ..

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    1. Full of energy and ready for work! Next part today.

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  14. Wow a new story didi.. Awesome start..
    How r u now smita di? i hope you are doing fine. Take rest nicely and thanks alot for the new story. was missing it so damn much..
    Loved the first part..
    Stay happy. stay healthy..

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    1. Doing wonderful, dear. Will post today.

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  15. Welcome back Smita. Hope you are well.

    Thank you for another fantastic start.

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    1. Doing great, my dear. Will post today.

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    2. Thank you. Look forward to reading it.

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  16. Hope you are fit as a fiddle ...

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  17. So glad you are back. Was really worried... Hope you are doing well!! Awersome beginning, waiting for the next parts of story!

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    1. Second part is up, darl. Check it out. Doing great now.

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  18. Beautiful start....beauty meets the beast

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  19. Okay this is so funny one
    Liked it

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  20. How dare arnav to crash khushi imagination and give intro with the stubble πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚

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