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Smita
Part 12
Khushi knocked on the door of her
buaji’s home at night.
“Aaawat he, Nandkisore!” buaji called
out. “Who is this banging on the door at midnight?
She unlatched the door and stared
open-mouthed at Khushi.
“Khussi? Tum? What are you doing here
at midnight?” She looked out at the almost deserted road. “You travelled alone,
Nandkisore?” She clutched her heart.
Khushi abandoned her bag and hugged
her buaji as tight as she could.
Tears that she had been holding back
till then, flowed copiously down her face.
Madhumati held her weeping niece
close, terrible thoughts filling her mind.
“Suno, Khussi, kono oonch neech to
naahi hui na?” she asked, her heart thumping.
Khushi shook her head in the negative
in between sobbing.
Madhumati took a deep breath of
relief.
“Ab chodo mujhe, Nandkisore,” she
said, setting the girl aside. “Bring your bag in, sit down and tell me what is
wrong.”
Khushi obeyed. Sitting by her buaji
on the sofa in the living room, under the benevolent gaze of Devi Maiyya, she
recounted the events of that night.
Madhumati swelled up in righteous
indignation. “How dare that nani accuse you, Madhumati Gupta’s niece, hamri
Sasi babua’s daughter of trying to entice a boy? Is this our sanskaar,
Nandkisore? Is this the way we marry off our daughters? We would have never
sent you to work in a house if you hadn’t insisted and Sasi babua weren’t so
sick.” She turned to look at Khushi. “You are my Sanka Devi, my Parmeswari, my
Bhooleswari Devi. But no one, no one can accuse you of trying to attract men.
You may drive them away with your antics, but never lure them to their doom.”
Khushi dried her tears.
“Khussi, call Happy Singh now. Ask
him to bring his auto. I will go now to that nani and give her a piece of my
mind. How dare she insult my niece, Nandkisore?” buaji fumed.
“No, buaji, don’t,” Khushi begged.
“Let it be. Chodiye.”
“Kaisen chode hum, Nandkisore?” buaji
asked. “She insulted you, she insulted our whole family.”
“What is the use, buaji?” Khushi
asked. “How can I prove my innocence? There is no proof,” Khushi wept. “How can
I make her understand that I never....”
Buaji looked at the sobbing girl.
After a moment, she said, “Khussi, go to bed. It is very late. Kal savere
dekhenge. Your buaji will find a solution to this problem, Nandkisore.”
Khushi nodded.
One hour later, Madhumati entered
Khushi’s bedroom.
She was asleep, her cheeks still
stained by tears.
Madhumati pulled the blankets up to
her neck and smoothed her hair back from her forehead. It was a cold night.
How could a poor, helpless girl prove
her innocence against an accusation made by a rich, elderly woman? Especially
in such a case when proof couldn’t be produced?
Buaji sighed. Dishonour was a stain
that could never be rubbed out.
***
Arnav stood in the living room and
shouted, “Khushi!”
Akash stood up from the chair he had been sitting on in his parents’ room. “That sound like bhai,” he murmured.
“Why is he shouting?”
Mami looked at mamaji, apprehensive.
“Let ujj go downs,” she said.
“Saasumma must have said something for hamre Arnav bitwaa to pheel angry,
angrier, angriest.”
All three of them rushed down to hear
Arnav shouting for Khushi.
“Bhy ijj he asking for Khussi, hello
hi bye bye?” mami asked, perplexed. “Bhat did she do?”
“Maybe she disobeyed him,” mama said
softly. “You know Arnav bitwaa’s anger.”
Akash looked at Arnav’s pale face,
wondering what that slip of a girl had done to merit so much aggression.
“Khushi, where are you?” Arnav
shouted.
HP peeked into the room.
“HP,” Akash asked softly, “where is
Khushi?”
“Missing, Akash bitwaa,” HP said
quietly.
“Missingwaa?” mami asked. “Ijj she a
mojri to go missingwaa?”
Anjali and nani joined them, Anjali,
unaware and nani, resolute.
Mama asked, “Arnav bitwaa, why are you
calling Khussi? Why did HP say that she is missing?”
“Because she is missing, mama,” Arnav
said, his ironic gaze resting on nani. “Her bed hasn’t been slept in.” Anger
and fear and an acute sense of loss ate into him.
Anjali gasped. She turned to look at
nani with fear in her eyes. Had nani killed Khushi and buried her in the
flowerbed?
“She didn’t sleep here last night?”
mama asked thoughtfully. “She served dinner, didn’t she? She must have left
soon after that. Lekin raat mein..ek ladki akeli... Bitwaa, I think we should
call the police. This city is not safe for girls at night.”
“Good idea,” Arnav said, his accusing
eyes on nani. ‘Control, control,’ he told himself. Losing his temper would do
only harm. And the stakes were too high here. “Call the police, mama,” he said.
Nani drew in a deep breath.
Mama moved towards the phone.
“Manohar, stop,” nani ordered.
Manohar halted, looking curiously at
his mother. His hand hovered above the phone receiver.
Anjali clutched her heart, sure that
nani had killed Khushi.
“There is no need to call the
police,” nani declared. “Khussi went to her house of her own free will.”
Arnav smiled sardonically, fury
rising like a wave in him.
Mama asked, “She went home at night?
Kaa hua, amma? Was there a family emergency?”
“How should I know?” nani asked
furiously. “I am not the caretaker of every little maid in Delhi and Lucknow.”
Mami looked away. Mama fell silent.
Akash clenched his fist. He swallowed
his anger and asked Arnav, “Bhai, shouldn’t we call her and make sure she is fine?”
Arnav nodded tightly and motioned
towards the phone.
Akash looked at HP.
HP hobbled to his room and brought
back a piece of paper with Khushi’s phone number.
Arnav stood there, fists clenched as Akash
called Khushi. His heartbeat picked up speed.
She answered.
“Khushi, this is Akash Singh Raizada.
We just wanted to make sure that you reached home safe.”
“I am fine,” she replied.
Arnav held out his hand for the
receiver.
Akash relinquished it.
Nani pursed her lips.
“Khushi?” Arnav asked, his voice shaking
slightly.
There was a moment’s silence. Then
she said, “Arnavji?”
The name was sweet music to his ears.
“Yes,” he replied. “Why did you leave RM?”
Nani’s eyes widened.
A moment of silence later, Khushi
said, “I am fine, Arnavji. Aap apna khayal rakhiyega.”
He was not in the mood to be fobbed
off with such an answer. “I asked, why did you leave RM? That too at the dead
of night. Tumhe kuch ho jata to?” he thundered.
She smiled at his concern.
He could hear her smile in her voice
as she said, “I am safe. Aap pareshan mat hoyiye.”
“Why did you leave RM?” he asked
again, striving for patience. “Answer me, Khushi, dammit!”
She tried to keep her tears at bay as
she replied, “It was time to leave. My buaji...I wanted to be with her.”
Arnav swallowed hard. He asked,
“Really, Khushi?”
She couldn’t lie any longer.
“Hum...hum chalte hein, Arnavji. Aap sahi wakt par dawayi leejiyega. Please eat
on time and take care of yourself.”
She cut the call.
Arnav lowered his hand holding the
receiver, but stayed lost in thought.
Akash took it from his hand and
replaced it.
“What did Khushi say, Chotey?” Anjali
asked.
“That she wanted to be with her
buaji,” Arnav replied, a frown on his face.
“Hein?” mami asked. “If she wanted to
see her buaji, she could have gone savere savere. Bhy run away like a thiefwaa
at night?”
“HP!” Arnav called.
“Yes, Arnav bhaiyya?” he asked.
“What did Khushi do after serving us
dinner?” he asked.
“We cleared up. Then...then...” he
hesitated.
“Then?” Arnav was merciless, his eyes
sharp and focused.
“Naniji asked me to summon Khushi,”
HP admitted.
Anjali gasped.
Mami turned to look at nani, surprise
in her painted eyes.
Arnav smiled without humour.
“Then?” he asked.
“Khushi went to naniji’s room. That’s
all I know,” HP revealed.
All eyes turned to nani and then
towards Arnav.
“So, nani, why did you want to see
Khushi?” Arnav asked, his voice quite and menacing.
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ReplyDeleteLoved the book that read it all in one go without any break. Brilliant story, relationships forming and blossoming. How relationships take turning points at stages of life. Beautiful locations and significant rituals.Thank you for the story.
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DeleteThks, when r u updating part 12 dear
ReplyDeleteSunday or Monday.
DeleteWaiting...ππ
DeleteThunder, lightning & rain....
DeleteArnav Ka haal- e- Dil....
ReplyDeleteTu nazm nazm sa mere
Honthon pe thehar ja
Main khwab khwaab sa teri
Ankhon mein jaagun re
You stay on my lips
Like Nazm Nazm (poetry)
I stay in your eyes
Like dreams dreams
Tu ishq ishq sa mere
Rooh mein aake bas ja
Jis aur teri shehnai
Uss orey main bhaagun re
You come and inhabit
In my soul like love love
Wherever there is your shehnai
I run towards there
Haath tham le piya
Karte hain vaada
Ab se tu aarzoo
Tu hi hai irada
Hold my hand dear
Let's make a promise
From now on, you are desire
And only you are intention
Mera naam le piya
Main teri rubai
Teri hi toh pichhe pichhe
Barsaat aayi, barsaat aayi
Call me by my name
I am your Rubai
Only behind you
It rained it rained
(Rubai is a poem, or verse of a poem)
Tu itrr itrr sa mere
Saanson mein bikhar jaa
Main fakeer tere qurbat ka
Tujhse tu maangun de
You are like fragrance
Spread out in breath
I am beggar around you
I ask you from you, give me
Wah, wah!
DeleteHi Smita. I have been refreshing the page every five minutes! I cannot stop myself. Please update soon and put me out of my misery!
ReplyDeleteSame pinch
DeleteSmitaji: what a beautiful story. As much as I enjoyed Ammu and her Mahietta, I really loved the “involvement “ of Girija. Between her and Gomati’s efforts a new realization is made or maybe just reinforced. The journey to that awareness is both endearing and almost comical. Love the way you weave in faith, important traditions and beautiful landscapes to add depth and dimension to your stories. Whether I know what the rituals are or not and regardless if I’ve traveled to the places you mention, I feel as though I’m part of the experience. Looking forward to many more stories from you!
ReplyDeleteSo glad you loved the story.
DeleteSmitaji...TIG what a wonderful story. Loved every character very much. Mahietta's Ammu and their beautiful journey, from loneliness to their togetherness. Their feelings and respect for each other. Two beautiful ladies and their efforts to bring M n A 's together. Loved this story very much. Would love to read more n more stories.
ReplyDeleteMuah
Deleteplease update soon...
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DeleteMuah. So happy.
DeleteWaiting for the update my dear
ReplyDeleteWoah!!! The Spanish Inquisition by Angry ASR... Nani is in for a big shock!!!
ReplyDeleteHi Smitaji, sorry for asking this stupid question, but wanted to clarify - Is Anjali married in this story?
ReplyDeleteNo..ha..ha.. This story has enough problems without us having to deal with Snake too.
DeleteThank you for not having to deal with the snake...
DeleteOh Smita
ReplyDeleteHow you like to leave us dangling at the edge of the cliff!!!
Would have loved to see NaNiji when Arnav was concerned over a lowly maid Khushi.
Ha..he..ha..
DeleteP! What a pleasant surprise :-)
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Deletewow another super nice update.. cool cool as ever.. and now am dreading what he will do after hearing everything from nani in her point if view.. hehehehe... please update soon.
ReplyDeleteAnd your book was so lovely di that i read already a couple of times.. though it started of in little sad way but the way you depicted their emotions were out of the world.. loved it totally. i thank god for introducing you to me. seriously you are a boon.. thanks for the book and will be waiting for the next one.
Boon? I am floating in heaven! Love,
DeleteNext update will be dramatic big time!! Can so hear ASR's tune in the background for THAT!! Nani's going to get it now!! Fireworks π₯ will blast from the roof of Shantivan!! ππ GO ASR! Defend your lady! Loving Buaji in this fic of yours! So amazing.
ReplyDeleteNow for book review: what can I say that hasn't already been said?! You've captured my heart again with your story. Pehle Meenu, then Gauri, then the Rajkumari (forgotten her name sorry) and now Sree! And your heroes keep getting better and better! I don't know much about the South Indian culture, but you've taught me so much from your stories. The traditions, the rituals and the festivities! Galore! They all sound amazing. Thank you for a great lesson in your culture! Love how Mahi didn't stop her from growing up independently and let her grew into her own self. Most guardians would focus on having their wards at home, safe and sound but not Mahi. He stepped aside and let her learn how to live her own way. I also loved the two women; his mother and aunt. Such forces against the evilness of her Mama-Mami (selfish lot they are!) Sree tackled them well too. All in all, fabulous story and looking forward for the next one whenever that is.
So happy
DeleteVolcano about to burst open on Nani... nice update..
ReplyDeleteMuah,
DeleteNice update.. update soon
ReplyDeleteArnav knows that khushi has left because of his nani. He is sure that his nani would not tell him the truth if he asked. Also khushi is not willing to be him the truth.
ReplyDeleteAb aaya camlewa moutainwa ke under....brilliant but too short.
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DeleteHi Smita. I loved the update. Oh cannot wait for ASR to explode! Pleaaasssse give us another update soon. It is really hard to wait so long in anticipation of the explosion. It would be so cool if Nani ended up forcing ASR to realize his feelings for Khushi much earlier than his emotionally challenged brain would normally be capable of!
ReplyDeleteLoved the update. Arnav using his brain on finding out why Khushi has disappeared. Looks like Arnav nani collision to happen. Eager for the next part.
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