Part 9
Arnav looked up as Anjali pushed open
the door and entered his room. She had a tray in her hand.
He frowned as he stood up, took the
tray from her and placed it on the laptop table.
Where was Khushi?
He had been looking forward to
spending more time with her.
His spine tingled. His intuition
warned him against an instinctive, impulsive reaction. Something was going on
here. Something serious. Or his di wouldn’t be caught dead doing housework.
“Why are you here, di?” he asked,
taking care to keep his voice mellow and tone disinterested. “You must have
found the steps difficult. You should have sent the tea with HP or Khushi.”
Anjali blinked.
Chotey sounded very casual,
almost...bored. Nani couldn’t be right. Chotey was a Raizada. He would never
lower himself to take interest in a dehati, anpad, poverty-stricken maid, that
too from Lucknow.
She heaved a sigh of relief. Yeh nani
bhi na! She was going senile.
“Yes, the steps were troublesome,”
Anjali admitted, “but nani asked me to serve you.”
Arnav tensed. Nani!
He turned away
from Anjali to hide his furious face.
Thankfully his phone rang that very
moment and he moved out of the room to talk to Aman.
Anjali left the room.
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Arnav came down for dinner, his
watchful eyes on his nani who seemed more dismayed than delighted that her
reclusive grandson was willing to join his family for a meal.
Before nani could order HP that he
serve dinner and Khushi be kept away from the dining room, Khushi entered the
dining hall and began to set the table.
Arnav quickly took his seat.
Pretending to look at his phone, he watched his family.
Mama, mami and Akash
had no idea what was going on. Nani seemed very upset. Di was trying to calm
her down with speaking glances.
Khushi began setting gold-rimmed
plates before each family member gathered around the table, delighted that
Arnavji was becoming more human and spending time with his family.
As she reached Arnav, he called
loudly, clearly, “Khushi?”
All faces turned to look at him, with
varying expressions of enquiry and panic.
“I need a glass of warm water,” he
said mildly, a smile in his eyes that only Khushi could see. “After dinner.”
She smiled and said, “Ji.” She moved
away and Arnav pretended to check his mail while watching his family.
Mama,
mami and Akash were totally relaxed, laughing at a joke mami had cracked.
Di
looked relieved.
Nani had a waxen complexion.
Arnav watched closely as nani picked
at her food and sat silently at the table, pensive and brooding.
HP and Khushi
served the dishes efficiently, working as a team.
The mystery unravelled after dinner,
when Arnav joined them in the living room.
Khushi came in with a glass of warm
water and placed it on the table before him.
He nodded his thanks. She walked
away.
He looked at his nani to catch her
looking at him. She looked away hastily. He looked at the display of his phone.
Mami lifted her legs with a contented
sigh and sat cross legged on her plush chair. She told mama, “And I told Mrs.
Mehta, you may be Dilli’s booty princesswaa, but I am Lucknow’s booty queenwaa,
hello hi bye bye.”
Mama chuckled. Akash and Anjali
smiled.
HP placed a glass of warm milk with
saffron in it before mami and left.
She took it with a cry of pleasure
and began slurping it, uttering words of appreciation in between.
As Arnav watched, nani’s face turned
dark with displeasure. With contempt, she admonished, “Are you a child, Manorama?
Act your age and position.”
Mami stopped slurping and stared at her
mother-in-law, her painted eyes wide in surprise.
Mama, Akash and Anjali looked at nani
and then at mami, uncomfortable. The air in the room became tense. Unsaid and
old resentment and complaints filled the room.
Arnav watched closely.
Mami’s eyes fell first. She placed the
half-full glass on the tray, threw a vicious glance at her helpless husband and
got up to leave.
Nani leaned back, triumphant.
“Sit down, mami. You haven’t finished
your milk,” Arnav said quietly.
All stared at him, shocked.
Mami sagged back in her chair, more
out of amazement that Arnav had spoken than a desire to sit with the family.
Arnav addressed the elephant in the
room. “Nani, mami came to your house to work as a maid. Mama fell in love with
her,” he said.
“Chotey, bas keejiye,” nani
thundered.
But he was Arnav Singh Raizada, a
bulldozer, an unstoppable train, a typhoon that uprooted the very foundation of
pretense and deceit.
“After months of raising a furore
over what you saw as mama’s disgrace, his ingratitude and thanklessness towards
his family and his open rebellion against the tenets of your family, you and nana
agreed to the marriage. You conducted the marriage in as private a manner as possible
with ill will in your heart. You didn’t want her as your daughter-in-law and expected
the marriage to fall apart, given the differences between mama and mami. But
their relationship endured. It has been twenty-eight years, but you still think
of mami as beneath you. You still think her a usurper, an intruder, an unwanted
part of the family.” His tone was flat, his voice quiet, but the words were
firmly spoken and completely meant.
Akash’s eyes glistened with tears as
he looked at his superhero bhai defending his mother.
Tears poured down mami’s cheeks,
wetting and spreading the inches of makeup she had piled on. Her kajal was,
unfortunately, not waterproof.
“Bas karo, Manno,” mama said softly,
patting mami’s hand and trying to console her.
“You are crossing the limits, Chotey,”
nani warned.
“Chotey, tum chup raho,” Anjali
pleaded.
But Arnav wasn’t done. In a mellow
conversational tone, he continued, “You married off your daughter to a
well-to-do, respected family living in one of the biggest havelis in Lucknow.”
“No, Chotey,” Anjali implored.
“Arnav bitwaa, bhy speak of old
tragedies?” mami tried to stop him from self-flagellation.
But Arnav continued, “And how did
that go?”
He waited for nani to respond. She
remained silent.
He went on, “That marriage succeeded
so spectacularly that they both died in the worst ways possible, their children
had to change their names and run away from Lucknow and the Mallik name has
become synonymous with debauchery and infidelity.”
He met nani’s eyes directly. “Mami
stepped into our mother’s place. And she gave me her entire cache of jewellery
so that i could start a business. I can and will never forget her kindness,” he
said quietly.
“Arnav bitwaa,” mami protested.
“She stood with us when the whole world
laughed at us and rejoiced in our fall. You might remember that the next time
you are tempted to rebuke her for not being born a Raizada,” he reminded nani.
Satisfied that he had made his point
loud and clear, he walked away.
YOU GO, ARNAV BITWA.
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ReplyDeleteNice! Love the way Arnav knew right away that something was amiss when Anjali walked in with his tea and the way he voiced his discontent and his defense of Mami all at once.
ReplyDeleteYaay ... you go Arnav
ReplyDeletewow! Super Arnav Raizada. That was dhamakedaar!!!!
ReplyDeleteThat is Arnav Singh Raizada....shafir dimaag wala....He smelled what is going on and addressed the elephant in the room.....hopefully nani got her lesson...Awesome chapter
ReplyDeleteSuperb... Mere paas shabd nahi hai... ASR ki taareef karne ke liye. Amazing update.
ReplyDeleteASR ki tareef ya Smitaji ki? 😉
DeleteSmitaji for her writing skills. And ASR for using the famed shatir dimag in full throttle.
DeleteWoww.. what a speech by Arnav😍😍
ReplyDeletewoowww .....simply wowwww. words are not enough for your potrayal of stories.awesome
ReplyDeleteGO ASR!! 🎉🎊🎉🎊👉🏻👉🏻 Way to defend Mami-ji and point out to Nani her incorrect behaviour all at one time! Trust you to solve everything in one go! Kitna shatir hain, kitna mast hain! Hai 😊😊 yeh ASR bhi na...he'll make a fine husband no Khushi??
ReplyDeleteI love you ASR. thats the 1st thing I felt after reading this awesome part. Superb update.
ReplyDeletewow wonderful update.. Arnav nailed nani so superbly.. his sister with his coffee in his room and ASR got to know there is something wrong happening and thus he took wonderful care of nani and passed on the message to her loud and clear.. waiting to see what nani does next? she learns or will infuriate Arnav... Love Arnav.. he was outstanding..
ReplyDeleteI must confess that the story is an unusual take on Nani nd Khushi's dynamics...and has me v intrigued....loved the way Arnav defended his mami ... deviant should have known better knowing what kind of person Arnav was.....he would not take crap lying down... loved his loyalty to his mami and his disregard for Nani's fixation with status... table turned eh? Usually it would be Arnav who is bothered about status... loving the story!
ReplyDeleteWow... loved the update. It rocked....fabulous writing.
ReplyDeleteArnav is very sharp.... he has perfectly understood what his nani and di are up to.
Wow,nailed it perfectly.that is ASR in action
ReplyDeleteI have always seen Mami as the loud, eccentric, over the top, sarcastic lady that she was portrayed to be. But hats off to you, Smita for presenting to us the Mami we never saw. It was all in front of me, but I never chose to see, until today. Despite her nonchalant demeanor, Mami has always been fond of her nephew. And she expressed her love when & where it mattered the most. She was truly a mother figure to Arnav when he needed one desperately. If not for her and her trust in Arnav, AR would probably not be where it is today. She probably loves him & Anjali as much as she loves Aakash, if not more. I also loved the way you pointed out the differences between the "ideal" and "unconventional" marriages in the Raizada family. I would have loved to see Arnav stand up for his mami like this in the real show!
ReplyDeleteSorry got a little carried away. Coming back to our temperamental tyrant...it was nice to see Arnav having the upper hand in the game that Nani is trying to play. I loved how Arnav was observing everything so casually and making mental notes for future actions. I think this story is unique in it's own way for multiple reasons. One...Nani is not the sweet old lady who we have come to love, two...Arnav is not the devoted Chote who couldn't find any fault in his Di, if his life dependent on it and three...he has early on made peace with the fact that Khushi is his only solace. Now that's a different thing that he hasn't said so (even to himself) in many words. The only thing that remains constant is Khushi who is as always blissfully unaware of the silent tsunami that she is causing in the Raizada family. It will be interesting to see how this story moves forward and experience Arnav & Khushi's love blossoming for each other <3
Wow that was super awesome. Loved ASR's shatir haridwar trained dimaag that sensed reason behind Anjali coming to serve immediately.
ReplyDeleteThe Nani-ASR convo ekdam epic... Loved it. Looking forward to next part...
Smitaji absolute salutations to your brains for coming up with this story... Hats off
What an awesome speech by Arnav
ReplyDeleteLoved the update. Arnav showed nani some home truths regards her thoughts and ideals. Eager for the next part.
ReplyDeleteOoh la la, monsieur ASR!! Haridwar education shining through!! Lage raho, Hotwa!!
ReplyDeleteQuite a classy comeback by arnav.. that was the mighty ASR on roll.. cool way to write.. i love your thoughts anita di.. waiting already for the next one.. hope arnav opens up yt kushi soon
ReplyDeleteHis desire to spend more time with Khushi was so cute. His observations is bang on. Loved the way he put his views.
ReplyDeleteAnjali is not so important in Arnav's life in this fiction. Is she timid ?
Awesome part.
Love n hugs.
OMG!! I was too tense when I saw the update. What was Naniji going to do? I read it in such a rush. Now I'm going to read it again. Am already gaga over ASR. Now even more so. Muaahhh for such a fabulous update.
ReplyDeleteAwesome update!! Love the diplomatic approach of Arnav is letting Nani know to treat everyone with respect. Mami deserves that respect for the way she protect Arnav and Anjali as her own.
ReplyDeleteLoving the way you have approached this story. Looking forward to see how Arnav is going to convince Khushi for their love.
Just caught up with the story...and as usual you write a captivating, heart-warming narrative! I was taken back to days of reading Saving Khushi, Knowing Khushi etc. I loved each one of those tales.
ReplyDeleteI liked the twist in the tale- Nani is the villain here, no Shyam no Dadi, which is such an interesting twist cos I always think of Nani as a sweet old woman who loved her Khushi bitiya. Khushi is adorable as usual, and completely selfless in her concern for Arnav. I loved the way Arnav assessed his feelings and reaction to Khushi.
While I know we all feel that Nani is being cruel and unfair, and its fiction, I can't help think how would I react or how many parents would react if we were in Nani's shoes. I am not sure how happy my parents would have been or how accepting would I be if their /my son decided to marry the domestic help, and I think I am fairly liberal and free thinking :-) Hmm..food for thought.
I definitely do not see them being very happy about it, so I can't completely vilify Nani. While this sounds classist and horrible, the truth is that Nani is not an exception and, hand on heart, I wonder how many of us would happily and willingly accept something like this in our homes. But this is fiction and that too involving our much loved Arnav and Khushi and I am waiting to see love triumph all!! And Khushi is just so adorable, you cannot help but fall in love with her!
Sadly India does not have dignity of labour and we are conditioned by our environment to register and accept these differences. Though sometimes, I also think we tend to romanticize overcoming the differences - because once the initial euphoria settles, and reality sets in, then you may find that huge differences exist between the two partners which have nothing to do with money or status – it is the difference in their thinking, the way they have been brought up and how they interact with their environment. Not to say that it does not work, but it requires a lot adjustment and work on part of both the partners. And that happens in any case even between two people who come from the same background, it just gets exacerbated when there is a huge chasm between them. But we all live in hope, and hopefully love triumphs all
Interesting point. I agree, maybe Nani isn't quite wrong in looking out for her grandson. But I think her intentions are not noble. His Nani & Di don't really bother about him, like they did in the show. He slogs for them, but they don't even seem to spare him few minutes of the day to talk to him or sit with him while he has his lunch/dinner. His surprise at Anjali bringing him tea shows how detached his family is from him. It's not that he makes it easy for them to bear him with his temperamental mood. But my point is, Nani's refusal seems to have some ulterior motive. It's not just a case of Arnav marrying their domestic help. But to your point, in real life Nani's objection wouldn't have received too much criticism :-)
DeleteTrue that.... it appears that Nani and Di are very caught up in being and living the Raizadas... Arnav is a solitary figure... and its important to note that he thinks of Mami and not Nani as the mother figure in his life...
DeleteAnd notwithstanding my thoughts above, I am, like everyone else, waiting for Arnav and Khushi to fall in love and triumph against Nani's prejudices :-)
ReplyDeleteLol. I agree with your sentiment regarding all of it. But one thing that stuck out in the show and here is that even though ASR is a bulldozer and not the easiet to get along with, he never tries to change anyone in action or thought. He lets people be as they are. He didn’t try to change Nani, Anjali, Lavanya or even Khushi. Each of them tried to change him. The only difference being that Khushi was very much like him. Her strong will and love for her family along with of course the mutual attraction between them was very apparent. Initially she may have tried to change him in the show, but her acceptance of just who he was and his acceptance of her thoughts- even though they disagreed- provided the foundation of respect and friendship.
ReplyDelete👏👏 very well said.
DeletePunch without punching hats off arnav bitwa
ReplyDeletei had to comment, Arnav was a force to behold, he was magnificient
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ReplyDeleteThis chapter is sooooo good. Nani may be Nani but ASR is ASR. I'm glad he stood up to her and showed her the mirror, she needs a massive wake up call about who is responsible for the unhappiness of the home she is living in.
ReplyDeleteNani is a real bully in this story, trying to control everyone and everything as per her whims, enjoying her little cruelties and manipulations to assuage her panic at the loss of control. In fact, that extreme desire to be in control at all times is a trait Arnav inherited (and which intensified in both due to the tragedies they faced).
The difference between them is, ASR has the greatest contempt for dishonesty and lies. I loved that line about how he is so good at cutting right to the heart of the matter, he cuts through all the deceit, because he hates such things, and he knows people like Nani on the other hand like such matters to remain all convoluted, all the intense resentments to be half-hidden so that it's easy to gaslight the victims by denying accountability for the cruelty you inflict. But ASR ain't gonna let you get away with that!
The relationship between Nani and Mami is so painful, even in the show I felt bad for Mami and here the way you have depicted their relation is very realistic. Nani has a huge ego, a great need for external validation from society, and both these were shaken up by events of the past from which she has not recovered or learned anything, choosing instead to double down on her need for control. Instead of self-reflecting on her role in the events of the past and trying to learn from her mistakes, she has easily proportioned the blame onto the external factors as well as "outside" people who, in her eyes, are the snakes in the garden of eden. That way, she gets to maintain her giant ego and avoid having to deal with the terrible pain of remorse, true remorse, which she knows is waiting for her if she acknowledges her own mistakes and flaws rather than blaming others. But just because you deny or avoid a painful emotion or damning piece of self-knowledge, it doesn't mean it actually goes away or stops festering inside you. It's all waiting to catch up with you, and the longer you deny, the more pain you will be in when you finally open your eyes!
Then there's Anjali, who retreated into a child like state to deal with the overwhelmingly sordid and terrifying realities around her. She can take zero responsibilities on her head, emotional or practical. She prioritizes "don't rock the boat" over anything else, and has zero capacity to take a stand for any of her loved ones. Such are the people who watch an abusive relationship play out in front of them, never taking a step to help the victim, and then go and weep buckets at the victim's funeral, wailing about how sad it is that this happened.
There are so many poisonous, unhealed wounds in the psyche of this family, lending a dreadful stink to the seemingly "happy family" facade the Raizadas present. And Arnav is finally healing enough to want to put an end to the charades, to try to squeeze the poison out of the wound, even if the process painful as hell. And of course Khushi is the motivation, he is keen to protect her from the nastiness of his relations and is maybe unconsciously taking steps towards a future with her.
I love how you have taken the characters' flaws, which we got hints of in the show but were largely unexplored, and expanded on them to show how twisted they can get. IPK spent a lot of time exploring Arnav's character, showing us the layers of his psychology and how he heals from his trauma, but all of the characters in the show had layers and depth, shades of grey, that could be explored, especially Nani, Mami, and Anjali. It's not Arnav alone who is stuck in the past and has trauma that turned ugly and hurts others. It's all of them.
Wish ASR used his harvard brain in the show too....and dealt with manipulators aka his family ASRish way
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