Thursday, 26 July 2018

12. OS 20. The Temperamental Tyrant (Part 12)




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Part 12



Khushi knocked on the door of her buaji’s home at night.

“Aaawat he, Nandkisore!” buaji called out. “Who is this banging on the door at midnight?

She unlatched the door and stared open-mouthed at Khushi.

“Khussi? Tum? What are you doing here at midnight?” She looked out at the almost deserted road. “You travelled alone, Nandkisore?” She clutched her heart.

Khushi abandoned her bag and hugged her buaji as tight as she could.
Tears that she had been holding back till then, flowed copiously down her face.

Madhumati held her weeping niece close, terrible thoughts filling her mind.

“Suno, Khussi, kono oonch neech to naahi hui na?” she asked, her heart thumping.

Khushi shook her head in the negative in between sobbing.

Madhumati took a deep breath of relief.

“Ab chodo mujhe, Nandkisore,” she said, setting the girl aside. “Bring your bag in, sit down and tell me what is wrong.”

Khushi obeyed. Sitting by her buaji on the sofa in the living room, under the benevolent gaze of Devi Maiyya, she recounted the events of that night.

Madhumati swelled up in righteous indignation. “How dare that nani accuse you, Madhumati Gupta’s niece, hamri Sasi babua’s daughter of trying to entice a boy? Is this our sanskaar, Nandkisore? Is this the way we marry off our daughters? We would have never sent you to work in a house if you hadn’t insisted and Sasi babua weren’t so sick.” She turned to look at Khushi. “You are my Sanka Devi, my Parmeswari, my Bhooleswari Devi. But no one, no one can accuse you of trying to attract men. You may drive them away with your antics, but never lure them to their doom.”

Khushi dried her tears.

“Khussi, call Happy Singh now. Ask him to bring his auto. I will go now to that nani and give her a piece of my mind. How dare she insult my niece, Nandkisore?” buaji fumed.

“No, buaji, don’t,” Khushi begged. “Let it be. Chodiye.”

“Kaisen chode hum, Nandkisore?” buaji asked. “She insulted you, she insulted our whole family.”

“What is the use, buaji?” Khushi asked. “How can I prove my innocence? There is no proof,” Khushi wept. “How can I make her understand that I never....”

Buaji looked at the sobbing girl. After a moment, she said, “Khussi, go to bed. It is very late. Kal savere dekhenge. Your buaji will find a solution to this problem, Nandkisore.”

Khushi nodded.




One hour later, Madhumati entered Khushi’s bedroom.

She was asleep, her cheeks still stained by tears.

Madhumati pulled the blankets up to her neck and smoothed her hair back from her forehead. It was a cold night.

How could a poor, helpless girl prove her innocence against an accusation made by a rich, elderly woman? Especially in such a case when proof couldn’t be produced?

Buaji sighed. Dishonour was a stain that could never be rubbed out.



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Arnav stood in the living room and shouted, “Khushi!”

Akash stood up from the chair he had been sitting on in his parents’ room. “That sound like bhai,” he murmured. “Why is he shouting?”

Mami looked at mamaji, apprehensive.

“Let ujj go downs,” she said. “Saasumma must have said something for hamre Arnav bitwaa to pheel angry, angrier, angriest.”

All three of them rushed down to hear Arnav shouting for Khushi.

“Bhy ijj he asking for Khussi, hello hi bye bye?” mami asked, perplexed. “Bhat did she do?”

“Maybe she disobeyed him,” mama said softly. “You know Arnav bitwaa’s anger.”

Akash looked at Arnav’s pale face, wondering what that slip of a girl had done to merit so much aggression.

“Khushi, where are you?” Arnav shouted.

HP peeked into the room.

“HP,” Akash asked softly, “where is Khushi?”

“Missing, Akash bitwaa,” HP said quietly.

“Missingwaa?” mami asked. “Ijj she a mojri to go missingwaa?”

Anjali and nani joined them, Anjali, unaware and nani, resolute.

Mama asked, “Arnav bitwaa, why are you calling Khussi? Why did HP say that she is missing?”

“Because she is missing, mama,” Arnav said, his ironic gaze resting on nani. “Her bed hasn’t been slept in.” Anger and fear and an acute sense of loss ate into him.

Anjali gasped. She turned to look at nani with fear in her eyes. Had nani killed Khushi and buried her in the flowerbed?

“She didn’t sleep here last night?” mama asked thoughtfully. “She served dinner, didn’t she? She must have left soon after that. Lekin raat mein..ek ladki akeli... Bitwaa, I think we should call the police. This city is not safe for girls at night.”

“Good idea,” Arnav said, his accusing eyes on nani. ‘Control, control,’ he told himself. Losing his temper would do only harm. And the stakes were too high here. “Call the police, mama,” he said.

Nani drew in a deep breath.

Mama moved towards the phone.

“Manohar, stop,” nani ordered.

Manohar halted, looking curiously at his mother. His hand hovered above the phone receiver.

Anjali clutched her heart, sure that nani had killed Khushi.

“There is no need to call the police,” nani declared. “Khussi went to her house of her own free will.”

Arnav smiled sardonically, fury rising like a wave in him.

Mama asked, “She went home at night? Kaa hua, amma? Was there a family emergency?”

“How should I know?” nani asked furiously. “I am not the caretaker of every little maid in Delhi and Lucknow.”

Mami looked away. Mama fell silent.

Akash clenched his fist. He swallowed his anger and asked Arnav, “Bhai, shouldn’t we call her and make sure she is fine?”

Arnav nodded tightly and motioned towards the phone.

Akash looked at HP.

HP hobbled to his room and brought back a piece of paper with Khushi’s phone number.

Arnav stood there, fists clenched as Akash called Khushi. His heartbeat picked up speed.

She answered.

“Khushi, this is Akash Singh Raizada. We just wanted to make sure that you reached home safe.”

“I am fine,” she replied.

Arnav held out his hand for the receiver.

Akash relinquished it.

Nani pursed her lips.

“Khushi?” Arnav asked, his voice shaking slightly.

There was a moment’s silence. Then she said, “Arnavji?”

The name was sweet music to his ears. “Yes,” he replied. “Why did you leave RM?”

Nani’s eyes widened.

A moment of silence later, Khushi said, “I am fine, Arnavji. Aap apna khayal rakhiyega.”

He was not in the mood to be fobbed off with such an answer. “I asked, why did you leave RM? That too at the dead of night. Tumhe kuch ho jata to?” he thundered.

She smiled at his concern.

He could hear her smile in her voice as she said, “I am safe. Aap pareshan mat hoyiye.”

“Why did you leave RM?” he asked again, striving for patience. “Answer me, Khushi, dammit!”

She tried to keep her tears at bay as she replied, “It was time to leave. My buaji...I wanted to be with her.”

Arnav swallowed hard. He asked, “Really, Khushi?”

She couldn’t lie any longer. “Hum...hum chalte hein, Arnavji. Aap sahi wakt par dawayi leejiyega. Please eat on time and take care of yourself.”

She cut the call.

Arnav lowered his hand holding the receiver, but stayed lost in thought.

Akash took it from his hand and replaced it.

“What did Khushi say, Chotey?” Anjali asked.

“That she wanted to be with her buaji,” Arnav replied, a frown on his face.

“Hein?” mami asked. “If she wanted to see her buaji, she could have gone savere savere. Bhy run away like a thiefwaa at night?”

“HP!” Arnav called.

“Yes, Arnav bhaiyya?” he asked.

“What did Khushi do after serving us dinner?” he asked.

“We cleared up. Then...then...” he hesitated.

“Then?” Arnav was merciless, his eyes sharp and focused.

“Naniji asked me to summon Khushi,” HP admitted.

Anjali gasped.

Mami turned to look at nani, surprise in her painted eyes.

Arnav smiled without humour.

“Then?” he asked.

“Khushi went to naniji’s room. That’s all I know,” HP revealed.

All eyes turned to nani and then towards Arnav.

“So, nani, why did you want to see Khushi?” Arnav asked, his voice quite and menacing.

61 comments:

  1. This weekend for sure! Thanks Smita-ji 😘

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  2. Di whats the story about? I will pay by tomo.. pakka sure.. if you has tez it would have neen lot better.. anyways i will transfer the money and mail you

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    1. I have TEZ, darl. You can do that next time.

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  3. I was waiting for this announcement. Will send you mail with recipt in two days. Love n hugs.

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  4. Looking forward to read it smita

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  5. Sent via paypal. Eager to read the story. Love your stories.

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  6. Hi Smita - Where is the link to make the purchase?

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    1. Just transfer the cash and give me the transaction no: and forward a copy of the receipt via email. I will send you the pdf file of the novel.

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    2. Oh ok. Let me do that right away :-)

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  7. Hi Smita, Just paid and forwarded info by email. Look forward to reading it.Thanks

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  8. Sonali, can you contact me via email, pls?

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  9. Loved the book that read it all in one go without any break. Brilliant story, relationships forming and blossoming. How relationships take turning points at stages of life. Beautiful locations and significant rituals.Thank you for the story.

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    1. Same here!! I finished reading the whole story in one sitting. Beautiful story Smita. I enjoyed every phase of their relationship

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    2. Thanks, both of you. Loved writing it.

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  10. What a wonderful book smit a dear, enjoyed reading them, it really touched my heart the way mahietta took care of ammu, I really wish we all had a man like mahi to take care of us. Hats off to u my dear for yet another wonderful and amazing book...... May God bless u and your writing. A hearty thank you zillion times.

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    1. Thank you. I so enjoyed writing the book.

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  11. Thks, when r u updating part 12 dear

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  12. Arnav Ka haal- e- Dil....

    Tu nazm nazm sa mere
    Honthon pe thehar ja
    Main khwab khwaab sa teri
    Ankhon mein jaagun re

    You stay on my lips
    Like Nazm Nazm (poetry)
    I stay in your eyes
    Like dreams dreams


    Tu ishq ishq sa mere
    Rooh mein aake bas ja
    Jis aur teri shehnai
    Uss orey main bhaagun re

    You come and inhabit
    In my soul like love love
    Wherever there is your shehnai
    I run towards there


    Haath tham le piya
    Karte hain vaada
    Ab se tu aarzoo
    Tu hi hai irada

    Hold my hand dear
    Let's make a promise
    From now on, you are desire
    And only you are intention

    Mera naam le piya
    Main teri rubai
    Teri hi toh pichhe pichhe
    Barsaat aayi, barsaat aayi

    Call me by my name
    I am your Rubai
    Only behind you
    It rained it rained
    (Rubai is a poem, or verse of a poem)

    Tu itrr itrr sa mere
    Saanson mein bikhar jaa
    Main fakeer tere qurbat ka
    Tujhse tu maangun de

    You are like fragrance
    Spread out in breath
    I am beggar around you
    I ask you from you, give me

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  13. Hi Smita. I have been refreshing the page every five minutes! I cannot stop myself. Please update soon and put me out of my misery!

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  14. Smitaji: what a beautiful story. As much as I enjoyed Ammu and her Mahietta, I really loved the “involvement “ of Girija. Between her and Gomati’s efforts a new realization is made or maybe just reinforced. The journey to that awareness is both endearing and almost comical. Love the way you weave in faith, important traditions and beautiful landscapes to add depth and dimension to your stories. Whether I know what the rituals are or not and regardless if I’ve traveled to the places you mention, I feel as though I’m part of the experience. Looking forward to many more stories from you!

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  15. Smitaji...TIG what a wonderful story. Loved every character very much. Mahietta's Ammu and their beautiful journey, from loneliness to their togetherness. Their feelings and respect for each other. Two beautiful ladies and their efforts to bring M n A 's together. Loved this story very much. Would love to read more n more stories.

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  16. Waiting for the update my dear

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  17. Woah!!! The Spanish Inquisition by Angry ASR... Nani is in for a big shock!!!

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  18. Hi Smitaji, sorry for asking this stupid question, but wanted to clarify - Is Anjali married in this story?

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    1. No..ha..ha.. This story has enough problems without us having to deal with Snake too.

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    2. Thank you for not having to deal with the snake...

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  19. Oh Smita
    How you like to leave us dangling at the edge of the cliff!!!
    Would have loved to see NaNiji when Arnav was concerned over a lowly maid Khushi.

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  20. wow another super nice update.. cool cool as ever.. and now am dreading what he will do after hearing everything from nani in her point if view.. hehehehe... please update soon.

    And your book was so lovely di that i read already a couple of times.. though it started of in little sad way but the way you depicted their emotions were out of the world.. loved it totally. i thank god for introducing you to me. seriously you are a boon.. thanks for the book and will be waiting for the next one.

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  21. Next update will be dramatic big time!! Can so hear ASR's tune in the background for THAT!! Nani's going to get it now!! Fireworks πŸ’₯ will blast from the roof of Shantivan!! πŸŽ‰πŸŽŠ GO ASR! Defend your lady! Loving Buaji in this fic of yours! So amazing.

    Now for book review: what can I say that hasn't already been said?! You've captured my heart again with your story. Pehle Meenu, then Gauri, then the Rajkumari (forgotten her name sorry) and now Sree! And your heroes keep getting better and better! I don't know much about the South Indian culture, but you've taught me so much from your stories. The traditions, the rituals and the festivities! Galore! They all sound amazing. Thank you for a great lesson in your culture! Love how Mahi didn't stop her from growing up independently and let her grew into her own self. Most guardians would focus on having their wards at home, safe and sound but not Mahi. He stepped aside and let her learn how to live her own way. I also loved the two women; his mother and aunt. Such forces against the evilness of her Mama-Mami (selfish lot they are!) Sree tackled them well too. All in all, fabulous story and looking forward for the next one whenever that is.

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  22. Volcano about to burst open on Nani... nice update..

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  23. Arnav knows that khushi has left because of his nani. He is sure that his nani would not tell him the truth if he asked. Also khushi is not willing to be him the truth.

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  24. Ab aaya camlewa moutainwa ke under....brilliant but too short.

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  25. Just deposited the money and have sent you the email

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  26. Hi Smita. I loved the update. Oh cannot wait for ASR to explode! Pleaaasssse give us another update soon. It is really hard to wait so long in anticipation of the explosion. It would be so cool if Nani ended up forcing ASR to realize his feelings for Khushi much earlier than his emotionally challenged brain would normally be capable of!

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  27. Loved the update. Arnav using his brain on finding out why Khushi has disappeared. Looks like Arnav nani collision to happen. Eager for the next part.

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  28. Hey Smita Chechi,
    I just saw the post about Indulgent Guardian. Is it your new book? I would like to purchase it. Please let me know what to do. It is said to pay before August 15. I didn't knew about it.

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